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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 16

Geet pregnant😳
Her open declaration and also how much she hates the baby but the next moment she claims the baby as only hers
Sach much yeh Geet Maan ko paagal kar degi apne pyaar meinšŸ˜›
Poor Maan shock pe shock lag rahe hain🤢

One moment happiness and the other pain
She loves him so much but now only her hatred is what he has to bear
She is carrying his baby but she openly declares to hate it
But atleast now he knows through Rajji that her hateful words are shallow and her undying love too deep😳

Geet fighting her inner turmoil Maan's presence weakening her every resolve, after all that she had to endure still her traitor heart just beats for him

Maan now in quest to know the actual facts
The truth but Brij 😲
Brij beating Maan to seek revenge for his sister
It was Brij all the way who had been helping Geet in her plots but Geet's love for Maan saved him each time😳

Brij finally discloses the mystery around Geet's behavior and her hatred for Maan
I guess only a third person could bring out the facts of the happenings, Geet's sufferings and her state of mind

It was so painful to venture back in the past again
Maan trying to get a clear picture of the faint images then
Maan knowing the depth of her love for him and Brij helpless as her heart, body , soul is all connected to this manšŸ˜’

Fabulous update Muski
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Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 17

Maan hospitalized and Geet taking care of him
How pure and innocent she is that her love is above all the vices
The person who is supposedly responsible of all her woes who has probably wounded her soul, she can't see him in pain.😳
She is sharing some cute moments with him like sharing a glass of juice😳

Brij and Maan faked it as an accidentšŸ¤”

Maan wanting to take her home, knowing she will suffer each moment having him near her but he also knows that she can't live without him too
She is right here near him yet so far
His mistakes in the past are now surfacing out in form of her hatredšŸ˜•

Maan apologizing for his mistakes, hating his own being to have been cause of pain to his angel, wants to undo all the deeds but as if it is possible...Its late too latešŸ˜’

Maan-Brij planning to consult a psychiatrist for Geet to avoid any further damage and put an end to her suicidal tendencies as its risky with the baby now

Poignant update
awesome!!!!
My heart went out for both
I am so confused cos I just can't believe Maan is guilty and also can't ignore Geet's pain
Have I missed out anythingšŸ˜•
Why is Dadi so angry, does she know, why and what had she warned him aboutšŸ˜”
Muski off to the next update😳


Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Last part

Thank God he is innocent😳

Dev was the culprit sick, disgusting, devil🤬
He ruined so many girls lives using Maan's name
Poor Maan betrayed by his loved ones, so lost faith in love and relations

Geet overheard the truth and her undying love, trust and faith in her Maan won!
Her heart won!!!
Geet overwhelmed with happiness, showers all her love on her MaanšŸ˜›

Maan dug out all the fact and got Dev arrested
Yeah only if he had acted before and got to the root of the matter things would have been different

But the truth brought pain along with the joy
It wasn't her Maan but...
Geet shattered knowing it was someone else who
Loved how Maan handled the whole situation and how could she risk their baby's life, the symbol of their love😳

The end was perfect
Their moment, their love, their togetherness in the true sense
Today they are truly one by heart body and soul😃

Fantastic FF Muski
You actually managed to keep the mystery and suspense going till the last part.
Though we all would guess, discuss and wait for the mystery to unfold but still kudos to u for this fabulous piece!
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Thanks so much for a happywala ending
I was actually scared throughout DiljalešŸ˜•
But Maaneet happily lived ever after😳

Jaadu ki jhappi for u
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Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
di loved it so much... had read till part 9 n completed all other remaining parts abhi... phew, the mystery was the center of the story... but it was Geet's madness that just put life into it... I loved her character... the way she loved him so insanely and then Maan too was fab, in start he was presented as her rapist, a bad man, but it was quite clear from his behavior that something was a miss... the story was crisp, short n intriguing n u just rocked with it like always... i adore u immensely for the variety you put in your stories... thnk u sooo much for the amazing ff... muaaahā¤ļøšŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow di...such a lovely story!!!!

geet's madness, her love, her dreams...all was so beautiful, but her just 1 mistake ruined everything!!!😭

dat cruel dev...arggghhh!!! just wanna kill him😔

n for maan...nthing made sense to him...her suddenly showering him with love n then suddenly behaving rudely was so much irritating

he was being subjected to pain without any mistake of his, he suffered so much without any reason😭😭😭

luvd d concept ā¤ļø

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow. it was really superb...
I thot it may be his twwn r some thing like tat...
its a very gud one..

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