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Posted: 12 years ago
yeh mera dil bahut roraha hai.. Yeh kaise ishq hai... Aur aage ka sach sunne ke baadh najane kya hoga... maan ne hi geet ke saath woh sab kiya kya...?
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeee we got update😃

superb
👏 update

very emotiona
😭l 😭... rajji told maan about geet's mad love for him
n again maaneet serious convo
geet told maan about past n u mention maan
"realizing his mistake."
so it was Maan n he recollect that
😲????

maan's socked to know about baby ...

i was so hopping that it was not maan ... but.. now... ohhh

geet's heart bleed
😭with each n every moment to recollect that painful n worst moment of her life 😭... poor geet ... she is in so much love with this man after all she still love him😭

SUPERB
👏WRITING
LOVE IT ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!
Her past is revealed to him very nicely.
Her deewanapan for him, his music, her sacrifice
He is shocked by the change from what he believes about her.
I think there is nothing worse that what he is about to hear.
Now she is pregnant.
She really needs healing, counseling, love - the unselfish kind from him
Looking forward to more soon...
Thanks for updating.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally Maan knows that she loved him a lot
but does he even remember what he's done to her ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet s love to him was opened up by rajji
maan is confused
y geet hates him
n all got clear with her confessions
n she said about baby too..
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Posted: 12 years ago
welcum back di

Dhamaka update...yet painful

maan knwing abt geet's carziness for him

her love for him...

n now geet telling abt his sins n baby too

still he s confused...

wondering hw ll cum out dis guilt

waiting for next...cont.s oon

thanks for update


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Posted: 12 years ago
THANKS FOR FINALLYUPDATING THIS
MAAN KNOWS ABOUT GEET'S OBSESSION FOR HIM BUT IS STILL CONFUSED WITH HER HATRED
GEET WIL FINALLY TELL HIM THE TRUTH
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 16

her words were like burning arrows piercing straight into his heart slicing it!! lekin.. he stopped realizing his mistake.
Mujhe tumse nafrat karni chahiyen lekin zinda laash main jaan tumharen ehsaas se hi hoti hain
I hate u
I hate the way u make me feel
I hate this child in me
his heart almost stopped that very moment as she gasped telling him the truth.
She had broken his heart repeatedly. The hope everything will get better ever just died that very moment & the most beautiful moment of their life passed by in anguish. Their baby.. the symbol of their love, their togetherness... he even vaguely remembered she wrote something abt that in diary. How shy she would be to tell him abt their baby. She even had striked it out after writing .. she was feeling so shy then.. & here she was spitting it out like a dirt, like filth.
Humara baby all he managed to mutter
she shot an angry glare
mera baby.. it has nothing to do with u
he couldn't fall for her more.. just a min before she said she hated the child in her..
one think was clear her angered words were shallow just like her anger. Raji was right!! her jiji pretends this hate u face
geet just left him alone in the midst of her love ironically saying she hates him.

She walked out of the house crying.. why does he have to keep coming back to her. Why his eyes speaks something different. How much had she tried to forget him, stop thinking about him she shuts her eyelids only to feel him, fresh layer of tears washes the old ones.
All she had in heart was unbearable pain & heart ache. Still why my heart betrays me.. she places her hand on her tummy & settles on the bench of the park. Couldn't that past not exist. Couldn't he be there now.. & a part of her laughs at her.. look what have u become. She tried to hide herself in her palm. The hatred with the feel to hold him back in her arms, without this hatredness, without this feel to pushing away, without she hating him.. but more than that she loves him & she knows that for sure now.

This fight in her is never ending. Every time her love wins & over her hatredness & saves him from her wrat. She had tried even to give in to his arms but this pain inside her heart never seems to go away. She hugged herself closely sitting alone now in the park. Missing him, his hold, the feel when he wrapped his arms around her.

Maan fell on his knees broken hitting his hand on the dust bin. His heart broke down looking at the plight of the diary. He picked it up with all the love & tenderness. He slowly turned the pages reading again trying to link the missing parts. He reached to her 18th bday. There was the letter she had written to her parents. Every word split his heart into million pieces.
How excited she was to meet him. Did she even think once.. he clutched the letter close to his heart. Pagli..ek bar tho kah dethi.. he hit his head on the wall behind. How was he going to undo anything. His fear was only building trying to remember the exact day, he made few calls checking his program schedule that particular day. They were to have an event that day in Mumbai his assistant spoke. Assistant asked for some time to look into the details.
He restlessly waited looking through her room. There was nothing of hers.. every thing was soaked with him. Just him.
The moment he got the details.. he rushed out to his car. The moment he opened the car door.. something hard hit his head.. he felt a sharp pain blinding him
he could vagely hear some one screaming.. ka***ne..
teri himat kaisen hu...
he passed out

Next he found himself tied to some pillar.. every part of his body paining as if it is been ripped apart. He was dazed.. he couldn't see anything clearly & the pain in the back of his head was piercing.
Another strong blow he felt just below his right knee. He snapped open his eyes screaming in pain.
I will kill u bas***d
Maan tried to focus hard. Through the screen of blood to see the owner of the voice. He saw brij kicking him yet again
Maan puked blood this blow right into his stomach.
U r so dead Maan Singh Khurana
aaj tho main tumhe nahi chodonga
every time I tried
.. she came in between.
Aisen tho wo pagal ho jayegi
he spoke punching him yet again
phelen she plans every thing & last moment me she falls weak.
Maan knew some one had helped geet with her plots ..now kind of was getting clear. one way he happy it was brij. thank god she was not dealing with some goons.
Brij ' u can never understand the pain of seeing ur sister going mad every passing day.
He sighed sitting down dead tired from hitting him with all his might.
After knocking him unconscious infront of the house, Brij had quickly thrown him in the back seat before any body noticed them. He had driven to this abandon construction sight. He some how managed to drag is body to this pillar from the car & tied him. His fury was maddeningly at his peak. He kicked Maan, punched him for last one hr on & off.
Brij - Why did u come in our life?
He spoke panting
brij ' uski galti kya thi
bas itni ki wo tumse pagalon ki tarah pyar karti rahi
itni badi pagal.. she left us all & went to meet u
he kicked him getting up irritated... he held on to him panting.. & punching him lifelessly
pata hain humara kya haal huwa tha uski wo halat dehken
Maan looked at him listening carefully frightened to hear further
brij cupped his hand as if he was holding something in his hands.. he pointed up..
after u raped her she jumped from that building people thought it was an accident
dad & mom don't even know wat u did to her that day

he held his collar tumhe meri behen mili thi
ek bar uski ankon main dehk lethen.
. he punched straight on his face.. making him bleed yet again
kya farak padtha tum jaisen insan ko
nothing would have stopped u from ur cruelty
ek saal taak zinda laash thi wo!!! uski body ka har ek bone toot gaya tha.. it took months only heal the bones.
every body had lost hope of her survival
raji pagalon ki tarah ussen tumahren gane sunthi
uss haal main wo pagli sirf tumhari awaaz ko respond kar rahi thi
as brij spoke about her hospital stay & how miraculously one day she responded in lift..
Maan asked fumbling in a barely audible voice ' which hospital?
Brij spat the name & punched him yet again.. how does that matter
Maan clearly remembered when he had taken daadi to hospital in Mumbai & the thought of that unknown brushing her hand... the thought itself choked him, suffocated him..
Maan painfully spoke ' I was there
brij hit his head & sank down learning he couldn't kill this bas***d how much ever he wanted, his sisters life depends on him.
Maan tried to think clearly trying to see that pale face, those restless eyes, it felt like he could suddenly picture himself in that huge hospital lift.. the lift now echoed with her raised heart beat, the uneven heart beat the moment his hand brushed hers.. her cold numb fingers.. which clutched his heart with ice right now.

precap
maan getting geet to KM
please leave me lots of comments & likes
love
muskan
-PART 15 PREV NEXT PART 17 -
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I had feeling that he was not rhe maan but someone else who
Did this to geet like someone same face like some time we saw dublicates or else how he is so calm ... but I know u ... u will clear every little by little .
Dii plz kashmakash bhi update kar du plz plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz make them start a new life together happily.

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