PLANNED LIFE???(MG)#2 page 64 end part/21stJUL'13 - Page 33

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want to see geet out of coma and happy-with-maan
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hey chulbuli teri darsan nahi mil raha hai

red aal parts in one go yeah ur really wonderful writer and diff from all

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Part 19(last part)

Everything was set; Soon NT aka Geet was shifted to her home; doctor said that she had to be given a IV once a day; she will come back soon.

Many times Maan took her to the site with him, he planned the day with Brij; Brij would bring Geet to Delhi with him on every Sunday morning and then Maan would take her to the basti.

The basti people greeted her and pretended that she was alright; though deep inside they cried seeing their mentor like this. Geet would be seated on the wheel chair held in pace by a belt fastening.

The day came when the work was completed, many renowned persons were invited, and the inauguration was to be done by Geet.

Maan led her wheelchair to the entrance and held her hand holding the scissors to cut the ribbon, Mr. Buns stood by their side, and at sharp 10 am he whispered in Geet's ear "Now cut the ribbon dear, its high time you come back" and nodded to Maan

Maan pressed her hand and as he moved her hand forward to cut the ribbon, he felt her trembling hand; he was startled Mr. Buns understood and held Geet's other hand, they cut the ribbon and every one clapped and congratulated each other.

Maan quietly took Geet to the car and asked Brij to call the doctor.

B: what happen Maan?

M: she is responding

B: REALY!

M: Yes and the doctor had said that as her system is week she will need immediate medical attention

B: I am calling him, you drive ahead

Geet was admitted to the hospital, and under medical supervision and the love of her family and basti people and Maan and many more she recovered soon.

Soon Maan and Geet got married.

Agni took admission in medical college and Aarohi planned to be a fashion designer.

As time passed, Maaneet were blessed by 4 kids. And Manpreet-Prem had 2 kids and Myra-Yash also had one more to accompany Pari.

Epilogue

Today was the big day, today was the family cricket match.

If you remember you were introduced to Maan's family in part 1(B), he had a very big family.

The players were nephews and nieces of Maan and Geet, i.e., the sons and Daughters of their family.

And as Maan had always dreamed he was witnessing the cricket match between the family kids

All the relatives were sitting waiting for the match to start.

And finally the announcement was done by the commentator.

And can you guess who he was …. Yes Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, as Maanpreet said who can speak more than him; he was a complete chatter box.

I recently don't pm so check FB and IF pages to see if I have updated😉


so finally it ended without planning

hope you liked the story
so what you all have to say, 😉😆I planned a lot about this FF, but everything went against my plans.
😲first I planned to complete it soon but alas I could not
second I planned to make things smooth but here also things went unplanned
😕third I planned to make Maaneet happy but my writers brain did not allow me to
😆and many other unplanned things happened
🤢and in the end I could not even finish the story as planned and had to give the above part as per your demands
so what say readers can we plan anything? 😉
can we have a planned life???😆
but you all can do one thing please comment as much as you can, the readers who don't comment please you all also comment for the last time😉

please read it
and tell me how you find it

please long comments needed PLEASE
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