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Riya Kapoor

@RiyaArShaKapoor

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Did's itz jst awsm..luv it n swayam ki zulfien can imagine n maine frst tym ye song suna bt u realy rite u should try a ss story..love u alots

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

awesome os

do pm me if you write more

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Yukta

@taareeyforever

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

OMG !! pastryy u rockd yaar...it was sooo ammazng..each n every emotion was soo well described..u know oehle to i hesitated to read swaron coz ive nvr read one ( actually hesitate nai kiys bt likhne me kya jata hai 🤣 ) n trust me itnaaa achha tha..it touched my heart yaar..dil khush kar ditta !! D way tune weather describe kiya..omg !! It was soo awesumm..nd moreover swaron..dey wer engagd yaar !! Yippeee 😃...swayams hair his prized possession 🤣...i mst say heels bhi swayam ke sath hai 🤣 swaron was sooo ammazng..startng se lekar end tak i was sooo engrossed in it...sooo beautifully writtn n der kiss..😳 haaye !! par thoda doubt hai...pakka tune hi likha hai na ?? 🤣

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

That was beautifully written :-)

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Shailja (sweets)

@PM.kriyaansh

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

OMG !!

Vedliii ... U write so Fab darls 🤗

So, Loved it from the bottom of my heart ! ❤️

The title ws Perfect fr this ! Wow!!!

Really Grand and Mesmerizing !!! 😛

Loved the last convo between SwaRon.

Seriously, damn Beautiful !!!

Loved ur writings ... Do write more in near future and if u do don frget to PM me !!! 😃

Loadss Of Love ❤️

-Ur's Sugar . ^_^

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Res
unres
.
First let me re read it
.
HOW THE HELL I DINT GET PM FOR THIS BEFORE...
*angry*angry*
.
Seriously who would like to miss such amazing os man <3

jaan its SUPER AWESOME
m speechless after reading it

pehle toh "tum hi ho"...dude this song is all over my mind these days
i just freaking love its lyrics
2nd...that too one of my fav couple...OMGGG
me super likey

swayam in coat and sharon in saree that too in rain...meh toh wahi mar gayi...haayeee <3

you know that dialogue of rey "jab jab sharon pari giregi tab tab swayam...,.."
that one
it stole my heart...TOTALLY...

And then he scooping her in his arms...fab ending
.

beautiful piece of work jaan
.
you you you...where wer you hiding this talent of your *glaring*

plz write more such stuff if possible...

Thanx for the pm
-kinjal