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Posted: 12 years ago
My POV is in red...

Just a few thoughts that came to my mind: why cannot Khushi just run away, she has the experience and the qualifications, she obviously realizes that NK does not really love her.
Khushi doesnt yet realize NK's true intentions. If she does, why would she agree for the marriage. She would have just escaped away from everyone.That would be stupid of her. She still thinks NK loves her to the same extent as she does. She is just blindly in love at this point, which we all will be at some point in our life. She is in that relation for 8 years and its difficult to weight out right and wrong without substantial proof. Again as I said before, Khushi is a person who is very committed to her decisions. She takes a sec to fall in love and same amount of time to hate one. You will soon witness this on her marriage night.I cant reveal more at this point.

The last update Arnav just wanted her to sign, and now he wants the whole 9 yard marriage...
Arnav wants only engagement and marriage (no sangeet, haldi or mehendi). And the reason is to show off his status. He wasnt planning for this until Khushi put a divorce condition. He wanna make it public lest his marriage be tagged as secret and one night stand. Moreover in previous chapter, he wasnt interested in marriage but he convinced himself for his dad. After seeing her, he was elated to see the same girl as his fiance. But the moment she asked him to back off, he forced her into marriage with excuse of property. But that was not his intention at all. His ego kicked in and forced her so that he completes his dad's wish. If not his dad, he would have walked away from her. Sorry if I didnt make that clear in last chapter.

From Khushi POV, she can just get on with her life, she is obviously 28 and not responsible to anyone.

The commercial land needs both married not be in love, so why go thru the big marriage. Arnav better realize his feelings for her if he wants a Khushi to marry him, he cannot ask of her to forget everything because he is being a businessman. And slowly make her realize he loves her and what real love is.
I never mentioned in any chapter that Arnav loves her. Yes I agree that he has strong feelings for her and he is very fond of her. But he knows nothing about her in and out and its the same case with her too. I dont think it will be appropriate for him to confess anything at this point.

I hope this story is not going to go like, she is forced to marry, and then Arnav will be a brute to her, she a cry baby, Arnav make Khushi jealous by prancing infront of her with La or Sheetal or one of his models, Khushi cries again and realizes her feelings, she goes back to Arnav to share the feelings with her, and again Arnav is a brute to her, Khushi cries all over again...sincerely hope it is not in those lines.
I hate that making her jealous track...Their love story will start soon and there will not be any brutal treatment from either side. I intended to make this fun love story with intense sequences. In order to get that fun track I have to bring them close together which is what I am doing right now. Its going to turn to very chirpy lighthearted story. Believe me, just little more patience, pretty please. FYI, there is no Lavanya or Sheetal or matter of fact no other girl will enter Arnav's life in this FF. I cant guarantee if they are going to have baby girl, thats different case then...LOL

I am hoping Khushi just shuts the door on all the people, obviously they distanced her all thru her life for no mistake of her life, sure they cared, but still she was alone with no one to speak to. Pretty please, make her go away from both Arnav and NK, both do not deserve her at this point. For all she seems a toy to be played with and moved around, come on Khushi you can do it...
I can not separate Khushi from Arnav. My heart breaks with that thought. It might sound like Arnav is heartless at this point but he is going to be her everything very soon. You will see my point very soon on Marriage day. She will play major role in turning his life brighter. In my previous FF it was Arnav who helped Khushi heal. Its reverse in this story. Hope you will be with me until then.

NK sounds more like Shyam to me here and not like NK...Yeah I realize that. I wanna experiment to see if NK fits in this character. Shyam is more villainous to me for this role. NK is not villain just a mean greedy lover.

Thanks for your comments as always...
Love
Deeps.
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor soul
cant understand nk is back of her wealth
well hope fr best
nice update..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
kushi darling realize dear,wake up see the reality...

thank u for the nice chapter...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi's desperation of wanting to elope and helplessness while speaking to NK was very apparent. She was willing to do anything to makes things work with NK only to have had a reality check. I say she gives both, NK and Arnav a bum pe laat and run off somewhere. 😆 But that's obviously not gonna happen.

Arnav isn't so distant from Khushi after all. He still cares for her... or you can say he is concerned about her. Can't wait to see, or read rather, what happens next and whether Arnav decides to do something about NK personally.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.I am hating this NK...I really Want Khusi to learn some lesson...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay! NK is negative and Arnav knows about him so ASR will on his back to throw him out of Khushi's life .
Awesome update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous chapter, mind-blowing depiction of emotions, just amazing. NK proved Arnav's theory right, nothing matter if Money is concerned, hopefully Khushi learns NK's real intention soon. Superb update and it was exceptionally well written. 😊

A request, since I dont get PM from you, can you please share your blog link as I am reading your last story and it does have content on blog. I am super happy in stalking your story as I know how tedious job it is to send PM 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update
loved it nk is a jerk a greedy man
hope khushi realizes his true intentions
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really loved it..NK surely loves khushi's money I hope she realises everything soon...and chooses arnav over Nk..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
NK is an ass...damn him!!! But thanks t0 him they are getting married. And Khushi is still a child. Unbelievable!!!

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