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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...
Very nice story...
I read all d 6 chapters in one go...
I didn't expect Khushi to love NK even after 8 years...
Thank God NK is negative...

I'm sending u buddy request,pls accept me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
NK is negative here... 😃

I wish d marriage happens bt d plans made after it FAILS... 😆

TUM THEEK HO????

Hayeee... I always droool on dis line... Such a simple one bt hs so many unsaid emotions...

I'm luvng it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I don't know why but My Heart beat was rising reading this Update...
It was Superb , No doubt...
But how can NK just tell her to marry Arnav and ask for the property share..??
This is surely not love and I hope Khushi comes to know about this soon...
I wish their all ceremony should be grand so that NK's parents never will approve of Khushi...
Poor Arnav have to go through so much due to this...
Please give a big Update... I used too your Big Big Updates... Please Please Pretty Please
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Posted: 12 years ago
THE dAWN OF THE dAWN
Authors Note



I got so many comments questioning the intentions and feelings of the characters in the FF. I tried my best to clarify some key points below:

Khushi:
Khushi doesnt yet realize NK's true intentions. She still thinks NK loves her to the same extent as she does. She is just blindly in love at this point, which we all were at some point in our life. (At least I was 😉) She is in that relation for 8 years and its difficult for her to weigh out right and wrong without substantial proof. Again as I said before, Khushi is a person who is very committed to her decisions. She takes a sec to fall in love and same amount of time to hate one. You will soon witness this, at least by next mahaaupdate (chp 10). I cant reveal more at this point.

Arnav:
Many of you thought why Arnav is going for lavish wedding when he is marrying her for property. Arnav wants only engagement and marriage (no sangeet, haldi or mehendi). And the reason is to show off his status. He wasnt planning for this until Khushi put a divorce condition. He wanna make it public lest his marriage be tagged as secret and one night stand. Moreover in previous chapter, he wasnt interested in marriage but he convinced himself for his dad. After seeing her, he was elated to see the same girl as his fiancee. But the moment she asked him to back off, he forced her into marriage with excuse of property. But that was not his intention at all. His ego kicked in and forced her so that he completes his dad's wish. If not his dad, he would have walked away from her.

Many advised that Arnav should confess to her. I feel its soon and he is just attracted to her and nothing beyond that. I never mentioned in any chapter that Arnav loves her. Yes I agree that he has strong feelings for her and he is very fond of her. But he knows nothing about her in and out and its the same case with her too. I dont think it will be appropriate for him to confess anything at this point.


I know I clarified this to my reader arnkhunostalgic, but I thought I would share with you all too. There is no jealous track in this story. There will not be any Sheetal or lavanya in this story. I hate that jealous track and I feel it ruined the charm in the soap. Anyway, their love story will start soon and there will not be any brutal treatment from either side. I intended to make this fun love story with intense sequences. In order to get that fun track I have to bring them close together which is what I am doing right now. Its going to turn to very chirpy lighthearted story. Hopefully (fingers crossed).


I can not separate Khushi from Arnav. My heart breaks with that thought. It might sound like Arnav is heartless at this point but he is going to be her everything very soon. You will see my point very soon. She will play major role in turning his life brighter. In my previous FF it was Arnav who helped Khushi heal. Its reverse in this story. Hope you will be with me until then.

NK:

Many expressed that NK is more like Shyam than NK himself in this story. I like to clarify what I had in mind when I chose NK for this role. I wanna experiment to see if NK fits in this character. Shyam is more villainous to me for this role. NK is not villain just a mean greedy lover. He is harmless. I assure you that.

Shashi:

I understand many were upset that Shashi didnt respect his daughter's love and her feelings. In my point of view, he is a man who thinks he is existing in this world only because of Aran Singh Raizada. And the only reason he is forcing Khushi because he knows how feisty, committed and devoted his daughter is and he also knows how lonely Arnav is. Once, his friend saved his daughter and he thinks it is time for him to pay back and save Arnav and he is confident only Khushi can pull him out the dark.

Hope I made sense :)

Edited by deepthiya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
THE dAWN OF THE dAWN
Chapter 7



India's most eligible bachelor Arnav Singh Raizada, the Chairman and CEO of the AR Designs, the man who saw tremendous success at very early age is all set to tie the knot to his childhood sweetheart, Khushi Kumari Gupta, the only daughter of Shashi Gupta, CEO and Chairman of India's largest baby clothing company KG Designs.

Khushi just then woke up from her sleep and joined her parents for coffee in the living room, and that is when she heard the recorded conversation that is currently airing on TV. NK called her but she ignored the call, concentrating on the interview. She mentally cursed Arnav when she heard herself as his childhood sweetheart.

We got in touch with Mr. Raizada. Here is our recorded phone conversation with the most dashing and handsome business tycoon.

Thank you so much for giving us your valuable time to do this.

Always My pleasure.

To begin with all spinsters in the country are truly heartbroken.

Arnav chuckles.

Reporter continued, We never heard any rumors of your dates and suddenly you break the news of your marriage.

Well it was under the wraps for long time. Finally the moment came and we decided we are ready to take our relation to the next level.

What the hell is he talking about? She peeved and shocked to hear new things about her own life.

Is she a princess or a girl next door?

Wow, princess or girl next door? thats tough to answer.

Khushi on the other hand became inquisitive to know more about herself. She almost sat up straight waiting to hear his response.

I have seen her both sides. He smiles evidently. It depends on what you mean or do to her. If you get nasty with her, she will be a bossy princess and can go real hard with you. If you are nice to her, she will treat you like her everything.

Wow, she was impressed with his theory on her. Nobody ever said such things about her with so much poise. She never knew she gets that tough. She then realized that she showed her toughest side only to Arnav but no other.

So how did the proposal happen? When, where, I am sure you must have proposed her in exotic place?

That is something very personal and intimate between us. I would like to keep it that way, please.

Proposal, my foot! Its a forced marriage you idiots. She muttered within herself.

Then the grey and white pattern displayed in the background with Service Unavailable message popped up on the screen. She immediately ran to the TV station and checked all wires impatiently. Shashi was surprised to see her daughter go hysterical. He couldnt believe if she is slowly accepting Arnav or was she just curious to listen to his interview about her. Either way, he was glad and both parents smiled looking at each other, leaving her alone with her struggle. When she finally fixed the cable, the reporter ended, We wish Mr. Raizada and Ms. Gupta all the very best.

She threw the remote angrily on the couch and stomped her foot towards her room.

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Arnie, yaar? You never said about your secret relation with Cookie? Payal saw Arnav's interview and dialed him immediately faking her anger.

You know that Cookie's real name is Khushi?

Yeah, long time back.

Why didnt you tell me then?

Well, she hated that name and we never took her real name. Why what happened?

Nothing, I am just asking.

Tell me, were you guys dating from long time?

There is nothing of that sort. Arnav spoke adjusting his tie.

What?

Parents arranged this marriage and so we are getting married.

Meanwhile, Akash pulled the phone from Payal's hands.

Akash? Give it to me. I wanna speak to him. Payal chased him.

Wait, its man to man convo now. Stay away. He then turned his attention to Arnav. Arnie, thank god you are getting married. Listen, make note of DO's and DONT's. I need it next month.

Next month, Kyun?

Akash, dont. I wanna break the news. Shut up and get lost. Payal grabbed the phone pushing Akash away and continued her conversation with Arnav.

Why cant you guys call from separate phones and do conference.

This idiot always forget to charge his phone and end up messing with my phone. Anyway you were saying parents fixed it?

Yeah, Thats long story fatty. Details later!

But I dont understand, Cookie is in relation with that NK, right?

Yeah she still is!

Arnie, whats wrong with you? Tell me the details. Else I cant sleep tonight.

You are such a desperate soul fatty. Well its dad's last wish. I proposed and she had to accept it.

She had to accept it? Which means you forced her?

In a way Yes!

Arnie, how could you do this yaar? I dont like that NK but still I feel bad for them.

Arnav remained silent because he knew he is to be blamed for some part.

So did she break up with NK?

Nope.

Oh my god, Arnie its so confusing.

Its confusing for me too, he said lost in his own thoughts about Khushi. Anyway, dont think too much about this stuff, you will come to know sooner or later. What was that Akash saying something about next month.

Next month, we are getting married.

Arnav could sense shyness in her voice. Wow, congratulations!

Thats it? You are so boring Arnav. I really pity Cookie.

He heard beep on his phone and checked the display to see who is calling.

Hey listen, I gotto go. I will talk to you guys later.

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Did you call the wrong person again? He asked with slight tease in his voice.

Why are you doing all these? Khushi asked in frustrated voice.

Sorry! What did I do now?

Why are you lying to media?

About?

Dont act smart. I saw your interview.

Oh..They need gossip. I just gave them small dose.

What else did they ask you after proposal?

Excuse me? Arnav clarified unable to understand what she means.

I saw only part of it. I wanna know what else they asked you and your replies.

Why are you interested in my replies?

Dont think high of yourself. I am just worried about my reputation.

So you are not worried about my replies.

NO.

Fine, then I have nothing to tell.

Arnav?

Yes that is me. He smiled and enjoyed teasing her. This one aspect didnt seem to leave him in these years or is he slowly changing under her influence?

Stop it! I wanna know and be prepared before NK points at me.

He was in good and playful mood until he heard NK name. I hope you are not breathing by his terms. He spoke expressing slight irritation in his tone.

Thats none of your business.

That is my business Ms. Gupta, until we are married and divorced.

What th...

He interrupted her say, I will pick you up in an hour. Be ready. We are going to shop for you for the wedding.

I am not coming. I am capable of shopping by myself.

I never doubted your capabilities.

Did he just gave me a compliment? she thought mentally.

He continued...But this is my prestige issue. I have to make sure everything is just perfect.

No, he is making me aware of his power. That is it. This man can never give compliments to anyone except him. She thought as confused expression crossed her features. She disconnected her phone without any warning.

Dammit! I hate when she does that. He walked out of his room angrily.

Arnav babua, nastha? [[breakfast?]] Kaka enquired as Arnav was exiting the mansion.

Did I ask you to serve?. He expressed his anger on Kaka. Poor Kaka became his victim at the wrong time.

As he was about to exit, he turned around to Kaka and said, Kaka I am sorry. I was angry with someone else and happened to show it on you.

Arnav is very close to Kaka since his childhood. Right from feeding, playing or driving him to school, Kaka did everything and anything that has to do with Arnav. Arnav always behaved well mannered and considered no less of him than a grandfather. Kaka stayed with the Mansion even when Manohar took over it because he worshipped this house as temple and he had no other place to go. When Arnav bought the mansion, he was happy to get his long lost son back. But soon he realized he is no longer Arnav babua, he is changed man into business tycoon Arnav Singh Raizada. But that didnt stop him from loving him, caring him and calling the young Raizada as Arnav babua.

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Arnav parked his car in the driveway and honked Khushi to let her know that he is outside.

Khushi dressed in her regular clothes, nothing fancy, tied her hair up in a twirl fastened with hair pencil. She sported pale blue Gucci jeans and black Guess tee. She sat on her bed filing her nails lazily.

Khushi beta, Arnav is already here. Hurry up, he is waiting for you.

Amma, when I am done. I will go. And I dont think there is nothing wrong in waiting for few more mins.

Khushi?

Amma, I will be more delayed if you keep questioning me.

I am warning you Khushi. Your papa always said Arnav hates to wait and he is always punctual. Garima hurriedly left the room to attend Arnav.

Great! And I hate to be punctual. She let out wicked smile.

Its been 30mins since he's been outside her home and he refused to come inside when Garima asked him. He didnt know that she is going to make it so delayed else he would have waited inside the house. By now, he clearly understood that Khushi is doing it on purpose and his patience is very well exhausted.

He took long strides into her house and when he saw Garima in the living room pacing across worriedly, he gestured if he can go into Khushi's room. Garima nodded yes and he in a swift movement rushed to her room to find her shaping her nails.

He held her wrist and dragged her off bed.

How dare you? Leave my hand.

He didnt listen a word. As they were about to exit the room, Khushi pulled her hand from his grip and stepped back. What the hell do you think of yourself?

That I am Arnav Singh Raizada. He pinned her to the door. I am waiting like an idiot outside your house for last 30 mins, which I have never done in my life.

So you admit that you are an idiot? She further fueled his temper.

He tightened his fists in anger and took step towards her, Listen to me once for all. Do not test me. I have very limited patience. Get your act together and come out right now, with ME!

No!

Then I will have to carry you. I am sure you dont like to show our romance to your parents, do you?

She looked at him furiously, grabbed her clutch and walked past him to his car.

He followed her and took last few steps hurriedly to walk past her. He opened the door for her. When she was about to sit, he stopped her. One more thing, a person who doesnt respect time will not respect anything in life. I hate such people. Next time, if you are going to be late, I expect you to inform me beforehand. Secondly, Do NOT disconnect the phone when I am talking to you and without saying BYE.

Mr. Raizada, get this straight. I am not in any relation with you, not even HATE relationship. So I dont think I am obliged to follow any of your stupid rules.

They are not stupid rules, they are morales which I see you clearly lack. And in case you dont realize it yet, you are my fiancee. And we will be married soon. Until we get divorced, you better stop pulling such immature stunts.

She angrily muttered something under her chin which he didnt hear.

Did you say something?

I said My Foot! And she took the passenger seat in the front.

There is something about her spunky attitude, silly anger, and red nose that attracted him. He smirked closing the door and came around to take the wheel. He smiled inwardly at her angry face as he clicked in his seat belt.

By the way, I really like when you tie your hair up. He smiled.

She immediately took the hair pin out and left her hair open, which is exactly what he wanted. Poor thing, she is doing everything the way he likes without even realizing it. She pulled her hair all to her right shoulder, hiding her right side of the face from him gaze.

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Do I have to buy your choice or do I have a say?

As long as pick the best.

Bhaiyya, show me the cheapest saree you got?

Arnav furiously looked at Khushi.

Ma'm this is 350 rupees.

Do you have in red?

Arnav held her wrist and turned her to him, What the hell are you trying to prove here?

She turned towards the salesman, still her eyes fixated on Arnav, Bhaiyya, pack this one. This is beautiful. I will wear this for my wedding.

Arnav thought for few secs and gave her a wicked smile. Ofcourse, I should have known. You must be waiting for your lover to choose the saree for you, right?

This is between you and me. Dont drag him into this.

I am sure you have to ask his opinion for the wedding ring as well.

Arnav stop it!

Why dont you call him here? He will chose for you. In fact, give me his number, I will call him and I am sure he will faint looking at the price tags. Tell me one thing, didnt you find a better person that you are stuck with him for 8 long years.

Arnav you are crossing your limits.

I havent crossed yet Khushi Kumari Gupta. The moment I cross my boundaries, I swear I will not spare you or your lover. Mind you! Stop playing your freaking games with me and do as I say.

What is important for you Mr. Raizada, bride or what she wears? She asked calmly folding her hands at her midriff.

Apparently, it is very important for me, that my chosen bride wears best and carries herself as princess amidst 1000 people. Moreover, this kind of lavish wedding might not happen again in your life. After all your so called lover might not just afford it.

You know what? I pity you Mr. Raizada. One day will come when you will realize your money is nothing but pieces of paper in front of my love.

Your love for that ass****. Please dont insult love.

My Love is pure and it will stay alive through thick and thin no matter whether my man is rich or poor.

The question is, Is his love pure? And for your kind information, when you lose everything the same love in that heart turns into pain. Its the money that satisfies your needs, even your aching heart.

When you lose everything, its your heart that strengthens you, making you more stronger, not the money.

I beg to differ Ms. Gupta. I guess you are in some fantasy world. When you lose everything, you lose your heart as well.

Is that the reason why you dont have a heart, Mr. Raizada?

THUD..Thats the shocking revelation to Arnav Singh Raizada himself. How dare she say that he has no heart. Well thats exactly what he tried to prove for last few mins yet he is upset that she categorized him into that. She is not wrong. He is got no heart or is there one hidden deep down his masked up ego.

He looked at her furiously with nothing to say in reply. For the first time in these years, he is being defeated again and again by this young lady through some simple questions, yet so difficult to answer. He walked away from her and gave his credit card to the biller at the checkout counter. She noticed his every move, his flustered frame, his uneasy attitude and most importantly pain in his eyes. He is angry but his eyes are soft as ever and expressed pain and confusion at what he has become.

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Author's Note:

I will going on vacation at the end of next week. So, I am not sure if I will give an update before then. If not, I will give you one in the week of July 8. For those who live in USA, Happy 4th of July!


Edited by deepthiya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I can't digest this fact that NK is negative here 😕
Shayam negative hota to achcha hota 😆 just kidding.
Awesome update.
Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Fantastic update & thanks for the PM 😊

Khushi's anguish of being a prey to one man's stubborn decision was very well brought out. NK's thoughts insulted love…...it speaks low of him to choose his lover's wealth over her pure love…...poor girl failed to see the change in him….….she still blindly loves him

Khushi disgusted on hearing NK's plans but then thinking that this was the only plan he could come up with in such a short time & leaving with a heavy heart reflected on the extent she believed in her love & how confused & vulnerable she felt

NK is such a selfish & greedy man …………… he insisting Khushi to ask 50% of the share proved how much he loves her money at the present & not her. He's so horrible to ask the girl whom he loves to get married to another guy, keep the marriage a secret & moreover ask her to demand him share from the property that rightfully belonged only to Arnav. I know Khushi is blinded by NK's love so in order to marry him she's taken a hasty decision by accepting to carry out his plans. But since Khushi is such a sensible girl who's helping her father run his business & moreover since she knows about Arnav's past & how it was his father's money that helped her father to grow to such an extent, she demanding a share from Arnav's property that should only solely belong to him though his father has registered it in their names made me analyze whether Khushi will think about it & realize what a grave mistake she's trying to commit & also conclude what a self centered man NK is who wants to claim another man's hard earned money. I was thinking this way as even Khushi felt at a point of time that what NK was demanding is not right. But I'm eagerly waiting to see how the story proceeds further & what & how things will happen in Arnav, Khushi & NK's life

The ASR not heeding to another person's conditions followed by their heated convo was awesome. Arnav mentally analyzing about Khushi & her love after their phone convo & he talking to his dad's photon was so touching 🤗


Arnav hurt on hearing Khushi's pleas on the phone mistaking the call to be that of NK's & Khushi experiencing some unknown peace when she first heard her name from Arnav but then later realizing the source & lashing out on Arnav when he spoke wrong of NK was excellently framed 👏 Though Arnav did ask her to get married, what I liked about him is that he was honest about it. He on hearing her distressed voice asking her whether she was all right the next moment clearly showed the amount of love & concern he has for her


Arnav understanding from Khushi's phone call that NK didn't truly love her & feeling sad for her was well written


Love to read more... WAITING

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice updt
i love arnav
i hope khushi soon see real face of nk
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all thanks alot for the note...u have cleared the assumptions very well :)...looking forward to the light and fun track of the story :)
awesome update...arnav and his replies in front of media was great :)
payal and akash going to marry ,wow
loved the trio friendship...arnav,akash and payal r so easy going with each other,loved it
arnav and khushi convo in the shop was awesome...brilliantly written dear...loved it

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Awesome update !!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it too much
Arnav is so sweet try to make all the thing the way he wants
And Khushi is crazy in anger she did all the things what Arnav wants
Hope soon Khushi come to know Nk's real face
And that how much Arnav love her
Waiting for next update
Enjoy ur holidays

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