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Posted: 12 years ago


he he mee too here
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Posted: 12 years ago

msk ...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee



he he mee too here

me 3 here,egerly waiting..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 17

The officer incharge sent the tape to the forensic lab.

Officer (O): she had no family?

Maan (M): who?

O: Geet

M: she had a family, I think somewhere in HSPur

O: you never told us that she had a family; she may have been taken by them.

M: since the day I know her she was alone, it was only a few months back I knew she had a family.

O: she told you

M: no, Manpreet my friend whose marriage is today told me

O: and how did she know?

M: she recognize her

O: pardon

M: she is her Bhabhi's sister

O: what?

M: OMG, it never occurred to me; her past life would be the reason of this attack and her going missing

O: can you explain

The officer started the tape recorder

M: her real name is Naintara, she is a daughter of the Chaudhary;s as I told you somewhere in HSPur. Her sister Myra was my classmate at college and is now wife of Yash who is my friend. Yash Myra live in Michigan. Naitntara was married to Dev Behl. She is now a divorcee

O: the same Dev Behl who is a big name in the fashion world

M: yes

O: Is Geet, his ex wife? Main witness in the civil case, Behl-Sabarwal have filed challenging the will of their late father

M: I think yes

O: so she is that missing Naintara?

M: yes, but how do you know so much

O: it is all around the news channels. The case date was about 2 months back and as NT did not turn up, the next date was given. But why was she living here with that fake name?

M: when she left Mumbai, she was attacked by Arjun Sabarwal, they thought she is dead

O: and

M: she wanted to get rid of them so she changed her identity and is being living here peacefully

O: peacefully until they found her

M: maybe

O: well the lab reports are due, if those 2 men have a criminal record, we will find who they are, I will call you, meanwhile I want her family address

M: I will call you as soon as will find it

O: good day

M: thank you sir

Maan left the department and went straight to Manpreet's house.

He asked for MP but on way found Myra.

Myra has changed a lot; she was no more the same person he knew.

M: hi Myra

My: hi Maan, how are you?

M: am Ok

My: I am sorry for everything

M: it's Ok, well what end well is well

My: well

M: Myra can I have your bro's number

My: why?

M: I want to talk to him about NT

My: what do you know about her?

M: not much

M: please Myra

My: here take it, but NT is not recovering, she is still in coma

M: Coma! Where is she?

My: in Chandigarh

M: which hospital

My: ABC memorial, but

M: thanks Myra

He left and called the officer

M: officer

O: yes Maan

M: she is in Chandigarh, admitted in ABC Memorial, she is in coma

O: well we should leave for Chandigarh then

M: I am on way to your department, meet me in the parking

O: Ok

They left for Chandigarh and met Brij there and told him everything they knew

Brij (B): can I hear the tape (very angry)

O: yes, but where did you find her?

B: we did not find her, she came on her own, she was seriously injured, a truck driver saw her in the shrubs near the highway and brought her to us, he told that she once gained consciousness and when told that she was near Haryana border gave them the address.

O: lucky for her

They then listened to the tape carefully and Brij recognized one voice

B: I think I have heard this voice, he is I suppose Dev's bodyguard

M: Dev Behl's

B: yes, he does odd jobs for him

O: I was right this has to do something with the case in the court

B: but they think her to be dead, then how did they know that she was alive

M: she was featured in a food magazine few months back, they also took her photo

B: I did not see that

M: it was some high profile magazine with a lot of gossip stuff about what celebrities eat and drink.

O: they sure must have read it, after all they are high profile people

They discussed matters in detail

B: come lets have something, I have rented a flat nearby

M: can I meet her?

B: well I don't know, but how do you know so much about her?

O: they were going to get married soon

B: what!

M: yes, we have planned to get married as soon as her dream project was complete

B: dream project?

M: yes, she is a major share holder of the biggest chain of confectioneries at Delhi

O: Sweet Tooth, and they are converting their Basti into a high profile confectionary township; am I right Maan?

M: yes

B: so much like my Naintara, I mean Geet

M: can I? please

B: ok

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Part 18 coming soon

hope you liked the part 17, now no more A & B
well Finally Geet aka NT found, lets see what will happen when Maan will go to see her. will he be able to control his emotions?
lets see what will Brij make out of when he sees Maan talking to his sister.



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Posted: 12 years ago
finally geet mili to sehi.she s in coma.lovd de updt.nxt prt cming soon ...matlab kitna soon abhi kya??
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally sadi geet mil gayee .. dev behl tum to gye ab ...

par she is in coma .. ab kya hoga ... i hope maan jaldi geet ko wapis le aaye ...use coma se ...

please shruti come back soon ...

strory bade tough phase se nikal rahi hai ...

tum sath rehna ...
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Posted: 12 years ago


unplanned once again got second space ...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was awesum..
Thankgod!! geet is not in bad hands..
i hope dev will be arrested soon and geet vl be fine..
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Posted: 12 years ago
So much happened in two days ... I n this story offcourse... So she is in coma... I hope myra don't have any feelings for maan anymore...lol...
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet mili bhi lekin she is in ocma...kya kar diya dev ne...pehle hi use itne saare dard diye lekin dil nahi bhara...will ke liye kuch bhi aur ab to arjun bhi sath me hai...kya kya kiya hoga geet ke sath..
gald that maan could connect all points
thank god geet is in sate hands
now its time for punishment to dev & arjun

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