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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
So happy to have you back.
And of course, asrcraze's picture comments I always look forward to.
Thanks for the lovely pictures.

Love this faux engaged couple. Arnav sends Khushi a dress which covers her from head to toe.

He can't see her tears, so he dances ith her.
Khushi wants to dance with him nd doesnot object when he touches her.

And the kiss in the end between the couple who don't want to marry each other. 😉

Loved the update.

Hope you had a great holiday.
Welcome back..
Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
res
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Saiyu main ghaai mein hoon but for you a res is a scratch so here's a quick comment.
It started well, it ended with a kiss...
It is in remembrance of Teri meri...ab isse accha kya ho sakta hai?
And I like mushy...mushy is my middle name😳

Thorough comment jaldi hi kar dungi...😊

2nd edit:
Ah...of dances indeed! Have I told you that the parallel pairs are equally interesting? Especially Akash with his Sexyji...🤣 And then him grinning at the prospect of being able to have his hands all over her in front of their family members...hilarious!😆

Add to it the 'I don't want to dance' argument...waise the update made me remember the khadoos dance teacher...main usse bhi miss kar rahi hoon😭

Yeh Arnav bhi na...dance bhi nahi karega aur NK ko dance bhi nahi karne dega... but his 'She is MY Khushi and your Bhabhi' were bang on! ASR style dammit!

I had to read the dress description twice..you know after the engagement attire; its difficult to expect and envision something like this. But then I would say ke Arnav was covering all bases (literally)😉 Par apni Khushi bhi shaatir hai na...I would have been surprised if she hadn't made any alterations on her outfits or changed the outfit altogether.

Delectable chest☺️ and I started hyperventilating...

But I recovered enough when Arnav said that the dress was sexy...hello! were you caressing Khushi's waist or her outfit?

Didi tere chottey deewane?🤣Laptop se karo sagaayi?🤣

My point exactly...Arnav ka shaatir dimaag stopped working on seeing Khushi in the green sari so much so that he didn't ask the mentioned questions that you raised😆

Teri meri...mere saath hi aisa hi hota hai; I hear the song and expect Arnav Khushi on the screen...mera kya hoga?😭

The looong update was zhakaas!👏
Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res! 😊

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That was a sex on toast update!! 😊
Well ideally all the men landed up calling their girls sexy!!

I loved how Arnav kept teasing Khushi about not being sexy...
And their bickering about dancing with each other was too cute...
'She is MY Khushi and your Bhabhi'... that totally cracked me up... 🤣

He actually gave her a fully covered up dress?? Her stunning blue and white dress and his white shirt reminded me of those beautiful IPK days... How I miss them!! Sigh! 😔

Loved the way he teased her calling her dress sexy... but not her!
The way he admired his happy butterfly when she danced to tease him.
He is so smitten by her! Those epic dialogues where he says ki yahan pe bhi tumhe meri zaroorat padi... just wow!! So many good IPK memories were revived in thsi chapter...

Haaawww!! And she tricked him to call her sexy!!! But chalta hai!
Everything is fair in love and war!! Their dance was hot!!
The emotions, the feel, the chemistry, the raw passion... all had come alive!! 😳

Poor families... to witness such raunchy PDA!!
And the twisted version of Khushi leading to kiss a Arnav and saying 'Ab theek hai'
was the perfect end to this amazing chapter!! 👏
Edited by mints23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Mera bhi R...

**Edited**

First things first i have always loved the picture comment of ASRcraze hence this dedication is definitely well deserved. 👏
Coming to the in memory of **happy sighs**
What do i tell you, i say join the bandwagon for whom Teri meri stands for Arnav and khushi.
And you will be surprised to note that my 5 yr old niece leads this brigade.
I remember how heartbroken she was when she realised about a yr back that Teri meri was not Arnav and khushi's song but Salman and kareena's. Hence even today if the song comes on TV she never ever watches it, she only listens to it.

You are back and how, it was such a fab fab update. This update was totally worth the wait that we endured. I loved the way you retold this magical episode once again with all the fabulous smirklascious smile from hottie raizada.
The dialogues, the touches and the kisses wow created quite a tingle in my heart i tell you.
Every time you wrote about arnav pulling khushi towards him and his hands grazing khushi's waist induced such blush filled smiles on our face i tell you.

I loved the way you incorporate all the actual scenes in your story so effortlessly. "The aab theek hai" had me grinning from ear to ear.
And can i just say that i was off to lalaland after the awesome kiss at the end that khushi bestowed on Arnav.

Can't wait to read the next update already...
Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
How can I be out of this gang Res in Rass AAA thread.

So proudly Resing in the third page.

Sexy challange with maximum SQ. I like the teasing, carressing, talking huskily gives tingling butterflies, you write with the proper proportion. These things are cake obivously the cherry is the end. Ab teek hain.

To be frank, I say I watched all episodes of IPK, I started watching just few months back before the show ended. More than watching the episodes I listened only that to while driving, so my knowledge of IPK is very less, When I heard first teri meri tune, which I heard in church, felt that Kushi and Arnav are dancing for that. You may think WHAT, yes you must be knowing that I dont know hindi, and I never watch any Indian movies and here I never heard Teri meri song before.

When I came home I watched Arnav Kushi slow dance in YT, man that made me hook to the screen, back to back i would have watched several times, here this chapter i read back to back several times and grining, smiling and blushing (of course with the help of photos and gifs) thank god my husband didnt see me or else i have read and write next chapter comment from mental asylm.

Rasgulla, dedicating this chapter of rememberance of teri meri to La is excellent choice, You know without reason some sort of affection develops with the unkown person, that sort of affection develped on La. Dont tell her it is little secret between you and me.
Edited by avcmyd - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Res
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Saiyyu your back rested and armed with an effortlessly entertaining chapter once again. Sorry I took so long to unres mate
You had some good repartee boy are the couple confused between the real and pretend ... Hidden meanings kya?
I too had rewind a cpl o times to make sure I had missed a ch on where they had become a real couple
Looking fwd to more
Edited by CravingKhana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
The new thread is here...
The update must be near...
Pages filling in by friends and peers...
We are anxiously waiting dear!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

The new thread is here...

The update must be near...
Pages filling in by friends and peers...
We are anxiously waiting dear!




Wah wah WAHH Vandanaji!!!

What a poetic stalking ignition for the thread !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
We are waiting anxiously...
Please put us out of our misery
An immediate update will suffice brilliantly...
And leaving us reading happily!


Waiting and waiting!
Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago

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