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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: .Tulip.

nice concept

waiting fr part 1

Will update part 1 asap..!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: maneet-laksh

cnt wait...plz ..plz dnt 4get to pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
V nice prolougue seems intresting huh..
Continue sooonnn...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




very interesting...

Geet-Maan will be married but unhappy...😲

update soon...

thanx for pm...

Welcome..!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Update soon loved the concept

Thank you so much..!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: punam2712

CONGRATS FOR THE NEW STORY

HOPE IT HAS A HAPPY END

Well... It'll have a happy ending..!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dumas

INTERESTING CONCEPT CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE THANKS FOR THE PM


Will update asap..!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u so much..!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Dips..

V nice prolougue seems intresting huh..

Continue sooonnn...😳

That's my pleasure ..!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1

It was a beautiful morning, Maan and his family is heading to a temple in their car. Meanwhile our heroine Geet was on a trip to the same place, as it was a historical visit from his college. It's a very purani temple guarded by a group of people who are very traditional in their beliefs and activities. Girls are enjoying as though it was a picnic. Maan almost reached there and started doing the rituals in the temple. Geet and the crew reached there, checked in an palace there which was allotted for guests there. She was dressed in blue like the mist around; even the clouds changed their pattern to rejoice in her glance. The cool breeze surrounded everywhere. Every little creature was enjoying the chillness around. Geet was so active in meeting people, recording their views, taking photos, etc.. Maan was helping his parents in performing the ritual. Suddenly he could feel a divinity inside. He took a glance at his right, and saw the elegant beauty geet, he was frozen at the second. He could neither hear the mantras of the ritual performed nor his parents' instructions. His glance was only at Geet, He could hear only her bangles' sound. He dropped the flowers in his hand, and walked towards her in ease. He couldn't experience the gravitational pull, he was flying in air. He slowly stepped towards her love. His parents was repeatedly calling him from the back, he turned back and gave a response. But he lost his sight over her, he became restless and started searching her. But he couldn't find her. Finally it was time to leave the place. He left the place with total disappointment.

Maan reached home but his mind was occupied only by geet. Her thoughts haunted him, he couldn't concentrate on his works. So he decided to search his girl where he left her. He started his journey in finding her back. He reached the village. He stayed there constructing a small tent near the temple. His only motive is to see her back. And one fine evening, he found his angel standing by the temple's side. He rushed to talk with her. But there were people around her. He couldn't approach her. Geet along with her mates started their journey to an interior place from there. It was a part of their project. Maan followed them. They stopped in between and started to walk inside a jungle. Maan stopped his car nearby, And started following them.

A shock awaited them, it was a big dreading black bear' They were shocked, started shouting in fright. The bear roared on hearing their voices, they started running here and there. It became a total chaos, everyone lost their way, as it was rainy season, the path was wet, and dirty. They couldn't move so soon. They were separated as single. Maan who was following them, saw the whole confusion right there. He decided to help them, but his only thought was to save Geet. He moved in searching for her. He roamed nearly an hour but he couldn't see any of the girls there. And finally, he saw someone was lying over there. He went near and found that was none other than his geet. She fell down from a rock there, she was deeply hurt and bleeding. Geet was nearly unconscious. He lifted her in his arms. He was searching for a safe place to give her first aid. Geet could feel someone's presence around her, but she was unable to respond in pain. He found a small hut over there. He rushed in. Made her comfortable in a soft cloth. He went out searching for someone to help, but everything was in vain. He couldn't find anyone there. He came back, he found some basic things in the hut. Clothes, candles, pot filled with water, some bread and milk, Maan noticed everything, he guessed someone must stay here, but he didn't find any human activities around. He cleaned the blood in Geet's wound and made her sleep at ease. She slept forgetting her pain. Maan sat nearby and started adoring the sleeping beauty.

Precap: Maaneet's Vivah


Edited by Jananivjc - 12 years ago

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