FF: Hired Husband Epilogue on Pg 90

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi Guys ,
I thought I will start another ff but it will be a short one...
Jai walia
he is 33 years. He is a financial adviser. He is one of best..tiger in his field. He works for money. he is ruthless and don't care for anyone

Bani Dixit
She is 20. she is care free. she always gets what she want because her father is damn rich..she is spoiled brat..šŸ˜† one might say...but innocent like a child but stubborn like a mule..has a BA degree

Aditya Dixit
Bani's uncle...Bani's mother's brother..always very protective of Bani...
Aditya has 2 kids...Saahil and Ranveer....Jigsaya is aditya's wife

Scene1
At the church
Only few are sitting. Priest annouces to bring the bride.... Aditya accompanies Bani to the altar. Bani looked at the man..satnding there at the altar..it is not her dream man..she wants to marry some yound guys....not an old man who is 13 years older than her...Bani thought I will never be able to look at my self in the mirror..I hate my life...why god...you always gave me what I like...but when it comes to marriges what matters to me most in my life why do I have to marry the man I hate.....why ??? Bani's body stiffened. She looked up.Aditya looked at her niece helplessly.... She saw him...He was there..smile trembling on his lips....Bani thought how could he smile? I hate him and this marrige is a payment for his work.....
Bani came to the altar..she has no sense of her future...he future was shattered and this is all because of this man
Priest: Do you Jai Walia...take Bani to be your lwafully wedded wife
Jai(blank yet stern voce): I do
Priest: Do you Bani take Jai Walia to be your husband
Bani:yeah... Bani looked at him with hatered in her eyes....I do
Priest: now I will prononce you man and wife you may kiss the bride
Jai came to kiss Bani on her lips...But Bani turned her face...and looked at him with pure hatered
BAni(full hatered emminating in her voice): don't dare to touch me
Jai(trying to be sarcastic innocent):but
BAni: If you do ..I will even get a court stay that you should never touch me with out my permission....
With that Bani Walked out of the altar to her car without her Hired Husband.
Part 14 pg 43
Part 15 Pg 47
Part 16 on Pg 50
Part 17 on Pg 55
Part 18 on Pg 58
Part 19 on Pg 62
Part 20 on Pg 65
Part 21 on Pg 69
part 22 on Pg 73
Part 23 on Pg 75
Part 24 on Pg 79
Part 25 on Pg 82

Part 26 on Pg 84.................Part 27(final chapter)pg 88

What do you guys think? Does it look good.šŸ˜› SHOULD I Continue
This is for all Bani loversšŸ˜‰ & of course Jai lovers😳

Edited by loka - 18 years ago

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GoodGoneWrong thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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interesting...so who is forcing her to marry Jai? i hope it is not her father...nice beginning..as usual :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Dear Loka,

Interesting start to ur ff!!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Jai as hired husband!!!! šŸ˜†

Bani is arrogant....!!!! šŸ˜›

Now this is going to be fun!!! šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰

Something on the line How to Tame a Shrew!!!! 😃

Cannot wait to read the next part!!!

Pls continue sooooooooooooooooon!!!

Love ur ffs!!!! 😃 😃 😃

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish


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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow interesting and different!

would definitely love for you to continue šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh yay!
another FF from you!
its awesome start!
continue soon!
loka thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rivya

interesting...so who is forcing her to marry Jai? i hope it is not her father...nice beginning..as usual :)


thanks for responding yaaaaaar ..no it is not her father...it's a surprise elementšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mk727272

Dear Loka,

Interesting start to ur ff!!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Jai as hired husband!!!! šŸ˜†

Bani is arrogant....!!!! šŸ˜›

Now this is going to be fun!!! šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰

Something on the line How to Tame a Shrew!!!! 😃

Cannot wait to read the next part!!!

Pls continue sooooooooooooooooon!!!

Love ur ffs!!!! 😃 😃 😃

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish



Thanks yaaaaaaaaaar ... Next part will be tomorrow morning...I thinkšŸ˜‰
loka thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaidahip

wow interesting and different!

would definitely love for you to continue šŸ‘ šŸ‘


Thanks yaar ..will došŸ˜›
loka thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: jigna_07

oh yay!
another FF from you!
its awesome start!
continue soon!


Thanks...this will be complete different from the other onešŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
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so far its great.. cant wait to read more in detail šŸ˜‰
Edited by kripa0521 - 18 years ago

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