*Completed* Th#2 SS: Hold My Hand Ch. 4+NOTE pg. 1

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AbdulloveIPKKND

@AbdulloveIPKKND

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

I hope she is real and does Arnav know about him and now I know why Akash is so distanced with the family and more close with Arnav. He clearly hates Anjali. That is for sure.

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sman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Omg what a unique concept dear...hats off u both sisters..

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Aparna

@-aparna-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Ohh my goshh he was suffering form that scary oh shit
i hv seen so many ppl suffering for schizophrenia and its very painful to see when they hv attack..totally out of control but wid meds and shock treatment they can live normal life but i really wanted to see real khushi here... tho since last chptr i had bad feeling and it happened too:(
and widout u writing it how can i imagine it to b real khushi?

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sisgeo

@sisgeo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

nice twist you here !!... my one suggestion is could you provide some background story on wat happened with Arnav...people with these disease have to go through hell ...to realise that What ever they believed was never a reality...felt bad for him..but loved the story..nice twist...

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saarah96

@saarah96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

wow that was amazing!
cant believe she never existed,,you made it feel as if she did=]]
but cant believe anjali is convernced about what others think
so that is why aakash is protective of arnav
but can you answer a question,,how is it anjali and her dads fault that arnav is like this
brilliant btw!=]

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Itu

@simi58

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

my mind is officially blown now.. I did not see tht coming at all in the previous updates.. yeah something was definitely very wrong with arnav but this? wowww... 👏 kudos for coming up with such an unique concept..
anji was really awesome. she was swt and caring as always but with tht she was smart enough to check the logs to find the address of the love of her brother..
well being the hopeless romantic and rabba ve seeker i'll say this tym it was actually khushi who was below the car..everyone deserves a shot at rabbaves.. baas..
gonna miss this SS thnk god u started a new one alrdy..

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Kya kehna...

what an innovative concept...superbly written and I loved the way you left the ending to the reader's imagination...👏

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ArSh23

@ArSh23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Wow that was awesome! I"m glad you decided to write about something so different. I would have never guessed that Arnav has schizophrenia. Great concept! Your stories never disappoint! Can't wait to read your next story. Thanks for the e-mail!

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

It's totally different from your usual style but glad that you explored this genre.

The revelation just gave it a new twist.

Id like to think that he finally found his Khushi.

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

The moment I read that Arnav was found alone at the beach I KNEW that Khushi was his imagination...but even then I had hoped I was wrong...and when Payal said she didn't have a friend named Khushi...well...I kinda actually had tears in my eyes...Its hard to see the mighty ASR like this...But you know what? I liked it! I did! :) And I WANT to believe that he did finally find his Khushi at the end...because I'm a REAL sucker for happy endings! :P So good job!! :) :)

Edited by Nehasupnfan - 12 years ago