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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
shikha really a nice poem
through this poem we comes to know about the truth and the realities of life
its amazing
i just loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vi1772843271_nc

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="6">shikha really a nice poem</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="6">through this poem we comes to know about the truth and the realities of life</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="6">its amazing</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="6">i just loved it</font>


Thankuu soo much natasha... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: riyataarey

Waw yaar itna achha kaise lika
mjhe tohpoem ka o bhi nhi aata
nice poen loved it...


Muje bhi nahi pata riya...mai to taarey par story likne baithi thi...bt galti se poem likh di 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Fam_TaaReY-

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">res/unres</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">awesome poem Shikha👏</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and it's true👏</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and this stanza is just out of the world</font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Sometimes we look behind and just recall the past
And remember the mistakes we have done so far
Sometimes we cry and regret our deeds
But till the end there still remains a scar
</font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">amazing👏</font>


Thankuu sooo much dear...lovely comment n thanx for mentioning d stanza!! 😃 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

Thanxx dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Thankxx dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
very nice! we loved it!😃
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Originally posted by: aditya.anjali

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="3">very nice! we loved it!😃</font>


Thanku soo much aditya n anjali 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
first of all a big and tight hug to dedicate me this 🤗i love u a lot

coming to poem its awesome dear i loved it so much

Sometimes we are stuck
Between the right and the wrong
Sometimes we make mistakes
But to realize we take too long

[ it make me remind my school time when i fought with one of my bes frnd and later i realize that mistake is mine but yeah its too late she already left the school😭😭]

Sometimes we break the trust
Of the one's we love the most
Sometimes we hurt d people
For whom we care the most

[ aww it again remind a one incident where i hurt my mom so much i m sorry mom for that 😭😭]

Sometimes we look behind and just recall the past
And remember the mistakes we have done so far
Sometimes we cry and regret our deeds
But till the end there still remains a scar

[ this para are fabulous mind blowing , outstanding its so true whenever i recall my past i thought how many mistake i done ]

Never let these sometimes affect you everytime
Cuz life's too short to regret and cry
Life is nothing without these sometimes
So put on a smile n to make others happy u should try!!!
😊 KEEP SMILING😊

[ yeah its another fact that life is not stop for anyone hamesha agge badti rehti hai or aage badne ka nam hi life hai 😆😆]

in short i loved that poem , its too heart touchy and perfectly describe the facts of life 👏👏👏


keep writing 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: --taareylove---

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">first of all a big and tight hug to dedicate me this🤗i love u a lot</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">coming to poem its awesome dear i loved it so much</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4"> Sometimes we are stuck
Between the right and the wrong
Sometimes we make mistakes
But to realize we take too long
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">
[ it make me remind my school time when i fought with one of my bes frnd and later irealizethat mistake is mine but yeah its too late she already left the school😭😭]
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">
Sometimes we break the trust
Of the one's we love the most
Sometimes we hurt d people
For whom we care the most
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">
[ aww it again remind a one incident where i hurt my mom so much i m sorry mom for that😭😭]
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">
Sometimes we look behind and just recall the past
And remember the mistakes we have done so far
Sometimes we cry and regret our deeds
But till the end there still remains a scar
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">
[ this para arefabulousmind blowing,outstandingits so true whenever i recall my past i thought how many mistake i done ]
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4"><font>
Never let these sometimes affect you everytime
Cuz life's too short to regret and cry
Life is nothing without these sometimes
So put on a smile n to make others happy u should try!!!</font>
😊KEEP SMILING😊
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">[ yeah its another fact that life is not stop for anyone hamesha agge badti rehti hai or aage badne ka nam hi life hai😆😆]</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">in short i loved that poem , its too heart touchy and perfectly describe the facts of life👏👏👏</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">
</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">keep writing👍🏼</font>



Awww...yashi luv u too dear 🤗
Itna ache comment ke liye thankuuu sooo much...emotional hi kar diya yaar...u know khushi ke aasu 😆
Glad dat u liked it so much...n my lines made u remind ur school days...was it dat gud 😳
Vaise guess wat...dis smiling wala msg muje tumne hi diya...dont think too much...ur status of smile inspired me!! 😆
Biiig walaa hug for dis ossom comment!! 🤗 😃

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