when hate changes to love(swaron FF)chap 1 updatd - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
loved the prologue and CHARACTER SKETCH
plzz do update soon waiting eagerlyyy
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CH1:I HATE YOU

TIME:EARLY MORNING
PLACE:JOGGERS PARK
SCENE:SWARON HAS GONE FOR THEIR JOG

Its was beautiful morng a grl was doing her daily jog..the cool morng breeze was playing with her hair were left open the tree thrugh wch she was passing thrugh was showering flowers on her and a sweet smile was on her face wch added more beauty to her ..it was none other then our diva SHARON RAI PRAKASH.sharon moved ahead.while in the oppste dirct a little away frm her a guy was in his jogging dress with earphone in his ears looking dam hwat and was pulling every grls prsnt ovr eye on to him ..but he was not at inrst in them so he walk past them igrn them cmpltly .he saw a grl's shadow infrnt of him and he moved aside and move such that he doesn't touch the grls shadow.it was none other than our vry owned Swayam Shekhawat.soon swaron were heading toward eachother and there eye fell on a kid playing with balloons "How cute" bothe thught to then self both of them were not aware of who is coming infrnt of him/her.there eyes were fixed on the kid jst then " BOOM "both bangd into eachother swayam some how mange to stand but sharon lost her balance and was about to fall when swayam caught her .it was frst time swayam that he touched a grl and the same with sharon(apart frm family membrs) they were lost in eachother but soon came to there sense and sharon stood up with a jerk and was abt to move ahead heard swayam memerng "god ye grls bhi na never chnge "and he was about to go he felt that some one held his wrst and stopd him and ya guys u guess is rght its our sharon only "excuse me what do u mean by we grls never chnge?huh?"sharon said with full angry and attitude ."vahi jo tumey achi tarasi pata hey"swayam repld with same attitude removing his head phones ."will pls enlighten me?"said sharon cross her hand on her chest ."sorry me apani valuable time tum grls pi waste nahi karana chahatha"he was abt to go wen sharon stop him by holdng his hand and said "as if am in you" swayam gve ' what hello she want?'lookand said "y did u stop me?"."to jst inform u that grl are not like the way u are imgne them ...u boys are one who want a chance to touch girls"sharon said let this hand go."oh come on u grls are the one who keep falling into our boys arms "reply swayam.and there argument was gng on and on they were fight no no shouting on each other.while all the people in the park are jst staring them .and try hard to stop them and finally stopped them frm fight .both shouted I HATE U and left in different directions
both left to there mansions and left to there works and in the eveningcame back & nimmi went to swaron's houses respectively
"swayu me shadi karaney walahu"said nil with a wide smile plastd on his face...
"kyu?"askd swayam remvng his tie...
"agar kisi ne kaha ki wo shadi karahey tho koi bhi yehi puchegaki kab karahey but tu kahaka hey ki tu kyu karaho puchirahahey...?"askd cnfusd nil
"tu pehele ye bat tha ki kyu karahey shadi?"repld swayam
"kyu ki mom aur dad ko lagatha hey ki mera shadi ka umar hogahey..."said nil
"me ye nahi pucherahahu ki tu ab kyu karahey..me ye puche rahahu ki thu shadi kyu karahey?"replyd swayam
nilesh:kyu ki muje meri sat life lng rehaney wali chahihey
swayam:tho ek pet dog ko rakle..shadi kyu?
nilesh:WTH? ladiki aur dog equl hey?

scene shift...

sharon:nahi hey..acvtlly ladkon si zada dogs bettr hothey hey..
simmi:shar...
sharon:what?..me crt he tho keharahihu...u don't knw abt dis boys..ye dhekithey ek hey aur rehathey kuch aur...
simi:but no shar nil tho bohat acha ladakahey ..childhood me wo meri classmate bi tha..i knw nil us type ka nahi hey...
sharon arey meri boli bali simmi..tuje kise pata that he didn't chng..?wo childhood tha simmi ..ye teenage hey...it was so many years back rght?
nimmi: becoz i trust her/him..
swaron :dheka..yehi pi humarey ladakey /ladikiya fools hothey hey...hum uni lognko blndly trust karathey hey aur wo hum pi cheat karathey hey...thats why" I HATE GIRLS/BOYS"
precap:
nimmi ki engagement ki perpetration and swaron ki nok jhok and nimmi trying to control

so guys am done with chap 1 ...i knw me bohat late hu but sry yarr busy thi .pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...and criticism and suggestn are always welcome...
love'
renu
Edited by 123renudrlng - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
it was a nice start
and the banner was also good
swaron first fight
eager to read the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
wonderful banner done... loved it... do continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Good one! But too late..😕 I had forgotten about it completely...
Coming to the update, it was nice..😛 SwaRon fighting..😆 That was funny...
Update soon n do pm me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
lovely update love it

i hate u ke sath fight khatam...

nic

update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
renu my dear !!!
cha gayi tusi...
amazing
chapter 1 was wow !!!
i loved it a lot
thanks for the PM

please update soon and do PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
dis is very different concept...
swaron hate marriage or oppsite genders...
its really intresting...
first meet n ladayi shuru, great...
thnx fr d pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
the chapter 1 st5art of with the fight of swaron... oh no...
nil and simmi engagement superb it is... and swaron are again go
to meet in their engagement and i hope do not create much mess ...
look forward to read more... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
chappy 1 was awesome
luvd it
amazingly written

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