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Posted: 20 years ago
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Ranveer lifts her in his arms and starts walking past the garden towards the skool gate

Tia keeps on looking at him

T:Ranveer….Tum ne Tia ke question ka answer nahi diya…par Tia ko lagta hai..ki tum aaj bhi Tia ke liye care karte ho

Tia runs her fingers across Ranveer's cheek and Ranveer stops and looks at her

R: Tia………..

T:Ranveer….tumhe lagta hai ki Tia ne drugs liye hai na

R:Ha Tia…..par aap toh stoned thi na..toh aapko yeh….

T: Ranveer…Tia ne koi drugs nahi liye hai….Tia ko pata hai…ki tum Tia ke liye aaj bhi care karte ho na…hai na

R:woh Tia…

T:hai na Ranveer??

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#12

Ranveer puts her down

R:nahi Tia…

T:jhoot…tum jhoot bol rahe ho Ranveer…Tia can make that out

R:nahi Tia ..yeh jhoot hai

..and begins to walk away..Tia holds his hand and stops him

T:Ranveer agar yeh jhoot nahi hai …toh phir tum Tia ke liye inte worried kyu the jab tumhe laga ki Tia ne drugs liye the

R:woh Tia….

T:Ranveer…tum yeh hide kyu kar rahe ho..ki tum Tia ke liye care karte ho

R:ha Tia …hum aapke liye care karte hai…par aapko isse lya farak padta hai…aap toh hamare liye care nahi karti na…aap toh uss Arjun ki care karti hai…aap toh Arjun se pyaar karti hai na?

T:nahi Ranveer….yeh …yeh saach nahi hai…ha…Tia Arjun ke liye care karti hai…par Tia Arjun se pyaar nahi karti…Tia Arjun ke liye sirf ek dost ke jaise care karti hai…

R:Tia ...agar aap unse pyaar nahi karti... toh aap unke saath kyu hai?

T:kyuki….kyuki woh Tia ko help kar raha tha……tumhe…tumhe bhulane main……

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#13

R:kya…Tia aap hume bhoolna chahti thi …kyu?

T:iss liye…kyuki Tia ko laga ki tum Tia se pyaar nahi karte..Tia ko laga ki tum Tia ke saath sirf kissi revenge ke wajah se ko…Tia bohot hurt thi…aur..iss liye

R:Tia…Tia yeh aapne kya kiya….Tia…aapko yeh laga ki hum aapse pyaar nahi karte

Tia looks into Ranveer's eyes….crying…and just nods

R:Tia…Tia yeh saach nahi hai….Tia hum aapki bohot care karte hai….aapse bohot pyaar karte hai…hamari ankhon mein dekhiye…kya aapko lagta hai….ke hum jhoot bol rahe hai…

Tia looks into Ranveer's eyes and realises that he is saying the truth…Tia hugs him

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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R:Tia..aap toh hamari zindagi hai….hum aapse bohot pyaar karte hai…Tia aaj ke baad kabhi aisa kayal bhi aapne dil main maat layiye ki ….ki hum aapse pyaar nahi karte

T:Ranveer…Tia is sorry…Tia ko maaf ka do….Tia ne bohot badi galti ki hai

R:Tia…please…aap ...aap maat royi…aab toh saab clear ho gaya hai na….please Tia…hum aapko aise rohte hue nahi dekh sakte…please maat royiye

Ranveer wipes Tia's tears and holds her in his arms.

T:Ranveer….Tia aab kabhi aaisi galti nahi karegi….Tia loves u a lot…Tia cant live without you..

R:Tia ..hum bhi aapke bagair nahi reh sakte

T:Ranveer…tum aab Tia ko chadle kabhi nahi jaoge na?…tum Tia ko chaode ke Rajasthan nahi jaoge na?

R:nahi Tia…aab hum aapko chodke kahi nahi jayenge…hum aapni zindagi ko chode ja bhi kaha sakte hai😃

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Ranveer kisses Tia on her forehead

R:Tia…

T:ha Ranveer..

R:Tia…humne aapke liye kuch laya hai

T:kya Ranveer (her face lits up)

Ranveer removes the rose that was hidden in his ensemble and gives its to Tia

T:Ranveer…this is so beautiful…tumne yeh Tia ke liye laya

R: ha Tia….aapke siwa hum yeh kissi aur ko dene ka sooch bhi nahi sakte

Tia hugs Ranveer and gives him a quick peck on the cheek

T:Thanks so much…Tia ko yeh gift bohot achha laga…This is the best gift Tia has received today..Tumne Tia ko diya hai na ....is liye😃😳

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Just then they play a soft romantic song in the party hall…Ranveer and Tia hear it from where they are

R: (extends his hand towards Tia)…kya hum aapke saath is song pe dance kar sakte hai?

T:Tia was waiting to hear this .....and dance with u ....for so long

Tia gives her hand to Ranveer and the two on them dance together …close to eachother…as if the rest of the world doesn't exist…..enjoying being together with eachother after such a long time

***********End of the Fan Fic….and a new beginning for Tia & Ranveer Love story!!!😳😃***********

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#17
Hey....

hope all of you like this one...

do let me know what u thought of it 😃

thx

lamina
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Posted: 20 years ago
#18
That was nice Lamina 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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great i wish i couls so much at as stretch
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Posted: 20 years ago
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it ws absolutely rocking .. it ws totally great .. cool!

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