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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

first of all
a big big sorry annesha fr such late comment...
awesome updates...
manyata not having feelings fr Uday is sad...
and our uvs condition is more bad bichara...
ujjani... hmm I couldn't understand her...
but its k...
want to read more update soon...


no its ok take your time no issue
thank you so much
she hads but trying to supress
awn it is
thank you for such a lovely comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: ...anju...

hai anne

chappy was really awesome👏

vijay tries to commit suicide. 🤣

manyata has hatred for uday 😭

ujjaini also hates her father. 😭

uday himself left manyata and divorced her.still he loves her so much.so there is a solid reason for leaving manyata his daughter and family.now cant wait reveal it soon.

precap is lovely.dad and daughter meet.want to see father daughter bond.

now cant wait.update soon.

thanks for pm.


thank you so much
hahah joke of the decade
no she is just suprsessing her love
but who really can resist such hot father
yea indeed very solid one
thank you
i am glad that you liekd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
kiya baat han kiya baat han jee maza agaya
buhot acha likhti ho book likhlo apni annesha
kiya stpories han maza agaya jaan le lita
ab update de dedi ta re i m waitinge re
when u update re i m waiting re
thansk for the pm re
n after update u pm me re
update fast re i m eagerly waiting re
when u update re
awsome chapter written good work keep it up
keep writting n written all awsome ur hand is magical
very nice keep it up n entertain me re
sorry for the late reply
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
kiya baat han kiya baat han jee maza agaya
buhot acha likhti ho book likhlo apni annesha
kiya stpories han maza agaya jaan le lita
ab update de dedi ta re i m waitinge re
when u update re i m waiting re
thansk for the pm re
n after update u pm me re
update fast re i m eagerly waiting re
when u update re
awsome chapter written good work keep it up
keep writting n written all awsome ur hand is magical
very nice keep it up n entertain me re
sorry for the late reply
[/QUOTEi will update aspa
it ok u can take ur time no issues
thank you so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Chapter 2

A surging , seething ,murmuring crowd of reporters were gathered out side the Devgarh Royal Airport , the queen and princess was coming back to there own land and this news was spreaded all over the nation and every body wanted to be the first to capture the little princess in there camera as ujjani was still a mysterious figure for them now no more they addressed manyata as helpless , or bank crupt or ditched princess instead she was now the pride of nation , as the jet plain finally landed on Devgarh ,the very thought of being in her own motherland after a long span of time bought a smile in manyata 's face ,her face glowed with unknown joy ,it is very truly said home sweet home ,there is no other place like ones home ,as she turned around to see her little daughter curdled in her arms and her beautiful eyes closed as she was in some unknown lands of dreams it was indeed a trying flight and the little princess slept the whole time in this very point she simbolises what a lazy queen she will grow up to be as manyata moved her figure and caressed her cheek at that very touch, she opened her eyes softly and staired at manyata and asked in a soft voice

UJJANI:mumma are we already in India

MANYATA:yes angle come lets go

UJJANI:ahh mumma my stomach is aching ahh let me be in the flight

As she held her knees tightly and screamed in pain ,manyata chuckled at her antiques and took her into her arms while she kicked her legs in the air to set her free , a little brat she was far to stubborn and rebellious as she was they got down for the air bus and finally there were the royal welcome ,while ujjani still in her arms turned her face and rolled her eyes in anger , there were a big line of the most expensive cars and a crowd of mens dressed in black mostly body guards and some ambassador of the mahasabha , they greeted her with garlands as the head ambassador , Mr V Parek folded his hands and said

PAREK:gari khamaa yuvranisa

MANYATA:gari khamaa parek ji but why all this I have come here for an urgent meeting this all was not needed now please do not drag me into any ceremony and take me to raj mahal now

PAREK:my serious appolozies but this we got orders from rajmata ji but now without delay we shall start our journey

As they were taken to the car and the journey started while other cars filled with bodyguards were all around her , parek was almost shivering with fear in presence of manyata , her stern face and rude tone put him off guards this was not the same girl used to be soft spoken and nice and he really cannot blame her ,this behavior during there hard times mahasabh had really been harsh on them and now it was payback time as soon as the car came out of airport reporters started to gather around her car , while the car drove away living them all disappointed in the car manyata looked around and saw the area so many thing had changed in this three years as she looked towards ujjani who was looking out of the window as though she had entered some fairy land and asked her

UJJANI:mumma this is devgarh?

MANYATA:yes angle so you like it?

UJJANI:nope was just wondering where are the shopping malls

She said and clamly seated herself and they drove away to the palace ,as the iron doors opened both were shocked as the mother –daughter looked at each other ,there the palace was decorated like a new bride with flowers , lighting and it looked like some festival was going to take place while servants stood on either side of gateway to welcome them and there stood all her family member including vijay banna looking totally fine ,manyata mind ran puzzle as little ujjani opened the door and all being jumpy ran to her favourite member of the family ,her grandfather giriraaj she jumped as he pulled her into his embrace ,even manyata came out and took blessing of all elders and then turned towards vijay banna and asked

MANYATA:vijay banna you are supposed to be in hospital na

VIJAY:hospital but why ?

MANYATA: because you took pills unnzie

She turned towards unnati and saw the entire family smirking at her as DS explained

DS:please forgive us beta actually we have decided unnati and vijay marriage and we knew you would not come so we played this little trick to bring you here

MANYATA:omg ds you also ok so finally vijay banna is getting married by the way where is jai and jaggat

KOMAL:oh beta they has gone to haridwar to get the new born blessed by guruji they will be back in two days

BRIDGRAAJ:and I tell you beta she is fired at you better be aware

MANYATA;do not worry dad I will make it up to her but I think for now someone need to make an serious appolozy to me

UNNATI:not me maybe vijay needs to make

VIJAY:now what did I do m bhai it was all unnati plan

GIRIRAAJ:now you all stop lets get them inside do no forget we have this little guest with us who is visiting her homeland for the first time

DS:so ujjani do you like india?

UJJANI:hmm will tell after I visit the shopping malls

KOMAL:hai we got another jai in our family

All chuckled at the little baby antiques as they were taken to there room ,ujjani was now in vijay 's company he gave her a tour to the whole palace while she disturbed him with his notorious manner as manyata took a hot shower and got into a comfortable kurti and jeans no matter how rich or famous she was still she always loved to be in clothes that comfort her and people that loved her ,finally just before lunch she decided to grab the news headlines as she switched on to a news channel her mouth flung and tears swelled up in her eyes as the news reporter read

" A VERY SAD INCIDENT HAD TAKEN PLACE THE YUVRAAJ OF JAIGARH AND THE OWNER OF JAIGARH INDUSTRY WAS HIT BY A TRUCK TODAY MORNING AND NOW HE HAS BEEN ADDMITTED TO THE CITY HOSPITAL ,THE POLICE HAVE STARTED TO SEARCH FOR THE TRUCK DRIVER AND NOW I TAKE"

Everything went blank for manyata she remembered uday smiling face as the news rang in her mind she grabbed the car keys and went out searching for ujjani and found her finally in living room with all other members as she grabbed her left arms and said with tears overcoming her speech

MANYATA:angle we need to go to the hospital now

UJJANI:why mumma?

MANYATA:your dad is not well he is in the hospital

The whole place was silence as she started to drag ujjani but was stopped by giriraaj

GIRiRAAJ:stop it beta again you are going back to him a person who abandoned you during the time you needed him most he does not deserve your sympathy
MANYATA:dad I am just doing my duty of a wife

UNNATI:what duties are you talking about manyata you both are divorced

MANYATA:please I do not want to hear another word ujjani lets go

UJJANI:no mom never I am not going

MANYATA:he is your father

UJJANI:no mom he is your husband but not my father I do not care if he is alive or

She was cut shot as her right hand flung across ujjani cheek for the very first time she had to raise her hands on her angle there were fireball in her eyes as her face was pale just with tears tricking down as she said in a stern voice

MANYATA:not a word more you are coming and that is fixed

Saying this she was dragged to car as manyata started to drive her car breaking all the traffic rules and finally reached the hospital there was a huge crowd but somehow on recognizing her car the gaurds cleared off the crowd of reporters as she with ujani went inside the hospital and was lead to his private cabin she flung the door open as her eyes met his….

done with chappy

do forgive em for my mistake

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no res box or ss dsicontinued

pm for this chappy will be send only to those whose had liked my previous update



Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: huma12.

Awsssmmm puff pastryyy


thank you hunney bunney
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
sorry for the res board...😭😭😭
Hunh iam still there..i had a feeling that Vijay's suicide would be a prank bcoz he don't have that s guts lol... But Then Uday met with an accident..how and whats that puzzle which is still unclear in the whole story has he left her path just for her to get back her riyasat..was it augustia's evil plan??? and how could Ujjini say all those abt uday..really felt bad for him😕..
continue soon and thanks for pm..once again sorry for unres it late
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
Lovelydrops thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
nice update...manveer meeting on the way...
Edited by prernakhandelwa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww Manyata still had feelings for him! That is sooo cute. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thnx for the PM and please PM me again when you are finished.

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