OS:DESTINY-Truth of life 19/07/2013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sinalbest
Nice one..👏👏

Thanks a lot.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: bpatil3
Emotional n Touchy.
Aksar chup rehne se baat na karne se bahut kuch bigad jaata hai, par at last destiny will plat its role.
nicely described. Its touchy.

Thank u patil, yes chup rehnese bat bigad to jati he but kv kv ese situations ate hen hum chahke bhi kuch bolnahi pate wo destiny he.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
wow!
beautiful story. loved every bit of it.👏
kahi baar mann ki baat bol dene se bahut kuch roka jaa sakta hai.
in ur os ekagrah ek achhe dosth ki tarah saamne aaya.
loved the last one jahan raya ne ekagrah ko phir se zinda kar diya. bachhe ko ekagrah ka naame dekar.
expecting more from u.

:- request next time use bigger fonds and small small paras.

Thank u Sandhya,yes me pakgaya tha real balh me itne evils dekh dekh ke so thought ki apne story me evils ko jgh hi na dun.Am glad u expect more from me,i did not expect u people will like my OS's this much.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: 123fiza1
Awesome
it touched to my hearth...
lovely...
entire part was nicely described...
ekagra is such a nice person...
its the game of destiny which made raya together after all barriers ❤️

Thank u fiza for liking it am glad it touched to ur heart,it means a lot to me.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
its very touchy, yes I believe everything is predestined in this world, if something is in your destiny you will get that, how much pain or problem u may go through, nice story, good concept and well written, do continue writing such stuffs👏

Thanks jinee.Dost mene isbar kisi ko bhi pm nahi ki he actually mera net prob tha to post karne ke bad net kat hogaya tha uske bad aj aya hun.Next time pakka karunga.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: vironikajain
Very emotional nd touchy one..nice story.. 👏
Whatever it is ppl should always talk nd everything will be fine soon rest destiny always plays its own game..
Beautifull nd very well written..

Thanks vironika,yes u r right ppl should talk but destiny also plays a vital role in ur life.

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sandhya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: jeena1993

Thank u Sandhya,yes me pakgaya tha real balh me itne evils dekh dekh ke so thought ki apne story me evils ko jgh hi na dun.Am glad u expect more from me,i did not expect u people will like my OS's this much.

I like it. please continue ur ff work also. expecting more os from u😊

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RghtMndLftBrain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Haven't read your stuff but am wondering about the title. Life has a lot more truths than love between a man and a woman.

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awww awesome & touchy update dear i really loved the whole consept its so true when we love we should to speak out before it gets too late... but i guess destiny has dicded everything for everyone j it play its role waisly destiny knows everything & with time it falls everything on its correct place... i completly loved this one TFS awesome update do write some more...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: RghtMndLftBrain
Haven't read your stuff but am wondering about the title. Life has a lot more truths than love between a man and a woman.

Yes u r right,life has much more truth,difficulty,tenssion,and many more things than love.And i implicate them in my FF-HUMSUFER,but in my OS's i dont want to iclude them,because os is very short for that type of imotions,u can not impicate them all in one phase,they need perffect description with much time,and i want to give readers some relaxed lovable time while reading not tenssion of life.

This is all my pov.U may agree or not.

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