MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 30
last part
beautiful dear...
lovely story...
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MG SS ~DILRUBA~

EPILOUGE (B)



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IN PARIS...
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Maneet full family get ready...😊
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Maan take his family to saw the beautiful sites of PARIS...
MAHI,GURMEET & MAYA was enjoying very much...
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Maneet were very Happy to see them happy...
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After visting to PARIS, at nightthey went to COTTAGE again...
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maya was very tired so she sleep in maan's lap...
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Geet made changed Gurmeet & mahi dresses... ...
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geet made then sleep them sleep & maan put maya in bed...
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After the three children get in deep sleep...
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maan: {slowly} : mishti bahar chalo ...
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geet: maan bache so rahe hain hum agr uth gaye aur hume unhone nahi dekha toh rone lagen ge..
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maan: kuch nahi hoga thore der apne pati ke sath bhi reh lo...
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geet: maan aap bhi na...chaliye...
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Maan take geet to the next room...
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both enter & maan locked the door...
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geet: kya baat hain maan??
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maan hugged her from back...
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maan: princess AAJ KUCH Khas baat hain...
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geet: mujhe so laga aap bhul gaye honge...
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maan: humare rishte se jure koi bhi baat main kabhi nahi bhul sakta...
... HAPPY ANNIVERSARY OF OUR FIRST MEETING...
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GEET: Happy anniversary to u too maan...
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maan turn her back: i love you princess... U hv changed my life...
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geet: love you too maan... U made my life complete...😳
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then maan passionately kiss geet...
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their tonuge was dancing with each others...
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geet moaned between the kiss...😳
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MAAN pick geet to his arms... both then led in bed...
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Maan : geet don't u think gurmeet akela h jata hain mahi aur maya ke sath..
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geet: nahi toh ... kyun?? {seriously}
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maan: geet itna serious kyun hote ho... main keh raha hu... gurmeet ko bhi toh ek bhai ki jarurat hain na?? kitna acha hoga na HUM AUR HUMARE CHAR???
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GEET: maan {shyly} nahi tin he best hain...
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maan: geet mere bare main na sahi GURMEET ke bae main socho...
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geet: mujhe apke sab badmashe samaj main aate hain... gurmeet maya aur mahi ke sath bohot kush hain usse bhai nahi chahiye...
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maan: geet plzz na {innocently}
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geet smiles : aap abhi bhi bache hi ho...
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maan: geet HAR INSAN MAIN BACHPANA HOTA HAIN
AUR WOH USKA BACHPANA SIRF USKE PYAR KE SAMNE HE DIKHATA HAIN, samji???
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geet: pata hain mere prince...
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both hugged each other...
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maan: geet r u sure u don't want more?? {teasingly}
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geet: no maan ...
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maan: ok but i want u now ...
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geet: maan nahi bache uth jayenge...
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maan: no bahana today ... anniversary gift bhi nahi doge...
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geet: maan ...😳
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ok...
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..<<<<<<<<<the night was maneet make a passionate love>>>>>>>>>
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This is the ENDING of MANEET'S JOURNEY
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...THE END...
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<<<< Hope u all like My first SS >>>>>
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Check out My MG CReations...
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link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3633654/mg-creations-by-nelufar
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Thanks a lot guys for ur support ... love u all...
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Nelufar Gurti Aazmi 😊
Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mindblowing ending
loved the whole story
maaneet were superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful ending baby me loved ur simplicity the way u wrote whole ff.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hum aur hmare char.
Haye my dreamy. Lovely ending.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazing.happy ending.really 4 children.amazing idea by maan
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti555

Mindblowing ending
loved the whole story
maaneet were superb


thnks dear :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsmile

beautiful ending baby me loved ur simplicity the way u wrote whole ff.


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thanks u so much my cute dii 😊
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Originally posted by: sri91

ausome and cute ss..


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thnks sri dii
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