Dhooa/Smoke - FAN FIC

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Hi..

Here is a fan fic for the Tia and Ranveer fans….hope u like it

BTW – the parts where they r thinking have been formatted in italics

It's Tia and Ashi's bday. Tia is sitting in her room getting ready for the party. She is dressed in the red dress portraying Zeenat Aman from Hare Rama Hare Krishna.

T: Angels….Tia is ready for the party….How is Tia looking

P: Tia tum bohot achhi lag rahi ho…aur phir ho sakta hai ki Tia kabhi acchi na lage?

M: Ya babes…u r looking great

T: Thanks angels…tum dono bhi bohot achi lag rahi ho

P: Tia ..chale..warna hum party ke liye late ho jayene

T:Relax babes….Tia ke bina koi party nahi ko sakti…aur yeh toh Tia ki bday party hai..dekhna aaj Tia uss loser ashi se bohot pretty lage gi…sabko aise hi lage ga ki aaj sirf Tia ka bday hai

M: Ha babes….waise bhi Ashi kuch weird hi pehen ke aayegi

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago

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Meanwhile….MP is passing by and hears all this. She goes to Ashi to inform her of this. Ashi is dressed like Anarkali

MP:hey Ashi…guess what ..maine abhi suna

Ashi (ABR):kya kua MP?

MP:mein uss Tia ke kamare ke pass se gujar rahi thi…woh apni bimbos ko bata rahi thi ki woh inti pretty lagegi ki everyone will think its only her bday party

ABR:ya right…timbo wishes…paata nahi pari ke brains ko kya ho gaya hai…hang on…timbo ko brains kaha hai..😆

MP: ha right…woh toh hai….usne koi weird costume pehna hai….Zeenat Aman ka…dum maro dum wala

ABR:kya….are u serious?

MP:ha ashi ..maine abhi dekha….btw woh usme itni buri bhi nahi lag rahi thi

ABR: well …just wait till I get my hands on her….i have a plan

MP: kya

ABR:listen….(Ashi whispers the plans in MP's ears)

MP: kya…that's so funny...u r brilliant

ABR:hai na….i just need to make a call to kukki…aab aayega maaza

Ashi calls kukki and asks her to get a smoking pipe..dum maro types

Kukki comes to the skool immediately with the pipe. Ashi and MP meet her outside and pick up the pipe

K:Ashi..tumhe yeh pipe kya chahiye…tum iska kya karogi

ABR:don't worry kukki…yeh mere liye nahi hai….

K: Ashi…

ABR:Relax kukki…main tumse baad mein milti hu…I need to go now

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Ashi and MP enter the party hall and find Tia there in a corner on a sofa. She is alone there as Meher has gone away with Nakool and Pri is chatting with sweety. Ashi and MP go to Tia.

ABR: MP….tumhe nahi lagta hi timbo ko bilkul dressing sense nahi hai

T:Kya….very funny….Tia ke pass tumhare tacky comments sun ne ka time nahi hai..leave Tia alone ok

ABR:MP …lagta hai bhalai ka jamana hi nahi hai

MP: ha Ashi..hum toh yahan help karne aaye the

Tia looks at them suspiciously

T: Kya matlab hai tumhara

ABR:Tia …tum aaj ye kya dress karke aayi ho?

T: kyu tumhe nahi dikhta….dressing sense ke saath saath tumhari aakhen bhi poor ho gayi hai?...tumhe dekhai nahi deta ki Tia ne Zeenat Aman jaise clothes pehne hai…dum mara dum style

ABR: kya…yeh Zeenat Aman style hai…woh bhi dum maro dum type..no ways…agar yeh woh type ke clothes hai ...toh phir tumhara..dum marne ka pipe kaha hai?

T:what do u mean….tumhe paata hai na…ki Tia smoke nahi karti…usse Tia ki skin karab ho sakti hai

ABR:hey bhaggu….iss timbo ko kuch aakal do…timbo mein real main smoke karne ki baat nahi kar rahi hun…par without pipe... koi nahi samajh payega ki tumhara costume kya hai

T:kya..oh no ab Tia kya karegi

ABR:don't worry..main hoon na…yeh lo ….dum maro pipe….now ur dress will be perfect…(gives the pipe to Tia) ..what do u think MP ?

MP: ya perfect ashi

T: tum dono kahi Tia ka mazak toh nahi uda rahi ho na?

ABR:lo MP bhalai ka zamana hi nahi rahi…

T:ok ok…itna bhi scene karne ki jaroraat nahi hai..thanks

Ashi and MP go away giggling

ABR:wait till Tia's dad and jumbo see this…aaj toh Tia is going to be in big trouble

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Tia is still holding the unlit pipe…confused with what just happened and the idea of Ashi helping HER..... out of all people….just then Meher comes over with Nakool

M:hey Tia…yeh kya hai…smoking pipe ..tum iske saath kya kar rahi ho.tum toh smoke nahi karti

T: nahi babes…woh…

N: (cuts in before Tia can finish)…babes tum nahi samajh rahi ho….its about completing the look..yeh dekho Tia ne kya pehna hai…dum maro dum ka Zeenat costume…toh yeh pipe ke bina kaise complete ho ga

M:ha..par....

N: babes it all about creating the perfect look….par ek kaami hai

M:kya

N:ek minute…(he goes and gets a lighter and lites the pipe)…ab ekdum perfect hai…Meher babes …lets go and have something to drink

M:ok

Meher and Nakool go away

Tia is totally confused now…she is standing there with a pipe and now its lite as well….and she doesn't smoke…all of this happened so quickly that she didn't really have time to think about what exactly is happening….she is dazzed

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Just then Ranveer walks in …wearing his AB Deewar costume…he finds Aman

R: hi Aman bana…

A:Ranveer….tum bohot acche lag rahe ho…ready for the party

R:ha bana..bilkul

Ranveer is looking here and there….searching for…whoelse but Tia

A:Ranveer…kya hua…tum idar udar kya dekha rahe ho?...kissi ko dhoond rahe ho (smiles)

R:nahi..bana….nahi toh…aapko aise kyu laga

A:aacha toh tum kissi ko nahi dhoond rahe ho…Tia ko bhi nahi

Ranveer blushes

R:nahi bana…hum aaise kuch nahi kar rahe hai…hum aapna time Tia ko dhoond ne mein waste nahi karna hai

A:accha

R:Ji ha bana

A:toh tumhe yeh jaane koi farak nahi padega ki Tia waha uss corner main sofa pe baithi hai

R:nahi toh …nahi toh bana….bana…hum baas aabhi aaye….hum kuch peene ki liye leke aate hai

A:ha kyu nahi

Ranveer slowing makes his way towards Tia..Aman notices this and smiles

A:yeh Ranveer bhi na….

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Ranveer sees Tia sitting on the sofa…

R: Tia aaj kitni pyaari lag rahi hai….hamesha ki tarah….shayad abhi unhe jaake woh rose dena chahiye jo hamane unhe liye laya hai…paata nahi phir aaisa mooka kab milega ..hum Rajasthan wapas ja rahe hai..pata nahi hum unse phir kab mil payenge…aur phir Arjun bhi toh nahi hai

Just as he is approaching Tia…Ranveer sees the burning pipe in her hand

R: Tia ke haath mein smoking pipe…kya Tia ne smoke karna toh shuru nahi kiya na….nahi ….Tia smoke nahi kar sakti…par phir yeh pipe…kahi Arjun ne toh…Arjun aur boxing club... aur woh underworld ke contacts….kahi ussi ne toh Tia ko smoking ki aadat nahi laga di hai na…aur phir Tia bhi aaj kaal bohot depressed rahti thi….humne bhi unhe itna hurt kiya hai…kahi in sab ke wajah se unhone smoking toh shuru nahi ki hogi na…woh dazzed bhi lag rahi hai….hume paata karna hoga

Meanwhile..Tia is dazzed ..thanks to everyone's behaviour

T: yeh kya ho kya raha hai….saab log aaj itna weird kyu behave kar rahe hai…pehle Ashi ne aake yeh pipe de diya..aur help karne ki koshish ki😕…phir Nakool ne bhi isse lite kar diya yeh kehke ke this completes the look…par Tia toh smoke bhi nahi karti…kahi inho ne kuch pee toh nahi liya hai na…jiske wajah se yeh aaise behave kar rahe hai….Tia is totally consfused

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Just then Ranveer comes….

R: Tia

But Tia is still lost ..thinking…

R: Tia jawab kyu nahi de rahi hai…kahi woh saach mooch….

R: Tia (shakes her)

Tia comes out of her daze

T: huh…

R: Tia ..aap thik toh hai na?

T: Ranveer…tum yahan

R: Tia ne aaj hume dehati..gawar..camel nahi kaha…jaroor kuch gadbad hai….Tia ne jaroor drugs liye hai…aab hum kya karenge…shayad hume kuch medicine dhondne chahiye inke liye

R: Tia ..hamare saath chaliye

T:huh…Ranveer tum yeh kya keh rahe ho…?

R:Tia baas hamare saath chaliye

T:par….kyu?😕

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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Ranveer just gets hold of Tia's hand and starts walking out of the party hall…Tia is even more confused now as to why everyone is acting like this.. Ranveer is really worried about Tia now and starts babbling as he goes towards the medical room

R:Tia…yeh aapne kya kiya…drugs…aapko paata hona chahiye tha ki isse kitne problems hote hai….

T:..Drugs…???..Ranveer kya keh raha hai?

R: Par sirf appki hi galti nahi hai…woh Arjun uss ke wajah se yeh saab hua hai…aur …aur shayad hum bhi responsible hai is ke liye

T: drugs..Arjun..Ranveer ???

R: in saab halat ke wajah se hi aap ne drug lene shuru kiye hai shayad…

T:kya..Tia aur drugs..puhleszz…

R: Aab hume hi kuch soochna hoga…par kya…hume paata bhi toh nahi hai ki drugs lene ke problem ki liye kya dawai de…hum aap ko medical room le toh ja rahe hai…par hum waha jaake karenge kya?

T:Ranveer ko lagta hai ki Tia drugs leti hai…aur is liye who Tia ko medical room leke ja raha hai?

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R:nahi…hum medical room le jaake kya karenge….toh phir hum kya kare…Raghav sir…ha yeh thik rahega…unhe paata hoga kya karna chahiye..hume Tia ko unke paas le jaana hoga

Ranveer goes towards the staff room looking for RD sir

R:Oh Tia….yeh saab kya ho gaya….agar aapko kuch hogaya toh hum kya karenge…hum…hum…

T:kya…kya Ranveer Tia ke liye care karta hai…?..kya aaise ho sakta hai?

R:Agar hum Tia ko Raghav sir ke paas le gaya toh…kahi problem toh nahi hagi na…agar isse Tia kissi musibat main aa gayi toh…nahi nahi….hume shayad kissi doctor ke paas jaana chahiye

T: Tia ko paata karna hoga ki kahi…Ranveer Tia ko abhi bhi…..

Ranveer is pulling Tia…but Tia stops…Ranveer turns around and looks at her

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago
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R: Tia chaliye

T:Nahi Ranveer…Tia kahi nahi jayegi

R:Tia yeh kya bachpana hai

T: Ranveer Tia kahi nahi jayegi jab tab tum Tia ka question answer nahi karte

R:Kya question hai Tia

T:Ranveer…Tia ko….Tia ko jana hai ki kya tum aabhi bhi Tia ke liye care karte ho?

R: Tia woh…..

Ranveer looks into Tia's eyes…and they get lost…..just then music starts in the party halls and brings them back to reality…

R:Tia abhi chaliye…yeh bachpana band ki jiye

T:nahi Tia kahi nahi jayegi jab tak tum question ka answer nahi dete

R: Thik hai…tum hum aapko utha ke le jayenge doctor ke paas

Edited by lamina - 20 years ago

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