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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Beautiful story! Poor Arnav! So emotional! I didn't expect this at all!

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Crinklez.

@Crinklez.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

This was an amazing story.

Completely unexpected twist and I LOVED it. The last chapter was so emotional, poor arnav. I believe the girl in the end is his imagination again, another relapse, which makes it even more upsetting.

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Beautiful story, Zehra. I suspected she was his hallucination when Payal said I don't have a friend by that name. You've chosen a very difficult topic, and given an ending that many may not like. But I like it. When writers have this sort of abrupt ending, which allows you to choose , I really like it. Because by the time you read the last word, you know what you want to happen. Here, I want the mechanic to be a real person. I'm a sucker for happy endings, which is something really odd cos I read a lot of depressing books, books on crime and so on. But I like to see a nice person get their happy ending, because that's something you don't see everyday in the asli wali duniya. Kudos to you, Z! very well written.
P.S - I see you have kept your record- 3 chapters per thread :)

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Beautiful story, Z.

Very different concept. Kudos to you for writing this.

A very brave attempt and very well executed.

I loved the way you made us think it was a simple love story.

And then in the end, in keeping with the traition, there came the big twist.

I also loved that you kept the end open.

It is for the reader to decide how he wants the end to be.

I admire you for writing this.

I really loved it.

Hope you write many more like this for us readers.

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msmarple

@msmarple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Very well written as usual.

I am finding it difficult to wrap my head around the concept of khushi being imaginary though:)

This feeling for essentially "imaginary" characters...😕

Edited by msmarple - 12 years ago

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Diakumar17

@Diakumar17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Different concept.. Really liked the way u wrote it. I can't imagine not having Khushi in the end. So I wanna think its the real Khushi not arnav's imagination. Thank you so much for ur mail.

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Amazing ooved it zhra.
I had guessed it right at the start of update khushi is Arnav's imagination.
Loved it fabulous

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anjubua

@anjubua

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

awesome story, thanks for
educating us as well, such eye opener I really admire

ur story telling abilities u are just great.

I hope we get to read more stories from u

thanks again my lovely👏