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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg I am just speechless..
it was just anazing..
it was totally amazing.. It was just beautiful and indeed just a perfect story a perfect fairytale..
I loved the concept..
beautifully penned down.. 👏
Amazing work!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A beautiful write up Medha. It had a very unique concept. I loved how the way u hav included mirror in the whole journey of SwaRon. The narration was wonderfully done. Written outstandingly. I loved how u included dance thruout the whole story. In happy tyms and also in the end dance stayed with dem. The ending was beautiful. Sharon following after Swayam death's. I luvd Savera's PoV in the end. A brilliantly written work. You have a beautiful style of storytelling.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: medhasarkar


oh thank you---well considering tuio besh hire hire typer----chal dujone goynar dokan dei.😉😆



gr8 idea...let it do asap🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

A beautiful write up Medha. It had a very unique concept. I loved how the way u hav included mirror in the whole journey of SwaRon. The narration was wonderfully done. Written outstandingly. I loved how u included dance thruout the whole story. In happy tyms and also in the end dance stayed with dem. The ending was beautiful. Sharon following after Swayam death's. I luvd Savera's PoV in the end. A brilliantly written work. You have a beautiful style of storytelling.


thank u so much...and dance is why we love swaron so much-----and as i was trying to write up their life---dance had to be in it----bcoz dance is their life😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Beautiful os...
Really adorable and emotional...
just loved it...
Beautifully penned down..
The way u potrayed the cherishing memories of swaron...
It was so touching that it made me cry...
Amazing concept..
👏 🤗 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

awesome dear... 😊

usually i dont like sad endings..but u hav really written it so wel...just loved it... 😊
loved d way you hav describe d emotions... 😊


even i dont like sad endings---but i'd like to call this fulfilment divya😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Beautiful concept..
true love always remains.. And seeeing that with closed ones is beyond a beautiful feel...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Medha this story brought tears to my eyes,,,the way you wrote it was jut beautiful I really do think you are gifted..please keep writing you are just amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha



undoubtedly she is a jewel ..so are u rumpu 🤗

sorry to intervene ..i can understand bengali..cant speak 😆



no dear...it's ok😛
awww...me jewel 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: damonTVDrocks

How dare you say it lame!!😡 Its a beautiful piece of work... The way you handled both the povs, it was awesome... You wrote their entire life down! Awesome... I don't see that writer's block anywhere!👏


damon gussa mat karo yaar----lame nahi bolungi---and thanks for the encouragement. i hope ki block jaldi chala jay😛

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