when hate changes to love(swaron FF)chap 1 updatd

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello peeps...dis is renu here...so am here to make an FF on my fav jodi swaron..hope u people lyk my cncpt..dis FF is nowhere related to the show...so here is a prologue.pls don't mind any grmmcl or spllng mistakes...

PROLOGUE

"swayu me shadi karaney walahu"said nil with a wide smile plastd on his face...

"kyu?"askd swayam remvng his tie...

"agar kisi ne kaha ki wo shadi karahey tho koi bhi yehi puchegaki kab karahey but tu kahaka hey ki tu kyu karaho puchirahahey...?"askd cnfusd nil😕

"tu pehele ye bat tha ki kyu karahey shadi?"repld swayam

"kyu ki mom aur dad ko lagatha hey ki mera shadi ka umar hogahey..."said nil

"me ye nahi pucherahahu ki tu ab kyu karahey..me ye puche rahahu ki thu shadi kyu karahey?"replyd swayam

nilesh:kyu ki muje meri sat life lng rehaney wali chahihey

swayam:tho ek pet dog ko rakle..shadi kyu?

nilesh:WTH? ladiki aur dog equl hey?

scene shift...

sharon:nahi hey..acvtlly ladkon si zada dogs bettr hothey hey..

simmi:shar...

sharon:what?..me crt he tho keharahihu...u don't knw abt dis boys..ye dhekithey ek hey aur rehathey kuch aur...

simi:but no shar nil tho bohat acha ladakahey ..childhood me wo meri classmate bi tha..i knw nil us type ka nahi hey...

sharon arey meri boli bali simmi..tuje kise pata that he didn't chng..?wo childhood tha simmi ..ye teenage hey...it was so many years back rght?

nimmi: becoz i trust her...

swaron :dheka..yehi pi humarey ladakey /ladikiya fools hothey hey...hum uni lognko blndly trust karathey hey aur wo hum pi cheat karathey hey...thats why" I HATE GIRLS/BOYS"

so guys bolo how was dat? acha tha ya bura tha ya wrst? ..let me knw if u want me to wrte it furuthr or not...pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...and criticism and suggestn are always welcome...

INDEX:

BANNER:

CH1:I HATE YOU

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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH

MR.Swayam Shekhawat:

so meet swayam shekhawat..the heart throb in his clg time..he is a son of one of the biggest business tycoons...handsum,smart..watnot...inshort we can call him the MR.PERFECT...loves his dad and frnd vry much ..evry gal go gaga ovr him ..but nevr evr let evn a gals shadw to touch him...he hates women...becos his mom cheatd his dad for money.. from then he never like the word called women...at presnt he is wrkng with his day in his own cmpny...he nevr back offs frm helpng anyone...what will happens when a gal entrs his life unwantedly...and becoms his wrld...will his opn on gals evry chnge?will he evr fall in love?


MISS.Sharon Rai Prakash:

now meet miss.sharon rai prakash..she is the prefect exmple for beauty with brains..was a diva in her colg times..daughtr of a bussiness tycoon..loves her family and frnds..she nevr says no to them who come for her help..vry kind heartd...hates boy due to the expernces that happnd to her best frnd..frm then she hates the word men...at persnt she help her dad in bussiness matter and wrk in her own compny...wat happns when a boy entrs her life unwantdly and becomes her wrld...will evr her opn abt boys chnge?

MISS.Simmi Sharma:

meet simmi...sharon's best frnds...share evrthngand evrthng with her..in love with nilesh gng to get marrid with him...


MR.NILESHKHURANA

meet nilesh ...swayam's best frnd ..shars evrthng with him...and treats him lyk his brother...in love with simmi gng to get marrid with her...


MR.reyaansh singhania

so meet MR.reyaansh Singhania..cousn of swayam ..at presnt in US for his studies and is gng

be the best frnd of sharon... is gng play cupd for swaron...soon wil be entrng into the ff...

what happnd when the presons who hate each others gendr had to tie a knot with eachother for there parents...and what happns if these two strtd to fall for eachothers...?

so here i go with cs of my stry let me knw dat i shld cntnue dis ff or not...


Edited by 123renudrlng - 12 years ago
Swaronvrushan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was cool...both leads hate other gen...update fast
snehaswaron77 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really nice concept!"" Wud love to read further continue soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing prologue and CS
loved it
but no kriya
i mean you can add her na..
and dont add taani at all... 🤢🤢
loved the start
it was great
would love to read further
update soon
and do pm me
thanks for the pm
swaron FF excited..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Character sketch seems really interesting!!!Looking forward to the update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That is so cool n interesting n unique!! Do continue n plz pm me...👏
P.S.- Plz don't use too much shortcuts in your writings, it becomes confusing at times...😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dats nice and something new...
since i havent read anything yet wer sharon hates guys and swayam hates girls...
oh and the cs was well written...
continue soon
do pm me😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting concept...
pls continue soon & pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey its really nice.👏
Very good start.👍🏼
Please update soon and do PM me.😳

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