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Posted: 12 years ago
aamzing update...
destiny is gonna bind maneet together bt scared what will be maans family's reaction on knowing the truth about geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aanya84

Yup she solved my query so here I am trying it out

and congratulations
you have done it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia


will be waitng
don't know but mujhe lag raha hai jab main next update read karungi sweet wala jhataka lagega😆
dadi will definitely do something till then😆😉


ya you said it right
but I miss you Sia when ever i update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sam111111

thank u rashmi for explaining and for sia also

No need to say thanks Sam oops.. Priya
i too learnt it from my forum friend
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aanya84

i think we bth are luky to have such brilliant teachers😃

we are not teachers Aanya.we all are friends.may be I can be much older to you
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash1991

aamzing update...

destiny is gonna bind maneet together bt scared what will be maans family's reaction on knowing the truth about geet...


yup
and I m yoo waiting for it
you are waing to read it but I km scared how to write it😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sam111111

thank u rashmi for explaining and for sia also



Originally posted by: aanya84

Yup she solved my query so here I am trying it out


I think I should take some credit for making two strangers like friends😆


this is for both of you

Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Part-55

It was fourth morning.Priya asked Maan today to stay at home.But as
usual Maan excused himself and went office.Ram was on leave today as he had to see the preparations as the next day was going to be
the day for double celebrations. Maan was not taking any interest so ram has to do all work.

In office Maan locked himself in his cabin and asked the receptionist not to let any one disturb him till he is out.He closed his eyes to relax his mind,to make his heart calm.He felt some known fregrence around him self, He opened his eyes and saw there was geet standing in front of him. actually between him and table.A sweet smile were playing on her lips. he stood and faced her-what's is this all happening around us?I m finding it very difficult.I m not able to handle myself.I will not be able to survive without you Geet. He looked at her and saw a line of tear on
her cheek. he lifted his hand to wipe but she again disappeared.he too felt his eyes wet and finally he came out of his cabin as it was not giving him the peace he wanted.
He informed on reception about his leaving without telling, where he was going.
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Maan was driving aimlessly. he turned his car in to a road and after some time he found himself in front of Children Home.he went in and Mrs.J welcomed him with a surprise-Maan tum yahan. i m so happy to see you.bahut dino baad aaye.How is Geet?

Maan-bus yun hi aa gaya.he needed an excuse now as he always used to come CH only with Geet.I want to give you some donetion for the CH. He didn't find a better excuse that time

Mrs.j-Thanks Maan.

he gave her a cheque.

Maan-kya main kuchh der bachhon ke saath rah sakta hoon?

Mrs,j-Why not Maan they will be happy to see you.

Maan called all the children and played some games with them and that helped him little to distract her mind from Geet.

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Ram was in the hospital to invite the doctor who treated Savitriji.

Dr.-hello Mr.Khurana .Is my patient all right?

Ram-yes doctor.Actually I m here to invite you for tomorrow.It's
Maan's birthday and engagement too.

Dr.-So savitriji now knows every thing.

Ram-Yes. and we have invited very gew guest other than our family and friends.

Just then a lady Dr. entered there and she saw Ram there. she thought for some time and said-Excuse me sir Are you Mr.Ram Khurana From Moradabad?

Ram with surprise -Yes. But Do I know you?

L.Dr.-No Mr.Khurana you don't know me but I know you.Actually I m
From your city.You some times came to our medical college as chief
guest.

Ram-Yes I remember.It's good to see you Dr..?

LD-Aarti. I m Aarti.aur Dr. hone ke saath saath main aapke ek puraane dost mahesh Gupta ki bahu bhi hoon.

Ram-Is it? i m so happy.How are they?your's was love maariage na?

AArti-Yes.First they were not agree for it but now all is fine.

Ram-Aarti I m here to invite Dr,for the engagement and birthday party of my son so i will be more happy if you too come there with him along with your husband

Aarti-Sure uncle mai aaongi.It's very difficult to find someone known in this big city

Dr.-Mr.Khurana today my problem is solved.Actually I m going to States for a conference so won't be able to come.But aarti will be there on my behalf too.

Ram-It's ok dr.(to Aarti) see you in the party tomorrow evening.

Aarti-sure uncle.


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It was evening

Maan returned from CH and he was some how at some peace in his heart He was feeling some thing different this time as someone has spred some light in the atmosphere He entered in the house and was surprised to see the gang of his college friends there.They were Samrat,Mayank Adi and Pinki too. Samrat and Mayank Now were in love and The girls were Gunjan and Nupur respectively.Maan and Geet already met them several times so were friendly with those girls.they were too here with them

Maan was out of the words to see them-Tum log yahaan kaise?

Samrat-We are angry with you, agar Adi nahin batata to humen pata hi nahin chalta ki you are going to be engaged. Very bad Maan.itni khushi ki baat aur tum humen bhool gaye.par hum bhi itna aasaani se peechha nahin chhodenge.So we are here to enjoy your birthday and engagement Aaj puri raat dhamaal machaayenge.

All pounced on Maan to hug him.He too was little happy to see alll of them

Nupur and Gunjan were sisters but were opposite to each other.Nupur was talkative girl that she could speek without breathing. but Gunjan always searched for words before talking.

Priya-Maan aa gaye. aaj tum office me nahin the. khaan chale gaye the ?I called you in the office but you were not there and why were you not picking my phone? mujhe kitni chinta ho rahi thi. Coffee piyoge? Ramesh sabke liye coffee le aao.

Before Maan could say a word...

ramesh-Ji Geet didi bana rahi hain.

Maan got alert-Geet? Did I hear right? Nahin mere kaan baj rahe hain. Do din se Geet har jagah nazar aa rahi hai aur kuchh nahin.Geet yahaan kaise aa sakti hai uski sister ki engagement hai so she should be there only.

Priya-Theek hai jab ban jaaye to serve kar dena aur uske baad dinner ki taiyaari karni hai.

after some time Ramesh served the coffee.Maan sipped it. It tested like Geet made it.after some time he saw Geet coming with her cup of coffee.Maan saw her but not reacted as he thought her as his imagination .

Geet went and set with others.All were chatting, Geet was unusually
silent. Maan continuously starring at her thinking her as his imagination only. Maan went and set near her.Geet saw him and asked with her eyes-What?

Maan only shook his head.he was smiling to see him like his wound heart was going to be healed.

Gunjan-Achcha hua Geet ki bhi tum aa gayin.Tum to aana hi nahin chahti thi. dekho ab kitna achcha lag raha hai sab raat bhar baith kar gappen maarenge.

Geet only gave a smile to her.

Maan-Agar ye imagination hai to ye Gunjan is se baat kaise kar sakti hai?He pinched him self hard and winced with pain- Aah...

Mayank-Kya hua?

Maan-tum sach me yahaan ho? and touched her cheek with his hand.

Geet lowed her eyelashes and blushed a little.

Samrat-Kyun tujhe kya laga tu Geet ka bhoot dekh raha hai.Arey
badi mushkil se le kar aaye hain.Iski Mom se kitni request ki tab ja kar ye madam maani.ye to aane ko ready hi nahin thi.kah rahi thi ki bahut kaam hai.par you know jab sabhi dost ek jagah ho to geet ka hona to banta hi hai.we have promised her to drop her back at her home in the morning.tab jaa kar maani yahaan aane ke liye.

Maan's hand was still on her cheek.

Geet -Maan ,please apna haath hataao

And Maan remove his hand.and was feeling like life was entering slowly in his lifeless body again. he was constantly starring at her.Still thinking it as his dream

Nupur-Aunty aapne mehendi wali ko bulaya hai ya nahin.ab jab hum ladkiyaan yahaan hain to saare shauk pure hone chahiye

Savitrriji came -haan haan kyun nahin. wo thodi der me aati hi hogi.maine usse do teen logon ko saath laane ke liye kaha hai taki tum sab jaldi se free ho jaao aur sab dost mil kar gappen maar sako.

Nupur-Theek hai dadi. thank u.

All were talking endlessly but two souls were lost some where else.Then mehendi wali came with her assistents.As she was to go for another appointment.

She requeasted them to free her soon.

Priya -but you are so early Dinner is not ready yet.How will the girls have their dinner?

Savitriji-Priya wo problem bhi solve ho jaayega tum chinta mat karo. chalo ladkiyon menendi lagwa lo.Geet tum wahaan kyun khadi ho aao tum bhi menendi lagwa lo.

Geet-Nahin dadi mujhe mehendi nahin lagwaani .I m fine.

Priya-Geet aisa to nahin ho sakta na ki sab mehendi lagaayen aur meri beti ke haath soone rah jaayen.chalo jaao aur mehendi lagwa lo.

Geet could not say more now and set in font of mehendi wali.the lady asked -kaun sa design chahiye?

Geet-koi bhi.

girls got busy in mehendi and boys were getting bore.Samraat suggested to play truth and dare.


precap-Truth and dare followed by the confession.


For pm add me at - pmatrash

Did any one imagine even in dreams about Geet being in KM at this point? so I think I have given you the pleasant surprise with a lovely precap.
Please leave your comments-Rashmi


Edited by rashmivaish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
M first 😲

Arti is introduced here...does she have an imp role?
Poor maan n geet...but everyone on der side must b worried thinking wht will happen

Dadi u r so so clever...I love u

Awesome updt

Waiting for mehndi den truth n dare

Bt b4 dat dinner 😉 ...

Dadi has a plan n I guess I knw it


Edited by maanmeet1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me second 😃
😃 maan can't believe tat geet I really in front of him in KM so r we. Loved is cute gesture keepg his hand on her cheeks to make sure of her presence. Sure it must b dadi's plan inviting his friends 😊 all gal applying mehandi b4 dinner too. Wonder Wats rockstar dadi upto now 😃
Truth or dare. Maan's confession will b a dare or d truth. Eagerly waitg to know 😃


Again is tis enagegement going to happen for sure? 😕
Edited by dreamy4ever - 12 years ago

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