Virman SS----Bachpan ki Dosti COMPLETED Note pg 36 - Page 26

Originally posted by: nisha_virman

awesome update

loved the end

thanks for the pm

Hey Nimi,

So sorry for not commenting for so long, so long overdue, but I still have to comment, hopes this makes up for everything. 😉

This line from Chapter 11 is beautiful, and it shows that you write from the heart. Kudos for that! "You have my entire heart, not just half of it, why would I give you half a heart to symbolize that then? My heart has always been with you and I want it to stay with you because I have no room for it with me" This is why I love this story, it shows pure love and his words actually express it.

In Chapter 12, Manvi's selfless love was portrayed just perfectly. I don't even know how to put it in words. Amazing. I am so glad that their family accepted their relationship, and when he put the ring back on I was just like .. awww!! Virika was so cute here when Viren was comforting her. That update was the perfect way of showing how unconditional love actually is <3👍🏼

Chapter 13: He called her 'meri Pari'!!! OH MY GOD!!🥳 That was sooo cute! Haii!! And the way he just won't leave her hand till the last second . I officially award the JeeMan bonding in this story, the top JeeMan bonding, it's so beautiful! Thank God! So glad that she wants to get married properly. Their romance makes me blush! You write so well. When they wanted to stay cuddling like that, it made me wish I was in a relationship as well for a second and then I was nooo too much work.😆😛

Chapter 14: Hahahaha.. That''s just the most cutest thing in the world... he picked her up to take her to the ghat.☺️ How thoughtful of Virat to propose to her. Me and Manvi both left in awe by Viru's gesture. I loved the engagement .. Virika and VirMan romance was so cute <3

Chapter 15: Shaadi ke pehle ki shararat?🤣 I fell of my sofa laughing!! What was that?! The texts were just so cute! I can just imagaine Virat's reaction, and Mannu didn't even know! I can't believe they started making out in front of Jeevika! This is your best update ! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!! 🤣❤️ This is one of the best updates I have ever read. I couldn't stop laughing yaar. VirIka's embarrassment and VirMan's shararat. It was word for word perfect! I can say this a million times Nimi.. I love this update!!!!!!!!!!!❤️

Chapter 16: First of all, you need to know this, after reading your story, I really want someone like Virat in my life. You have made this Virat, more charming than Prince Charming! Shlok and Manvi's rishta is so cute in this. It's nice to see a devar-bhabhi other than Virat-Jeevika. Hmm.. the emotional fight over Manvi.. aww. Loved this update as well <3

Chapter 17: Both the VV brothers were so cute in this update. The way they were just waiting for the wedding day, their feeling were so perfectly portrayed. Another amazing chapter,

Chapter 18: Such an amazing finale. VirMan finally settled into their lives <3 What is really awesome is the fact that there's still the same love and Virat doesn't want to share Manvi even with his child. It was a perfect story with a perfect happily ever after 😳

Overall, the entire story is just beautiful. The VirMan romance and the different moments that you added just made it perfect. There were so many parts of this story that I loved, and best of all it shows that you wrote in from your heart. You have great writing potential and I mean it 👏

Finally, I am SO SO SO SO SORRY for paka-ing you. You must be really bored! But this amazing piece of work just has to be accredited. Thank You so much for such an amazing piece of work!⭐️

I really hope to read more of your works soon! You're a great writer. 🤗❤️

Love You <3

-Aliyah