*Completed* Th#2 SS: Hold My Hand Ch. 4+NOTE pg. 1

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Posted: 12 years ago

Brilliant and Unique story..!! 👏👏 Well done Zee .. :) ..

Not your typical love story..

I doubt anyone actually guessed that Arnav was schizophrenic.

I'm happy that you put this into perspective.

Anjali is a bit .. urgh .. to me she seemed soo ashamed/oblivious to the fact of him for having this mental illness. She clearly didn't want people to look at her brother weirdly or that she was trying so hard to make sure he seems normal, so he could get married quickly without people running away or something like that .. 😕 .. & she encouraged him to

find someone/pick a girl to marry, who ended up rejecting him,

which caused him to stress out and create a fake persona -khushi.

No wonder Shyam and Akash get angry quickly with her..!!

This part reminded me of a drama I watch, which focused on this .. & how he imagined this girl and this guy. & how they all tried to commit suicide & he was sure this girl was real.. & weirdly enough later on, he meets this girl who looked like the one he imagined .. :) ..

Sooo, I'm hoping our mechanic looks a little like khushi (arnav's persona), who is real ..but with a whole new identity.. ( well, I'm imagining that) aha ..😃

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

I am never going to tire of saying this, you always surprise me and I love that about your stories. It goes without saying the way A connects to K is beyond most people's understanding.

Well done Z

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

Twiggy aayi hai aayi hai, Twiggy aayi hai...

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I have to give it to you, you manage to surprise me in every one of your stories. Here I thought.. what a beautiful love story this here. And then you went and dragged me out of the sapno ki duniya and dumped me into asli duniya.

Arnav.. Oh dear! I'd like to believe the mechanic is his khushi.. the man has suffered a lot and now deserves happiness. Beautifully written Zee, I heart went out to Arnav. :)

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ipkknd_hazel

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Posted: 12 years ago

Me!

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.what an end to a beautiful story.
i dint feel it was rushed or anything of that sort..
and all through you kept it very real...
even in this chapter, however evident it was that khushi dint exist, right from part where payal refused to speak.. i still dint want to believe that it was all in his head..

i have met a family who's daughter suffers the same..
and have been there when she was recovering from a rellapse..
Since i wasnt close to her, it hadnt affected me much...all i could do was sympathise..
but her family's grief and helplessness was a terrible sight to watch..

i hope every patient suffering from schizophrenia has a loved one to hold on to, cz thats what will help them through it..

and lastly Zehra, its wonderful to have you back! 🤗

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aimmy

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Posted: 12 years ago

edited...

i m on 1st page...yeah...

very different ss...and i loved it...khushi was an imagination😲...now this mechanic?😆...beautifully written...awesome...🤗

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Edited!

When the waitress told that he never came with anyone, I got a sure shot hint that he was suffering from that disease where people imagine things! Though I didn't knew what it was called. Thanks for the info.

And this genre was totally new, I loved the way you nailed it up.👏

A bit of rushing is their, but without that the SS wouldn't have been so good. I think so!

And for that mechanic thing, I would prefer she doesn't exists or else my brain will keep thinking who was she?😕

Loved it! 😃

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riafna

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Zehra Oh girl its awesome+amazing+mind blowing+fabulous 👍🏼.Oh girl you are ⭐️.

Now I got why Akash didn't see Khushi that day at coffee shop,why they were over protecting him..

She was not in visitors book ,not that waitress saw her but i had hope really I do but that golf club conversation they too didn't see her ... somewhere in my heart i wanted to believe its not his imagination he really talked to her on phone and she just disappeared...even Payal replied him i thought something might be there... too optimist 😆

One thing is there you always surprised me girl.👏..i love this surprises...

This concept and your writing Oh God you never failed me the trust we gave you always came such twists we never expect... you should trying in tv they always showed same stuff always..

Thanks for mail

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