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MG SS ~DILRUBA~

PART 28



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Next MORNING In Handa HAVELI...
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Dadimaa called MR.HANDA: namaste mohindar beta.
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mohi: namaste savitri je... aap log kab aa rahe hain...
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dadi: bete hum bass thore der main sagun leke aa rahe hain
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mohi: SAGUN?
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dadi: Rista pakka karna hain toh sagun toh baanta hain na??
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mohi: bikul savitri ji... hum aapka intezar kar rahe hain...
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dadi: okk bete...
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...THEN HE CUT THE CALL...
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MOhindar: bete sab tayari ho gaye na?? MAAN bete aur savitri ji aate he honge...
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GEET: jee dad sab tyari ho gaye... main baas ready ho ke aate hu...
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mohi: ok bete... jaldi karo... 😊
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GEET went to his room to get ready...

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{ GEET'S dress}
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Sometime later MAAN & DADI came to HH with SAGUN...
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mohindar to dadi: namaste aaye..
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dadi: namaste bete...
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MAAN take blessing from mohindar... 😊
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mohi: kush raho bata...
... chaliye andar aaye ...
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dadi: GEET kaha hain???
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mohi : woh bass aate he hoge...
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...GEET CAME...
MAAN was amazed to see GEET in a beautiful dress with a simple make-up & lipstick ...😳
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When GEET saw MAAN was seeing her like this...
Her cheeks become red like tamato...
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geet came & take dadi's blessing...
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dadi: Aaye bete humare pass betheye...
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geet: jii dadi...
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dadi: mohindar bete Hume shadi ki bohot jaldi hain... kyun ki MAAN GEET ke bina reh he nahi sakta...
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mohi: GEET bhi kuch yahi hal hain, kyun gee??
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geet blushing 😳
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dadi: beta humne hamare pandit ji se pucha toh unho ne kaha do din baad bohot acha muhrat hain...
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mahi: sirf do din???😲
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dadi: bete eske baad do mahine tak koi muhrat nahi hain...
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MAAN & GEET togetherly: DO MAHINE??😲
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DADI & MOHINDAR smiles...
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dadi: dekha bete iss liye do din baad wala muhrat he behtar hain...
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mohi: par tayari??
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maan: dad main kal he kaha tha na... main sab dekh lunga... sirf aapke ha ki der hain...
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mohi: thik hain bete... agar GEET kush hain toh mujhe koi problem nahi hAIn...
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GEET: apko jesa sahe lage dad... 😊
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mohi: thik hain savitri ji DO DIN BAAD HE SHADI HOGE...
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GEET & MAAN SMILES...😃
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DADI: MUBARAK ho MAAN GEET...
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THEN HUG THEM BOTH...
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DADI to MAAN: aab aap log bate kijiye... main or mohindar abki rasam ki baat kar lete hain...
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mohi:haa bete jao...
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...MAAN Take Shopping beg from dadi & went inside with geet...
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...>>>>>>>
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IN GEET'S ROOM >>>>

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Maan: GEET ATUM AAJ BOHOT SUNDAR LAG RAHE HO...
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geet blushed: Aapka aasar hain...😳
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maan: aacha ji... mera aasar tum par itna gehra hain??
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geet: isse bhi bohot gehra...
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maan hugged geet from back: You knw what GEET i wish ke aaj he koi muhrat hota ... toh hum aabhi shadi kar lete...
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geet: MAAN aap bhi na... sirf do din ki he baat hain...
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maan: tum jab mere itne kareb hote ho toh mujhse ek minute bhi ruka nahi jaata... Mann karta hain, tumhe kahi dur le jau.. jaha sirf hum do no ho aur koi nahi...😊
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geet smiles : aab bohot jiya da he soch te ho..😊
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maan: fikar maat karo shadi ke baad sochunga nahi... jaha mann kare ga tumhe apne baaho main utha ke le jaunga... 😊
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GEET: aap bohot badmas ho... choriye mujhe...
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maan: nahi chorunga... Zindagi bhar yuhi tumhe apne baaho main rahunga...
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geet blushed... 😳
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MAAN: wese geet main tumhare liye kuch laya tha...
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geet: kya???
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maan: ek minute de ta hu...
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maan open the bag & give a dress to geet...

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geet: maan yeh ...
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maan: humare sagai main tum yeh pehnoge mere liye???
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GEET very much liked the dress...
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geet: aap ke liye kuch bhi... I LOVE YOU & HUGGED HIM
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MAAN: I LOVE YOU TOO JAAN...
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geet: aab niche chale sab humara intezar kar rahe honge...
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maan: chalo...
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...BOTH WENT TO DOWNSTAIRS...
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DADI: geet bete kal duper ko aap logo ki sagai hain... raat ko sangeet...
phir kaal subeh mehndi haldi ur raat ko SHADI...😊.
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MAANEET were very happy...
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... NEXT MORNING IN HH...
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Maan send some servent to help MOHINDAR...
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HANDA HAVELI WAS FULLLY DECORETED...
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GEET's friend RAJJI PINKY & TASHA HELPED GEET TO GET READY

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... Mohindar was setting everything...
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...IN KHURANA HAVELI...
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MAAN GET READY...
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DADI & ANNIE ALSO GET READY TO GO...
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...THEY REACH HH...
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MOHINDAR & Some of his frnds welcome KHURANA FAMILY...
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All came & now waiting for geet to come...
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GEET wear the dress which MAAN gave him...
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everbody was watching her...
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GEET felt littile uneasy... BUT when her meet with MAAN'S eye... she felt relived... 😊
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MAAN was watching GEET with an amazing look...
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maan was thinking his dream came true... his princess is coming towards him...😊
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Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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aww their engagement and marriage is within 2 days...

wonderful...

Geet is getting ready in the dress Maan gifted her...

waiting for their marriage...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part
maaneet going to married within two days
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 26
awesome dear...
one good outcome is her dad is fine now...
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awe two days mein wedding..Maan is desperate to hav his princess with him
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




aww their engagement and marriage is within 2 days...

wonderful...

Geet is getting ready in the dress Maan gifted her...

waiting for their marriage...

thanx for pm...



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thank dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
MG SS ~DILRUBA~
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PART 29
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Rajji, pinky & tasha come with GEET
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GEET came & stand beside MAAN...
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MAAN slowly: YOU'RE TAKING MY BREATH AWAY...
... MY princess is looking so beautiful...
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geet blushing... 😳
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dadi to mohindar: SAGAI KI RASAM SHURU KARE???
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mohi: jee chaliye...
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...MAAN take GEET'S hand & wear her a simple yet beautiful dimond ring...
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...GEET also make MAAN wear A beautiful RING...
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Then they both take dadi's mohindar's blessings... 😊
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everyone congratulate them...
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...MAANEET WAS VERY HAPPY...
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After the end of the ceremony...
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MAANEET in CHAT PE...
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BOTH HUGGED EACH OTHER... 😳

MAAN: JAAN ...
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geet: hmm...
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maan: jaan...
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geet: hmmm
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maan: jaan...
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geet: hmmm
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maan: geet main tumhe kab se bula raha hu aur toum sirf hmmm keh rahe ho... kiske khayalo main khoye ho??
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geet {back to his sense} : kuch soch rahe the...
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maan: kya??

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geet: MAAN agar main buri {old} ho jaunge, mere bal safed ho jayenge... aur main thik se chal nahi paunge... tabhi kya aap mujhse itna he pyar karenge??

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MAAN: apne akhri saas thak sirf tumse he be inteha pyar krunga... chahe tum kitni bhi old ho jao... tumhare bhal jitne safed ho te jayenge, mera pyar aur bhi gehra hota jaye ga... aur jab bhi tumhe chal main dikkat hoge main tabhi tumhe apne bahoo ka sahara dunga... Humesha kar kadam main tumhara humsafar banke rahunga... MAIN KABHI TUMHARI PARCHAI NAHI BANUGA...KYUN KI UZZALE MAIN AKSAR PARCHAI Sath chor de te hain... Main tumhare saas banke tum main he sama jaunga...
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Geet was totally amazed to see his love towards her...
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She had nothing to give him... BUT see can also give him the LOVE that he deserve...
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GEET take MAAN's lips into his...
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MAAN was shocked but also respond her...
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geet was not only give him the KISS but also telling him how much she also love him...
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after a long time both take apart😳
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Geet: Main bhi zindagi bhar apka sath nibaunge... jab tak mere saas rahege yeh darkar sirf apka naam le ke ziyege...😊
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Maan: I LOVE YOU PRINCESS...
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GEET: LOVE YOU TOO MAAN...
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...AT NIGHT TIME...
...SANGEET TIME...
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Everyone was dancing & MAANEET was enjoying...
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then annie tell them to dance...
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annie: bhai apko sabke samne apne dil ka hal bhi baya karna hoga iss dance ke zareye...
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maan: yeh kese baat hui annie??
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annie: aap bhabi ke liye itna bhi nahi karoge???
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maan: par..
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annie: bhai bhabhi ke liye...
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maan: ok..
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but geet was feeling nervous ...
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MAAN: main hu naa...
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then he give her hands towards geet: can i??
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geet: nodded for yes & give him her hand...
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-Maan singing--
Paaya maine paaya tumhein
Rab ne milaya tumhein
Honthon pe sajaya tumhein
Nagmein sagaya tumhein
Paaya maine paaya tumhein
Sab se chupaya tumhe
Sapna banaya tumhein
Neendon mein bulaya tumhein

--Geet--
Tum jo aaye, zindagi mein, baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri, zaat ban gayi
--Maan--
Paaya maine paaya tumhein
Rab ne milaya tumhein
Honthon pe sajaya tumhein
Nagmein sagaya tumhein
Paaya maine paaya tumhein
Sab se chupaya tumhe
Sapna banaya tumhein
Neendon mein bulaya tumhein

--maaneet-

Ho tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

--geet
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Sapne teri chahaton ke
Sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab gayi
--MAANEET--

Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
--Maan--
Paaya maine paaya tumhein
Rab ne milaya tumhein
Honthon pe sajaya tumhein
Nagmein sagaya tumhein
Paaya maine paaya tumhein
Sab se chupaya tumhe
Sapna banaya tumhein
Neendon mein bulaya tumhein

--Maan--
Aaa
Chahaton ka mazaa
Faasalon mein nahin
Aa chupa loon tumhein
Hauslon mein kahin
Sabse upar likha
Hai tere naam ko
Khwaishon se jude
Silsilon mein kahin
--geet--
Khwaishein milne ki tumse
Khwaishein milne ki tumse
Roz hoti hai nayi

--maneet--

Mere dil ki jeet
Meri baat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi


--Maan--
Paaya maine paaya tumhein
Rab ne milaya tumhein
Honthon pe sajaya tumhein
Nagmein sagaya tumhein
Paaya maine paaya tumhein
Sab se chupaya tumhe ( Aaa)
Sapna banaya tumhein
Neendon mein bulaya tumhein
--Maan--
Zindagi bewafa hai yeh maana magar
Chod kar raah mein jaoge tum agar
Cheen launga main aasman se tumhe
Soona hoga na yeh do dilon ka nagar
--geet-
Raunke hain dil ke dar pe
Raunke hain dil ke dar pe
Dhadkane hain surmayi
Meri kismat bhi tumhari saath ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab
Ishq meri zaat ban gayi

--geet--

Sapne teri chahaton ke
Sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab gayi

Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
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Paaya maine paaya tumhein
Rab ne milaya tumhein
Honthon pe sajaya tumhein
Nagmein sagaya tumhein
Paaya maine paaya tumhein
Sab se chupaya tumhe
Sapna banaya tumhein
Neendon mein bulaya tumhein
Paaya maine paaya tumhein (Aaa...)
Rab ne milaya tumhein
Honthon pe sajaya tumhein
Nagmein sagaya tumhein
Paaya maine paaya tumhein
Sab se chupaya tumhe
Sapna banaya tumhein
Neendon mein bulaya tumhein... 😳😳
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... MAANEET WAS LOST IN EACH OTHER EYES...
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...SANGEET CEREMONY ENDS...

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...Next morning HALDI & MEHENDI RASAM Also done with lots of MANEET MOMENTS & MASTI...
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...WEDDING TIME IN HH...
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GEET is getting ready for HIS MAAN...

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MAAN also get ready...
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precap: wedding & sr... 😳😳
Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it very much
Loved maaneet moment
Maan apna pyaar jatata hai
Sagai ke baad sangit ...tum jo aaye jindgi...awesome
Waiting for shadi

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Lovely part
lovwd it
maaneet saagai sangeet haldi
waiting for next part
cont soon
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wow so lovely.lovely maaneet scenes.hayee awsm dialogue of both.'main akhri sas tak tume payar karunga'.amazing

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