SWARON OS: SILENT LOVE ( CHALLENGED)

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This was the challenge given by Sneha( Swaron9113) 😃

-Situation: An orphan boy who think "if speech is silver than silence is golden".
That's why he keep her feeling inside her heart.
A rich spoiled who get badly fall for the boy.
But now she is frustrated bcoz he never say anything to her.
Happy ending.

I have tried to write the best... but it turned out something really different and waste... i hope you will like it... hope i have done at least 5% justice to what you were expecting... 😳

So here goes the OS

SILENT LOVE

"One..two...three..." His eyeballs continue to move in circular motion as he was trying to count the no of rotation a fan takes in a minute...

Swayam...you are not jobless...that you are giving your attention to the fan...Only few minutes are left...if you don't make a move...She will be gone...Forever. Rey shouted at his best friend who didn't react at all...

You know what Swayam...back in past what happened was destiny...but today you are going to lose her because of your attitude towards her...I know you love her...She knows it too...She just needs to hear it from you..You just need to take the first step and she will cover the remaining distance...

He still didn't response...Rey sighed and left him alone hoping his best friend will find a way to get his love back...

Rey's words rang in his ears and his mind drifted back to the past from where it all had begun...

Roughly around 12 years back...Swayam and Rey were dropped in an orphanage after their parents passed away in a plane crash...Life had taken a huge turn for this two boys...In matter of hours they lost their family and were in an orphanage where life was worst than one can experience in hell...

It was another unfortunate day as others, Swayam was walking towards his room when he saw their nanny stealing money from the orphanage account...He had acted brave and complained to the trusties... to punish him...they had kidnapped him and Rey and beat them all night and left them on the terrace of the building in the heavy rain fall, where the water pouring from the sky caused burning sensation on the fresh wounds...They were left unattended, none of them bother to even take them to a doctor. This incident had surely left a huge impact on him, from that day he always remained quiet, never did he speak or conveyed his feeling to anyone not even to his best friend Rey.

He got up from the bed and removed a scrapbook from his cupboard in which he had written down how he feels about her, he felt it was a lot more easier to do than telling it to her...He travelled back in the past 3 years ago.

They were finally in college and got admission in the most reputed college based on scholarships. They had just checked in the hostel and were enjoying the cool breeze at night...when he saw a girl on the college terrace...

She had tied a cloth covering her eyes and was standing on the wall of the college building balancing. He threw his coffee mug away and ran towards the terrace...just as he reached the door of the terrace he saw her leg slip and before she could fall...he held her and pulled her directly landing on the floor with her on top of him, her breathing was heavy and he could feel her breath dancing on his chest making his heart skip beats...he raised his hands and removed the cloth covering her eyes and for the first time he stared deep in her big greenish eyes who stole his heart in that one look...His eyes moved over her face absorbing her beauty through his eyes...but in the very next second she got up and ran away from.

A few days later he saw the same girl in the college crowd, she had gathered all the attention towards her as she slapped a boy hard for bumping into her and spoiling her mood...

Swayam walked towards them and helped the boy and then he took the juice bottle from her hand and tossed it on her dress spoiling it.

She was left stunned...never any one had dared to behave like this with her...She moved forward to slap him also when he caught hold of her hand and twisted it behind her back and stuffed some money in her purse...

This is the money for the laundry dear... and then he pushed her letting her fall on the ground and walked away...

She had liked it...She liked it... She was impressed by him...She had found a guy who had guts to reply her back...

This was just the beginning...

He turned the pages of his scrap book... going through the pages ...he smiled remembering her cute antics when she tried getting his attention and failed miserably...Not really he had noticed her but never let her know about it...

Cut it to the day...on socials when a girl had tried talking to him and she had slapped that girl and dragged him out from the party...

SWAYAM...why the hell you were talking to her??

It's my wish Sharon... I will talk to whomever I want...

No...i will decide...because I love you and you are my boyfriend..

Are you crazy...when did I say that??

You don't need to..who asked you too... I am Sharon rai Prakash... I get what I want and I want you...that's it...

Saying so she smashed her lips on his kissing him hungrily...he tried pushing her but she jumped more on him...finally he lost the battle and kissed her back...they kissed for a long time and from that day they were a couple in the eyes of people...She had announced it to the world...

He didn't utter a word...nor accepted her nor rejected her...They were hanging in the middle...

Days passed and Sharon was stuck to him the whole day...she was flooding with emotions and he was as stubborn as a rock...When she didn't get any response from him, she forced it out from him...

She made him ACS..so that he could spend time with her...she being the trustee daughter forced him to joined the dance team, forced him to do romantic duets..he loved each moment of it but she was clueless about it...

She once marched into his room in the boys hostel at night...through his window and jumped on his bed and hugged him from back...

Sharon..what are you doing here?? Swayam asked without even bothering to look at her once...

How dare you ask me this question? You should be happy that I came here??

Well, One thing is for sure the authorities won't be happy seeing you here...with that he broke the fire alarm and the whole hostel woke up..she had no option but leave the place...she got so mad over it that practically got kicked him out of the hostel and on her dad's request he had to stay as a guest in her house...

She sneaked out in his room and stood in front of him crossing his arms over her chest...

So, now what will you Mr.Shekhwat? You can't avoid me now. She stated smirking...

Okay! He said and pulled her in his arms hugging her petite frame...She didn't object it...she too placed her arms around him hugging him...

Initially, the things went on fine...they practically slept hugging each other at nights...they kissed every time they were together...kissing had become a habit now...however, things begun to worse after they got too intimate with each other one night...

As usual that night Sharon walked into his room and hugged him from back placing her hands around his waist.

Sharon, why are you wet?? Swayam asked...

I just took a shower! Aachoo! She sneezed... He turned around and cupped her face...

See, you caught cold...who asked you to take a shower at this hour?

What's up with you today?? Do you even care? She turned around and moved towards the bed...

She was adjusting the comforter, when he hugged her and nuzzled in her neck...he moved his hair to the side and placed some kisses along her length of her neck...

His hands sneaked in under her shirt feeling the softness of her waist...his hands lingered all over her waist..he squeezed her curves which made her gasp...he turned around in a swift moment and took her lips between his kissing her...showering her with all the love stored in his heart for her...

They parted when their lungs needed oxygen...he picked her up in his arms and carefully placed her on the bed..He raised her shirt a little and kissed on her stomach...and continued placing kisses till her neck...he placed his lips on her once again and kissed her. He continued placing kisses all over her when suddenly Sharon asked him...

What does this all mean for you Swayam??

He ignored her question and continued kissing her...when she asked again...

Are we even in a relationship??

He stopped his actions and lay beside her...

Sharon, you are asking me this...You are the one who announced that we are a couple. He said calmly...

You didn't want the world to know Swayam??

You never asked my opinion on it...he again said it casually...

You never said you accepted our relationship?? Did you accept it??

I never rejected it also... so what the point whether I accept it or not...

That's it... I am going ...she got up to leave when he held her hand and pulled her back...

You are stretching things for no reason Sharon...

You are right..I have been stretching things for too long now...it's time to end them... saying so she got out of his grip and walked towards the door.

Sharon...why are you getting upset??

Swayam...I love you. But I can't stay with you anymore...so I am ending our imaginary relationship...

Sharon...everything has been going good...what's the problem now??

I am done Swayam...it's been 3 years now...and I don't even know what you feel about me... do you feel also or not...don't know...

Sharon, don't you know what you are for me??

No...Tell me what you feel Swayam...

I...Nothing Sharon...Nothing... he turned around facing his back to her...

He thought she will be back once her anger fades, but he was wrong...she had created distance between them...He didn't see her for days being in the same house...

Of course, he loved her...Dam she was the only one who he loved dearly...but he wasn't able to say it...he wasn't able to break the shield he had created around him and one day her Dad called him and gave him the responsibility for her marriage arrangements...He was hurt but he didn't even question her but when she did.. he said he is happy for her and she made a right decision...

Thap he closed his scrapbook with anger blazing in his eyes... Dam...why can't she come back to me...why can't she be mine...Why...

He raised his eyes and saw her dressed up as a bride, under a red cloth held by her cousins at the ends... She looked beautiful...like a goddess...like an angel...she was ready for the marriage and she was heading downstairs to take vows with someone else and she will belong to him...

This thought killed him...that was it...he called up Rey...

Rey...turn off the main switch I want all the lights off... Rey did as he said...As soon as the light went off...he pulled Sharon in his room and locked it and pinned her to the wall...

What are you doing Swayam??

In reply he just hugged her holding her against him tightly and started sobbing...

Don't marry him...Say no for this marriage...don't go away from me...

Why Swayam?? Why do you want me to break this marriage??

Do as I say Sharon...Just don't get married...you are not getting married.. That's it...

Leave me Swayam...she tried pushing him but he just held her close not bunching an inch...

Why the hell you can't understand Sharon??

Then make me understand Swayam...I am listening tell me...

He lowered his head and his grip on her loosens and she walked away saying...

Forget it Swayam, you won't be able to say it... I am going; people are waiting for me...

Just then he held her wrist and pulled her back towards him...

Sharon...I...I...

Say it Swayam...Say it once...

I love you...I love you Sharon...I love you very much...She closed her eyes in relief and placed her forehead against his...

Do you have any idea, how long I have waited to hear this.

He moved back and raised her face placing a finger under her chin and rubbed the tears on her cheeks...

Sharon..I love you..i really do... After mom and dad death...the time Me and Rey spent in the orphanage...Life was really harsh on us... our words and feelings had no value...Even if we said something we were beaten for it...or it was simply ignored...i don't know when and how I was scared to tell my feeling..i didn't had much strength to lose someone I love again...So before anyone could hurt me I never allowed anyone to come close to me... but then you came... I loved you from the day I saw you on the terrace... but I was scared...that...

I Love you too Swayam... I am here to stay...i am not going to leave you alone...

Then don't get married to that...to that... What is that fellow name?? Whoever he is ...let go tell him that you are mine...and you are not getting married to him..

Sharon smiled at him and asked...Swayam, Did you read the wedding card?

NO...why would I read your wedding card with someone else...

Swayam just read it once...before he could protest she handed him the wedding card lying on the table beside his bed...

Swayam opened it with a disgusted face and read loud in mocking tone...

Mr.Raipraksh cordially invites you to the marriage of his beloved daughter

Ms. Sharon Raiprakash

With

Mr. Swayam Shekhawat...

He looked at her with a shock expression, and Sharon busted laughing...

Dumb...how could you even think I will get married to someone else...

Wait...you are getting married to me and I only don't know this...What is going on here...She placed his hands around his neck and said..

I know you love me Swayam...I wanted you to tell it...I knew you would never read the wedding card when you are too upset with it...so this was all a plan...

Seriously...you mean... This marriage is all fake...it's not happening...

Wohooo! He jumped with happiness but stopped when he saw her glaring at him..

Obviously, this marriage is happening...If I wait for you to propose me ...we will definitely marry at the age of 40...

He just crashed his lips on hers...her eyes opened wide on his sudden action but slowly closed it when he deepened the kiss...They kissed for long and stopped when they heard his phone ringing...Swayam angrily picked his phone...

Swayam..dude if you are done come down plz... people are waiting for you both.. Rey said in a teasing tone...

They took the vows to stay with each other for a life time along and hand in hand moved together towards a life which had only love and happiness stored for them..

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Nehal

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Nehal92 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserved for Sneha

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Amaging os.
Btw hey why u say that u didn't do justice wth my concpt?

Btw tmhara ni pta bt i so luv ths story.

The way u describe sharon's character m in luv wth ths character.
1st m liking sharon's character more that swayam.

I never saw or read ths kind of sharon in any swaron story.
Ths is like a treat to read ths kind of sharon.

I so wish aisa kuch show me bhe dakhne ko milta.

I mean seriously i get pitty on the grl who was talking wth swayam.
Sharon slap her just because she was talkng wth swayam.[:-O].
Actualy no talking wth sharon's swayam.

Nd i so luv swayam's rxn when sharon say i love u.
Nd we r couple.
He was like ye kb hua???[:-O]
sharon kissed swayam that to forcefully.
Nd finally swayam kiss her too.

Sharon boys hostle me window se gye that too in 9yt.
Nd her expression ab tm mughe kaise avoid karoge???
I mean seriously i was lyk sharon is really a grl??

I luv ur 1 sec sneti moment that made me remeber ek tha tiger.
I really lyk one thng abt ths film nd ur os nd thats u didn't make ths os total senti bt still u show sharon's pain how hurt she be??
Aftr so much lung a guy. She didn't find a clue what he feel abt her??

Nw cm bk to end swayam ke shadi sharon's se ho rhe the nd he didn't hv any clue.
Bechara swayu.

Hey btw u mention tmne kuch aur plan kiya tha.
Do write that too.
I wl luv to read two diffrent story on the same concept.
Edited by Nehal92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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reserved for Partner 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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edit awesome os👏👏👏👏👏👏
just loved every word of it swaron is magical lDay DreaminglDay DreaminglDay DreaminglDay DreaminglDay DreaminglDay Dreamingbut somehow u make them seem even more magicallDay DreaminglDay DreaminglDay DreaminglDay DreaminglDay DreaminglDay DreaminglDay DreaminglDay Dreaming love your work
keep writing and do update ur ffs whenever u have time
i am a big waala pankhaa (fan) or say air conditioner lol of yours 😆😆😆

Edited by cenation123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nehal92

reserved for Partner 😃



the OS is AMAZING...i loved every part of it..u have done justice to sneha's challenge...


Welcome back partner...the best fanfic writer on Swaron is back ...(along wid bazz)...missed u would b an understatement...this post is only for bookmarking this OS😳

u are back..wid a BANG 😃

Love u partner🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res!

Edited.

Nehu, sorry for this short shorty comment as i am getting ready for exam and i am about to leave the house, you know for my super paper after an hour or so! Ugh!

I didn't read the description Sneha gave to you for the challenge but i believe this is so far one of the best.. no no the best OS written by you! I mean i can't explain how much i like it! Today to get a bit relax i watched Yeh jawani hai deewani finally and this OS reminded me of the movie! Just loved the movie.. i mean how they slept hugging each other like a true lovers but still Swayam wasn't confessing! And Sharon's style to make him confess was amazing.. i just loved it!

I dunno why but for a bit of sec, i cried when Swayam said nothing leave it Sharon.. i felt bad for Sharon! It was super awesome and amazing OS.. keep writing such amazing stuff please!

3 cheers for this one shot!



-Marium
Edited by -Marium- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing
loved it
beautiful
loved the title...
done justice to the challenge..
great 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing os I love it to the core
Thnx for the scrap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS!!!!
You described swayam's hidden feelings amazingly!!!
and poor sharon kept the relationship going for 3 years!!
that was a really creative challenge!!
and you wrote it amazingly!!!
poor swayam went through so much that caused him to become so closed up!!!
and loved the ending he finally said it!!!!
Great OS!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nehal! Soo great to see your work :)
A very well penned OS. And justice ki toh baat hi chodho..tum toh seedhe rock krti ho.
You amazingly did the challenge man,it was so romantic and emotional at the same time. Swayam saying i love you was the best part :)
But i really loved that dialogue of sharon--If you will propose me then we will get married at the age of 40 :D :D

Another Super Work.

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