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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Loved both parts 56th and 57th both finally confess love the way you show their feelings how they share and cry in between this amazing well written I am happy both handle situation like mature people amazing dear love it..both feel each other pain but still smiling for each other this is called true love

Thanks Monika.
They were always mature but sometimes we have to pay heavily for being mature
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Originally posted by: rsusmita

nice part dear loved it

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Originally posted by: ritvi_mg

amazing update but bahut choti si update thi 😃

but phir bhi luvd it maan geet ke pass baitha rha kyuki wo chahta tha ki usse sabse pehle geet wish kare aur maan ne geet se apna bday gift bhi mang liya aur wo bhi kitna accha ki geet uske saath time spend kare jab tak unki kismat ka faisla nahi ho jata aur ab wo chori chupe long drive par chale gye
aww luvd it jab geet ne kha ki abhi toh pyaar hua aur pehle hi wish puri nahi ki aur h umare maan ne jaldi se apni geet ki wish puri kar di
luvd the update di very much
ab to me waiting for their long drive nd their sweet romantic moments
thanks for the pm di 😃
update soon


jaldi me hoon

Edited by rashmivaish - 12 years ago
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Part-58

maan stopped the bike on icecream parlour.geet's eyes started to shine-wow... Icecream

maan smiled at her. he asked her to sit on the bench. and went himself in to take icecream.he came back with butter scotch cone in his hand and handed over it to geet.

Geet-Only one? where is your's?

maan-This is for you I don't want to have.

Geet-Okey. and started to lick that icecream. The way she was enjoying it, maan was having water in his mouth

Maan-Geet,I too want to have the ice cream.

Geet- Go buy one for your self.

Maan-no I will eat only this one.

Geet saw him with her raised eyebrows-Maan I know what you want to say but I m not going to share it with you at any cost.

Maan-chalanging maan singh Khurana? ab to mujhe yahi khaani hai
.It was past mid night so not many people were there only few young couples were there and no one was watching them.
Geet-Forget it.you know that this is my favorite and I will not let you touch it.
Maan-Hmmm...Let's see
Maan came forward to eat the ice cream but Geet took her step backward saying-You are not going to get it and she moved from there but maan held her with her hand and jerked her towards himself .Geet was holding the cone with her hand up in the air a little bit above her head and with that jerk ice cream cone was turned towards her and some ice cream came on her face.maan saw that and smirked with the naughty smile.

Geet-Maan dekho don't do any thing stupid.We are at public place
Maan-Really?but where is public?
Geet looked the soroundings. no one was there so she saw maan again he was still holding her hand so she gave up. Maan cupped her face and leaned near her face. Geet closed her eyes and waited but felt nothing. She opened her eyes and looked at him. he was looking at the ice cream on her face which was ready to slip from there.he took some ice cream from her face with the help of his finger and licked it-It's really yummy.better than ever.
Geet awwed with that gesture of him for not crossing the limit.She was expecting something else so without thinking she mischievously put some ice cream on his cheeks and then licked with her tongue-this is the way to share an ice cream with your love maan
and she ran toward the bike to avoid the embarrassment. Maan's mouth was wide open on her advancement. he smiled and followed her.they again settled on bike.but said nothing as he didn't want her to feel shy
maan-Ab kahaan jana hai.
Geet-wherever you want. tumne hi to kaha ki aaj tum decide karoge ki kya karna hai.
Maan -okey. and he started the bike.
The weather was turning cloudy.It seemed that nature too was joining them in their short but memorable journey.
and few minutes later rain started to fall. first it was slow but later it was too heavy that it became difficult for maan to drive. he spotted a bus shelter which was covered partially so he stopped the bike and both ran under it.they settled on the bench.
they both were feeling cold and geet started to shiver because of cold. Seeing no other option Maan came near her to take her in his arms.Geet too didn't react as she needed some warmth miserabily.She too cuddled herself there and kept her head on his shoulder and maan too put his cheek on her head.both were listening the sound of rain

Geet-Maan
Maan-Hmmm
Geet-wo.. I m sorry.
Maan saw her with confusion-Kyun?
Geet-Because it was me who convinced you to take the bike.Ager hum car me hote to problem nahin hoti na
Maan-But I m happy
Geet-why?
Maan-agar Car me hote to how we would have enjoyed the rain.
Geet- really? she got excited-tumhen pata hai ki barish me bheegne ka apna hi maza hai.I feel that I m connected to earth as well as sky at the same time.
Maan-you have very different opinion.wo to hum hamesha hi connected rahte hain.by the wind or sun light
Geet-Maan, you are a big bore.arrey!Think some romantic we can not hold those things, but we can touch rain by our hands.we can feel it.So many poets have written romantic poems on rain.have you heard any poet has written a romantic poem on sunlight or wind?
Maan- hmm... maanna padega ki tumhaare paas dimaag to hai.
Geet-What? you mean that I don't have any brain?
maan-when i said so?
Geet saw him by turning her face and saw him smiling-do you really think that I m talking silly? I will not talk to you.tum meri baat mazaak me le rahe ho?
Maan-Geet. yaar jhagde ke liye hamaare pass time nahin hai.
Geet smiled to hear this-kyun? this will too be a part of our memories.kal jab hum saath nahin honge to hum in khatti mithi yaadon ke sahaare hi to jiyenge and she walked in the rain again and brought her face up to feel rain on it.
Maan came near her and saw her for few moments-Geet, rain can not hide the tears and you don't need to hide your tears from me.and he spread his arms and signaled her to come to him. She came near him and leaned on him. He hugged her tight to make her calm.and she too reciprocated with same.the rain was healing their paining hearts.

rain was slowed down so maan decided to move ahead.
they started again but after going few kilomiters the bike stopped.
Geet-Maan what happened? Bike ruk kyun kayi?
Maan-Let me check and after checking -fuel tank is empty.
Geet.Oh no. what we will do now.how we will go home maan?
Maan -let's see. They walked to some distance to find the fuel station to get the petrol for the bike. but they could not find any.
Geet-Maan ab kya hoga mujhe tention ho rahi hai.
Maan-don't worry.And he looked in one direction and located a temple.
Maan-Geet paas hi mein mandir hai chalo wahaan chalte hain .shayad koi madad mil jaaye.baarish se bhi protection ho jaayegi
Geet-Okey
They went in the direction of temple after locking the bike.

Precap-wait to see what destiny has planned for them because night is still long

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Hello friends
Hope you liked it. in my next update I m going to take some writer's liberty. In my opinion in real life it's very unusual.It's neede for the story to move ahead.hope you will accept that -Rashmi


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Posted: 12 years ago
me first!!!!🥳
awesome update...
geet has become so bold..
loved maaneet moments...

Edited by sandymg - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
R dey gng to get married? Let it b accident...I knw my imagination is too wired bt I want dem together...god poor souls...
Edited by maanmeet1 - 12 years ago
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bus Maan-Geet ko milwa do aur hum kya expect kar sakte hain...

wonderful update...

their moments were so beautiful...

their love and pain with hesitation mixed in it making it too much exciting...

so they are going to temple...

waiting to know what will happen there...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

wonder what is in their fate
they are going to mandir 😉

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