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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

aww koi baat nahin...

jab time mile to update kar dena ok...

hota hai kabhi kabhi we understand...

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

Thanks kiran for the comment
Geet soon will know that Maan loves her
uske baad Sameera ki problem
Uske baad Geet ki identity ki problem
Bechari Geet kya karegi?
dono ko ahsaas bhi ho jaaye to bhi How can Geet betray sameera😭

pray for me to to not to make it too complicated

I have full confidence in u that u will not make it too much complicated...

thoda bahut to story mein ups and downs to hote hi hain...warna story kaise banegi...

mujhe meri beti ke liye kai baar stories banani padti hain so I also make stories with ups and downs...rajkumar, pari, demon, jadoo...everything I have to include...to make it interesting...

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

hii every one

I m feeling bad for not updating .so I m giving a teaser as a compansation

Teaser

In office too he couldn't get peace.He was seeing her every where be it her cabin, or canteen or reception.He could see her talking to other employees.his heart was now out of his control.Perhaps the limit to control his heart was broken. Now fear was taking place of that control.The fear to lose Geet. Jab ye sab socha tha to Geet was with me so It was okey but now he could see her going away. and Geet,she doesn't even know that he loved her.Was he cheating her by not telling it?

Maan Punched the glass table with his bare hands.Thank god his hand was safe But every one in the office heard the sound that breaking sound.

Ram too heard that sound and came running to him and saw the broken glass.He ordered all to go back to the work.

Ram-Maan what are you doing. ye sab karke tumhen kya milega?

Same time Maan's phone buzzed. It was Geet. Maan saw the screen and excused him self and went away-hello

Geet-Maan are you okey?

Maan -Haan. kyun?

Geet-wo actually i was taking a nap being tired and had a dream that some thing bad is happening.So i just called to know if every thing is okey or not.people say that day dreams are mostly come true. I m happy that you are fine.theek hai main rakhti hoon and she cut the call.

Maan was so helpless-Why did she think only about me when she had a bad dream.She always thinks about you.
Maan jab tumhen itni takleef hai to Geet ka socho uske saath to koi nahin hai.

so how was it? enjoy it till i update next part

Edited by rashmivaish - 12 years ago

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

aww koi baat nahin...

jab time mile to update kar dena ok...

hota hai kabhi kabhi we understand...

Thanks kiran and enjoy the teaser

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Rashmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

I have full confidence in u that u will not make it too much complicated...

thoda bahut to story mein ups and downs to hote hi hain...warna story kaise banegi...

mujhe meri beti ke liye kai baar stories banani padti hain so I also make stories with ups and downs...rajkumar, pari, demon, jadoo...everything I have to include...to make it interesting...

haan

kahte hain na bachche boodhe ek samaan

to main boodhon ki jagah readers kar deti hoon😆😆

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Ambibamby

@Ambibamby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

After that teaser you r gonna kill us. Pls update soon

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sandymg

@sandymg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

lovely teaser...

take your time and update...😊

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change12

@change12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

i hope sameera by her self will do some thing and will run from her enggagement or wedding like amrita singh did in aaina movie... well such a nice teaser update next part soon

Edited by change12 - 12 years ago

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#219

sahi kahen dadi ne...magar jab dadiko sach pata chalega tab kya hoga...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: change12
i hope sameera by her self will do some thing and will run from her enggagement or wedding like amrita singh did in aaina movie... well such a nice teaser update next part soon

Let's see

mujhe to lagta hai ki wahi hai jo kuchh kar sakti hai.But she is not so kind who will favor Geet.So thare should be something else which she will do😈