MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED

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sandymg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

awesome...

loved it!!

waiting for their wedding...

continue soon

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

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MG SS ~DILRUBA~
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PART 30 {LAST PART}

...WEDDING DAY IN HANDA HAVELI...
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Maan was in ghori along with the baratt...
Aannie, dadi & their relatives were dancing... 😊
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After they reach HH.. maan came down from ghori...
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Maan take MOHINDAR'S blessing...
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GEET'S frnd {rajji}'s mom take arti of MAAN...
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THEN MAAN ENTER IN HOUSE...
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Maan sit in GROOM CHAIR & waiting for his princess...
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dadima tell mohindar to call GEET
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Girls came with GEET...
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Everybody was really seeing a princess... who was lookink breath taking... 😊
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MAAN was watching her in one eye lock...

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GEET was coming towards MAAN...
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MAAN give her his hand to came...
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she give him her hand..
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Eveyone was watching them...
they were looking so perfect with each other...
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like MADE FOR EACH OTHER COUPLE...
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Vermalla time:
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GEET ne vermala liya MAAN ko pehna ne ke liye...
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par Aadi.. pandeji & romeo ne maan ko uppar utha liya...
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GEET make a saddy face...
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AS maan Can't see sadness in his princess 's eyes he give them an angry look & came down...😡
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Then GEET took the vermala & make wear MAAN...
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Then MAAN also make her wear the vermala... 😊
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everyone clap for them...
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then they both sit in the mandap...
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Panditji start the mantra & wedding start...

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panditji: aab VAR VADHU KO Mangalsutra penaye aur sindoor bariye...
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panditji: aab phere ki liye uth jaye...
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phere time...
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{song started}
Shehnaaiyon ki sada keh rahi hai
Khushi ki mubarak ghadi aa gayi hai
Saji sukh jodi mein chaandsi dulhan
Zameen pe falak se pari aa gayi hai

Dulhe ka sehra suhaana lagta hai
Dulhe ka sehra suhaana lagta hai

Dulhan ka to dil deewana lagta hai
Dulhe ka sehra suhaana lagta hai
Dulhan ka to dil deewana lagta hai
Dulhe ka sehra suhaana lagta hai

Palbhar mein kaise badalte hain rishte
Ab to har apna begaana lagta hai

Dulhe ka sehra suhaana lagta hai
Dulhan ka to dil deewana lagta hai

Saat pheron se bandha janmon ka yeh bandhan
Pyaar se joda hai rab ne preet ka daaman

Hain nayi rasmein, nayi kasmein, nayi uljhan
Honth hai khaamosh, lekin keh rahi dhadkan

Dhadkan, meri dhadkan, dhadkan, teri dhadkan
Dhadkan, meri dhadkan, dhadkan, teri dhadkan
Dhadkan, dhadkan, dhadkan, dhadkan
Dhadkan, meri dhadkan, meri dhadkan

Mushkil ashkon ko chhupaana lagta hai
Dulhan ka to dil deewana lagta hai

~~BIDAAI TIME~
GEET was crying & hugged mohindar tightly...😭😭
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Palbhar mein kaise badalte hain rishte
Ab to har apna begaana lagta hai
Dulhe ka sehra suhaana lagta hai
Dulhan ka to dil deewana lagta hai ...
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{song ended}
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Mohindar came & made sit geet in the car...😭
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Maan to mohindar: Dad aap phikar maat kiji... main apke geet ko kabhi koi pareshani nahi hone dunga... jab bhi usko aapke yaad aayege main usse tabhi apke paass le aaunga... i promise dad...
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mohi: i trust you bete...meri bache sekabhi koi galte ho jaye toh usse maaf kardena beta ... humesha uska sath nibhana...
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maan: humsha uske sath raunga dad...
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the car start leaving...
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geet was crying so maan hugged her & console her...
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GEET: maan i will really miss dad...
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maan: i know geet... but i promise jab bhi tumhe unke jarurat hoge main tumhe usse time unke pass le aaunga...
but plzz jaan abhi roona band kar do mujhe aacha nahi lagta jab tum rote hoo...
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geet: okk but you promise aab mujhe dad ke pass le ke aaoge
{with a baby face}...
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maan: ok my dear princess... i promise 😊
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geet: ok then she hugged him...
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After a long journey they reach khurana mansion...
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geet get sleep in maan's shoulder...
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maan wake her up: jaan ghar aa gaya...
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geet: hmmm then she wake up...
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PRECAP : SR 😳 { will be update the last part B in night}

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Check out MY MG Writing :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3633654/mg-creations-by-nelufar

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

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momi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

oyeee-me-first
totally-luved-it 😳

Edited by Sexy_Witch - 12 years ago

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simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Awesome part
loved it
maaneet married
geet crying

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aditimaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

wow amazing lovely ud.our hot dulhan aya hai princess ko lend.amazing marriage scenes.waiting 4 most awaited sr

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Loved the entirre story.. Keep writing waiting fr part b

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

MG SS ~DILRUBA~
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LAST PART (B)
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Dadi take aarti of MAANEET...
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they take her blessing...Smile
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DADI: humesha kush rahiye...Smile
geet aab ghar parawesh kijiye...
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geet enter the house...
but dadi stop her...
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dadi: rukiye geet... asse nahi...
MAAN geet ko uthaye aur andar le aaye...
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geet: par dadi
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dadi: yeh humare ghar ki rasam hain bete ...
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maan uthaye...
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maan take geet in his arms..
geet was highly blushing...
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All rasam got complete... 😳 now time to for 😳SR😳
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Annie take geet to maan's room...
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geet enter & saw the room was beautifully decorated with flowers & candal's, & annie made her sit in the middle of the bed...
{geet was blushing... her cheeks were looking like red tomato}
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annie: bhabi abhi jitna sarmana hain sarmaa lo bad main bhai toh sharmane ka bhi moka nahi denge.. {teasingly}
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geet become nerous now...
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annie: abhi aap bhai ka wait karo woh aate he honge...😊
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annie left...
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...OUTSIDE OF ROOM...
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Maan was waiting annie to come out...
annie came: kya hua bhai itne bhi jaldi kya hain?? pehle nek toh de do..
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maan: kesa nek??
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annie: ohh mere pyare bhai bhabi ke pass jane de rahe hu... toh apko mujhe kuch dena toh hoga ki nahi??
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maan: annie mera sab tumhara he toh hain...phir kya chahiye??😲
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annie: ohh bhai... i knw sab mera he hain.. par i want a permission...
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maan: kese permission??
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annie: bhai mere sab frnds london ja rahe hai... sirf 10 days ke liye... plzz bhai mujhe bhi jane doo... plzz plzz.
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maan: no way.. tu akele kese rahe ge woh bhi 10 din ke liye... not possible...
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annie: plzz bhai i promise main har waqt aapse contect main rahunge... plzzz apne behen ke liye itna bhi nahi karoge aaap??😭 behen na sahe aab bhabi ke liye he haa bol doo plzzz pllzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz...
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maan: par...
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annie:bhabi aur kitna intezar karwao ge bhai? ha bol do naa... i promise main apna khayal rakhunge...
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maan: okk.. par pehle main sab check karunga ke tum kaha rahoge.. kese dost ke sath rahoge uske baad ok???
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annie hugged him: oh bhai I LOVE YOU... gd ni8 aur bhabi ko jiyada paresan maat karna...
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maan: badmash jaa jake so jaa...
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annie : ok bhai...
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...annie leaves & MAAN ENTER IN THEIR ROOM...
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Maan enter & lock the room...
when he trun he saw that GEET was sitting the bed... & covered her face with pallu...
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maan came & sits beside her...
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geet was feeling very shy 😳

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MAAN removed his duppata over frm her head...
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maan: you're the most beautiful girl who is just made for me...😊
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geet blushed...
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maan: u can made me mad in just one second by u blushed😳
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geet: main kabhi apko pagal nahi bana chahte...
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maan: acha jee par tumhare yeh laal laal galo ko dekh ke toh main khud ko rok he nahi pata.. bass mann karta hain tumhe apne baaho main bharlu aur zindagi bhar uhi rahu...
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geet: toh apko koi mana thore karega??
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maan: MSK koi wese bhi mana nahi kar sakta.. par tum???
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geet: main aapne akhri saas tak apke baho main reh sakte hu...
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maan: acha jii...
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geet: jiii...
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MAAN KISS HIS FOREHEAD

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MAAN: yoo know geet jab tum bina hichkichaye apne mann ki baat mujhse kehte ho sab mujhe humare pyar pe bohot garv {proud} mehsus hota hain... mujhe yakein ho ta ke maine tumhara trust jit liya hain...
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geet: apne ne toh sayad pehle din he mera bharosa jit liya tha tabhi toh apko bina jane maine apko dad ke bare main sab bata diya tha...
... apko pata hain maan apke sath dard baat ke mujhe bohot acha feel hua tha... sayad dad ko uss halat main dekhne ki takat bhi mili thi sirf apke hone se...😊 I LOVE YOU MAAN... YOU MADE MY LIFE COMPLETE 😊
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GEET KISS HIS CHEEKS...
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MAAN: I love you too JAAN... u r trully my jaan... now i can't even think a second without you😊...
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both hugged each other...😊
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then start removing her jwellaries...
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after that both kiss each other passionately...
their was so pureness in their love...
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geet moaned his name: MAAN...
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Maan Geet become Maaneet... They are two souls one body one 😳 😳
geet hugged him tightly & closed his eyes...
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maan switch off the lights...
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<<<< they hit the climax with their pure love>>>>
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After a long passionate night both hugged each other & sleep peachfully...😳
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About 6 MONTHS later::
Maneet's love was fully in the air... evryone thought that they r still newly wedded couple...
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dadi was very happy so see them...
NOW IN KHURANA MANSION A wedding night...
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Yes it was wedding night of ANNIE...
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ARJUN WEDS ANNIE
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in annie's london trip she meet with arjun & both start loving each othr...
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annie tell this to geet so geet made MAAN agree to their relation...😊
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WEDDING ENDS...
... bidaai time...
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annie was crying & hugged everyone...
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After leaving of annie... GEET GETS FAINTED...😲
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maan take geet to their room...
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doctor came & check her...
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after that DOC: MR.KHURANA it a good news geet maan ban ne wali hain...
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maan was shocked but more happy: main papa banne wala hu???
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dadi: geet maa bane ge toh aap he dad banege na... buddhu...
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dadi hugged maan: congrats beta...
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maan: thnks dadi...
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then both goes to meet geet...
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geet was blushing..
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dadi: congrats her & leave maaneet alone...
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maan to geet: thanks you so much jaan...
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& kiss her lips passionately...😳
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10 MONTHS LATER::
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It was day of MAAN'S PRINCESS Maliha;s one month birthday...

MAAN Throw grand party for it...😊
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Khurana mansion was was beautifully decorated...
evryone was enjoying...
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but maaneet was romancing😳
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Mahila was with dadi...
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...will be post epilouge if u all want...

Edited by nelufar10 - 11 years ago