*Completed* Th#2 SS: Hold My Hand Ch. 4+NOTE pg. 1

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aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

This sstory was differnt!
It had me thnking , biting my nails from the very first chp!

And turning it out this way, i'm shocked, surprised!

Well for me that mechanic is Khushi! Reality maybe! Cuz its wat i wanna think!

And her being non presently present there just added to ur touch to the story!

And i wonder why was payal nerrvous on hearing khushi's name? Was she a sister of hers, who got separared to killed and arnav saw her pick when he talked to payal privately and imagined all dat .?

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Amina

@KreyaArshiLover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Awesome I never knew that it could be an ending like this, loved it

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sanja_here

@sanja_here

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Awesome story yaar!! Was never expecting such a twist...loved it so much...waiting for more such experiments frm u..

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

i fully understand this story...on happier note i can imagine that in the end arnav struck gold..it is hazel eyed khushi in real

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

I am out of words...literally...I thought many things in past 3 chapters...but this...never dreamt...WOW...awesome Zehra...actually too good...so unique in its own way...loved this story...

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tanvia

@tanvia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

awesome chapter loved it...
kind of shaking that he was suffering...

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shaheen

@Shaheen17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

M shocked!
At frst i thot it to be a romantic ffs bt in 3 rd update it ws smtng different and now ohhh!!!!
Must say the concept ws really different and amazing!
Thanks a lot for such a great story.

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maazia

@maazia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Great story. A very good ending to a wonderful story.

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Zarahatke

@Zarahatke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

A complicated one but after reading ur note much clear n very well written

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smarty94

@smarty94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

res.

*EDIT*

WOoOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O.O matlab technically you trolled us🤣🤣 I swear that was the first thing that came to my mind when I finished reading such an intense and tearing update🤣 You can most definitely call me cracked😆

Schizophrenia? O.O took me a while to type😆 On a serious note, this was nothing like you have ever written before, but was really happy to note that like always you excelled at it😆 (Kia banaya, i mean really, Kia banaya😆)

The ending, like everyone has me baffled😲, aap raheen surprising queen😆 left on you, you might just spin this into yet another trollin... sorry unexpectedly surprising story.

But really, that was an amazing story👏 Arnav's reaction had me scared, ke kaheen bechara pagal naa hojaye And finally, Shyam's position was revealed, apart from the BIL role, he is his Doctor???? Now that I am writing this down, I can't seem to help and add that mainne aisi kahani first time parhi where Arnav is challenged (not in THAT way, but still suffers from some psychiatric disorder) and it was amazinnggg👏😃

Well that's all from me😃 and I also can't help but add, I feel trolled🤣

Take care😃

Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago