Arshi FF:Over The Coffee chap10 pg41 6/7

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NISHI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

nice story...do continue soon...plz pm me next

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nisso

@nisso

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Tamara hello!

a beautiful story!👍🏼 👏

😊 Please, you can link to the blog?

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avni_barun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

feeling bad Arnav... 😭
awesome update...
continue soon...

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KrishVeer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Sorry for being late, but here is the comment for chapter 9😊 Hope you won't mind😃

First of all, I'm so glad that you decided to continue😉

Coming to the update, it was really nice.

Loved the way Khushi thought that it was her best friend who was trying to wake her up, instead of Arnav. And loved the way Arnav was concerned about Khushi after their first night together. And then the possessive side of Arnav was well relieved. Who needs another guy, when Mr.Raizada is there😉 Then the last part was scary. Poor Khushi. Why does Arnav want to leave her in the dark like that? Hope he will reveal the truth soon. And I so badly want Khushi to be with him, no matter how bitter the truth is😊

Thanks for the pm😃

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KrishVeer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Chapter 10 was an emotional update at first, but later it was really lovely😊

I'm really glad that Arnav decided to open up to Khushi. At first I thought he won't, but later he did. And the truth was far more bitter that I expected it to be. How can a mother be so low? Damn, I feel like the luckiest person in the whole world after reading the way how Arnav's mom treated him. I'm so glad that he got adopted by the Raizadas. But still he has the scars from his part, and I'm sure one day Khushi will help him to get rid of all the scars.

The way Khushi soothed Arnav by understanding him, and the way she promised to not leave him forever was really sweet of Khushi. And the sweet moments they shared together after that was really cute. Wondering what surprise will be up next

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter😉

Thanks for the pm😃

Update soon😆