VR OS: In Lamhon Ke Daaman Mein

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Mehek Asaria

@Sweet.Sarcastic

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

[/B]I love open left ends..
Though I never read vrimar the song bought me here..
I love the song and as there had been a krdce on this I could imagine it as well...

Well written..
Do send me pm's if possible..

-Maggie...[/B]

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Neha

@miss_neha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Omg that was sooo good, I mostly don't read stuff on vrimar, I stick to taarey, but this was sooo good

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annie

@patie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Simply amazing work loved it Vishwa 😊

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raddhi

@raddhi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Wow awsm I luv it
Spl amar dream I wish
It would happen in real thanks
For PM

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Alefiya Magar

@alef_mgr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

VriMar rock yaar...!!! Want to see them together badly...!!!! but *sigh*..ok now b'ful os keep writing 😊

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Vishwa

@-Inferno-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Thank you so much everyone!
I apologize for not individually replying but I am at loss of time right now.
Anyhow, I really appreciate all the people reading this OS despite them never reading things on Vrimar. It's really sweet of you guys.
Also to everyone that commented and liked it, thank you so much!

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Debu

@crazy2012

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Vishi..congo, you have successfully done it..you deserve a huge round of applause👏👏👏

this is beautifully written..as usual😊

I will mention two things here which I liked most :

the part when you have written a butterfly in stomach when someone comes to opposite gender

and the point when you wrote, Amar has seen her to grow as an individual, actor and now dancer

my most fav lines ever..really well done yaar👍🏼