SWARON OS:the mirror - Page 5

Originally posted by: neeliyer

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there dance, there blissful life, the anniversary ritual, savera, swayam's death n finally sharon joining him .. there life in a mirror was really very very beautiful .. as there daughter savera (quite an unusual name, bt i kinda like it 😉) quoted they lived and died a fairytale .. and the os really had one of the most happiest ending ever, i just loved it .. the way u quote sentences yaar, i am a huge fan of tht ..

i knw im too late to comment but still better late than never .. n btw u thought this OS didn't went well, come on stop judging ur work, its us readers who need to do that, n what i knw for sure is it was blissfully beautiful ..

Keep Writing ..

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi

awesome os

loved the way sharon n den her daughter pov

that mirror was the one in front of whom the eternal love life story of swaron was reflected

loved this concept n brilliantly penned down

loved the last lines said by swaron daughter

"My dad and mom----swayam shekhawat---and Sharon raiprakash shekhawat lived, loved and died a fairytale."

thanx for the pm

keep writing