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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: shikha1997



Awww...yashi luv u too dear 🤗
Itna ache comment ke liye thankuuu sooo much...emotional hi kar diya yaar...u know khushi ke aasu 😆
Glad dat u liked it so much...n my lines made u remind ur school days...was it dat gud 😳
Vaise guess wat...dis smiling wala msg muje tumne hi diya...dont think too much...ur status of smile inspired me!! 😆
Biiig walaa hug for dis ossom comment!! 🤗 😃


omg shikha😲😲 you know me so well tumhe pata tha ki mai jarur sochungi 😆😆how i gave you smilie wala msg😆😆 ohkk so my status give you inspiration and your poen gave inspiration to me😃😃, aww hug you to dear🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
ossom dear... well done...
pls keep writing more and more...
👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
my sweet heart cupcake u liteally stole my heart through dis poem i mean i just loved it yr i dont know how much i love it yr di u know me sorry 4 beong late but litereally it was so sweet n yr plzz write more n do post plzz👏👏 really appretiated
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: shanya8

<font size="4">my sweet heart cupcake u liteally stole my heart through dis poem i mean i just loved it yr i dont know how much i love it yr di u know me sorry 4 beong late but litereally it was so sweet n yr plzz write more n do post plzz👏👏really appretiated</font>


Gosh...shanu...itni jyaada taareef naa karo...muje sharam aa rahi hai. 😳 N nice name...cupcake...will pakka write more...thanxx alot 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: hima_taarey

ossom dear... well done...

pls keep writing more and more...
👏


Thanku soo much di!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Hey Shikha...
Awesome poem... Keep writing more...!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Sometimes we look behind and just recall the past
And remember the mistakes we have done so far
Sometimes we cry and regret our deeds
But till the end there still remains a scar

Awesome lines and my fav too...Especially the last one!!!

And yea..
Life is nothing without these sometimes
So put on a smile n to make others happy u should try!!!
Yaar these lines are really really good...
Just go on with your creative works...
And keep writing whatever peeps in your mind...
All the best...
Love Nithi😊
Yea thanks for the dedication too!!...:):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: nithi_newlife

Sometimes we look behind and just recall the past
And remember the mistakes we have done so far
Sometimes we cry and regret our deeds
But till the end there still remains a scar


<font color="#0000ff">Awesome lines and my fav too...Especially the last one!!!</font>

And yea..
Life is nothing without these sometimes
So put on a smile n to make others happy u should try!!!
<font color="#0000ff">Yaar these lines are really really good...</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Just go on with your creative works...</font>
<font color="#0000ff">And keep writing whatever peeps in your mind...</font>
<font color="#0000ff">All the best...</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Love Nithi😊</font>
<font color="#0000ff">Yea thanks for the dedication too!!...:):)</font>


Aww...thanku sooo much nithi...n glad dat u liked it n even mentioned ur fav lines!!
Will keep writing more... 😳 🤗...n ty once again for calling my works creative 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
I loved the poem.😳😃 This poem relates to my life.
Sometimes we look behind and just recall the past
And remember the mistakes we have done so far
Sometimes we cry and regret our deeds
But till the end there still remains a scar

Never let these sometimes affect you everytime
Cuz life's too short to regret and cry
Life is nothing without these sometimes
So put on a smile n to make others happy u should try!!!

😊 KEEP SMILING😊
i loved the above lines a lot.keep writing more dear.Your poem was awesome.👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: lakshluvsD3nHHL

<font size="3">I loved the poem.😳😃This poem relates to my life.</font>

<font size="3">Sometimes we look behind and just recall the past
And remember the mistakes we have done so far
Sometimes we cry and regret our deeds
But till the end there still remains a scar

Never let these sometimes affect you everytime
Cuz life's too short to regret and cry
Life is nothing without these sometimes
So put on a smile n to make others happy u should try!!!
</font>
😊KEEP SMILING😊
<font size="3">i loved the above lines a lot.keep writing more dear.Your poem was awesome.👏👏</font>


Thanku soo much dear for dis lovely comment 🤗...n d lines u mentioned...i never thought ki sabko ye lines itni pasand aayengi 😳..thanxx 😃

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