ArHiSS:AnApateAffair#4,Ch21,Pg124,(19/07)COMPLETED

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Posted: 12 years ago

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asrcraze

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Posted: 12 years ago

Meri Saiyu <3

Thank you thank you thank you for the dedication !!

And for all those things you have said about me ! This is like the best thing anybody has ever done for me ! You have no idea how special I felt when I read this !!

And it is my privilege to know you !!

And I'm no Co-author to this story ...Credit goes to Saiyu, Saiyu and Saiyu only!

And avcmyd a big Thank you to you for asking V to make the banner and thanks again for all the comments you leave for me on the thread! You make me feel so good :)

I really loved the gif 🤗 (though I have no idea who those guys were and what he was saying😛 )

Thanks to all of you who mention me in their comments :)

Thanks V ...for the banner...Its awesome :)

Accha lagta hain 😳

THANK YOU !

Over to this update's Comment !

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.x-bumblebee-x.

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Posted: 12 years ago

To be fond of dancing was a certain step towards falling in love 😳

Jane Austin ..

Yeahh .. Teri meri .. 😳.. The most hottest thing !! Noo, Whyy saiyu ..Why did he have to say sexy ?! .. I'm now picturing khushi & her shocked face if that actually happened on the show .. 😆.. The way you describe their kisses .. aww .. i can feel the passion ..

I was hoping that she would attack aman .. 😆 I love how both arnav and khushi want to do something but end up doing the complete opposite .. Both their hearts and brain are playing a weird game .. aha ..

I adore the other couples .. :P ..

Great update .. 😃😃

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

Twiggy!

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Teri-Meri. Post Teri-Meri cloakroom Rabba Vey.The dream sequence Teri Meri naughty dress. A bare chested Arnav. A sexy Khushi. A super hot kiss. Now thats what I call a Maha Update. Aaand Saiyyu is back with a BANG!

Thank you for your not so subtle jab the the non existence of Savita :D And the fact the verrry traditional Raizadas are surprisingly okay with blatant PDA apart from just the eye sex.

The fake couple on their real sangeet had a very real make-out session. Break up plans are nowhere to be mentioned. Only an SQ competition. This has to be the best non-fake fake couple.

This time again, Khushi kissed him. Oh, he's going to have SO much fun teasing her! And will she tell him she tricked him into dancing? Will he go all ASR when he finds out?

Sooo many kostins. Only Saiyyu can answer. To answer that, update FAST!

Maha Update was super duper awesome!

PS - Special mention for Aakash without the ji and Sexy with the ji :)

PPS - I don't know La personally, but may I still say something? She has the sexiest ASR pictures for her DPs. One look at it and I am all.. ☺️

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

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This is so cute, forget funny or whatever...this A&K will always have to do something or the other to outdo each other and that too in the matter of a very fake wedding. In memory of the sequence you like so much...this collage

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sj_arhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

sj back

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Officially love this story. Continued reading from ch 8 n it was engaging as hell. Arnav and Khushi have enormous quantities of 'self prestige'. In their unwillingness to state that the other broke up with them they have actually dug in deeper.

NK, Oh how I love his character in every story. He is the most adorable man one can have as a friend. So Nk fancies La and in order to get her attention makes a convo with Khushi. Now Arnav being Arnav cannot take another man showing interest in his girlfriend even if it is fake; n here I simply love this line 'So there will be one Chotay and one Nanhe in this house.

Everyone liked this arrangement except for one. How could she select a pet name for him which matched his in meaning? He was one of a kind. Couldn't she see that?

Declaring that Khushi is his sweetheart and none other's, his insistence on Bhabhi were simply an icing on the cake. Khushi blushed to these statement, umm I have my doubts on this supposed facade in front of family.

Their midnight meeting was uber cute. Buaji this is one story where you have perfect timings; she entered and tadaa, shagun is done.

So Khushi first refused marrying Arnav but when it came to a threat to their relation she showed Sheetal her place. Loved the whole scene with Khushi going all Sadda Haq over Arnav and demanding that she is nowhere close by during their wedding.

I love Diwali and how it ended, so jealousy is the most effective stimuli when it comes to Khushi. What follows is Arnav's teases where he doesn't miss an opportunity to remind her. In a later chapter we got to know Arnav's weakness- tears, during Sangeet. Teri meri was wonderful, the passion, the riveting chemistry, the family reaction. Of course Arnav would give Khushi the egyptian full covered blouse when NK was supposed to dance with her.

Thoroughly enjoyed the love story Khushi weaved in reaction to Sheetal's presence in the party, the woman sure knows to give back. The imagery you created with Arnav pleading with puppy dog eyes, renounce the world (reminded me of mami's daydream of Aakash in the show).

All in all Saiyu I really love how you play with your characters. I can relate with each one of them as you have given a satire edge to them, while maintaining most characteristics. And yes not to forget I love each scene that you reminisce at the end of each chapter. Wonderful memories, wonderful rush of emotions, drooped by yt to even re watch them. Sigh...

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priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

awsum update...
Hayye their dance reminded the old ipkknd days.
Missing those days.

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

CONGRATS for the new thread...
waiting...

***edited***
So ArShi regularly having nightly phone chat...Oh yeah...off course they are NOT couple...which couple talk in phone regularly...
Lavanya-NK...too cute...
SexiJi sounds too good in AkashJi,oops Akash's mouth...
So they wont dance together...lets see...
arre wah Arnav,only u can ask ur would be wife to dance with NK,then then remind him "She is MY Khushi your bhabhi"...Bechara NK mentally swore...off course,..he is not Nannav to swore aloud...
Arnav sent Khushi that stupid lahenga...how dare he...Khushi,time to prove how sexy u r...
Oh Gosh..Arnav is a focused man when he wants...we have to give him that much...he made Khushi's first plan failed...
Aww...she dance in "Didi tere Chotay" version of "Jiji tere Jethji"...yaad dilana jaruri tha kya Saiyu...
Ah...Arnav is as always helpless to her tears...this time not only he offered to dance,but declared her sexy too...At last...
And their dance...It was happening in front of my eyes...the lines of love and lust get blurred...so true...
Aur yeh "Ab thik hai ka" naya version...Too good...

remembrance toh iss scene ka hona hi tha...ab mujhe yeh fir dekhna padega...woh bhi abhi...
loved the update...sooo much...

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I have always loved the picture comments...they so add to the story...loved your dedication. So here's to asrcraze! Well deserved.!

And this update so well worth the wait...

Fake couple having real conversations every night...the only thing fake was Savita and her supposedly late flight from Dubai...and ofcourse the tears...

Fake couple getting possessive about what clothes are sing worn in public...no revealing ...just for theri eyes only...

Loved how he gives her an outfit that covers her up...love how he teases her and calls the outfit sexy and not her...both playing games...

The teasing, the dancing, the visuals created with your detailed descriptions...the flat stomach, the tiny waist...the thin line between love and lust...the sensuous, sexy and very steamy dance...and then the kiss...the amazing use of the original dialogues...modified to suit the story...just perfect ...beyond brilliant!

Loved Payal and Akash...the ji gone for the sexy?

Both Teri Meri's were absolutely amazing and sexy ...no two actors could have played it to well...that crackling chemistry...the clothes the look...salman and katrina pale in comparison!

NK forever being warned by Arnav...about Khushi being his Khushi and NKs Bhabhi...NK s attempts to flirt with La...

Fake relationship...really? The making out was as real as real can be...cannot wait for their fake SR...!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago