Just a kiss-my first os part 2 pg4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys.. my first os ever..on asya..
JUST A KISS
Zoya was angry, very angry and frustrated and sad.. it was not her fault!! It was never her fault...but he always found a way to blame her!! Uff!!
"Vo khadoos ahmed khan... haan pata hai ki vo khadoos hai aur khadoos hi rehenge.. par thodi toh samajh honi chahiye na... sach mein bhuddu hai..arre mujhe kya pata tha ki unki tannu mere peeche khadi thi... usne haath aage badaya tha.. uski khud ki gati ki usse shock lagi.. mukh par kyun chiillaye??!"
Zoe was lying in the garden, staring at the stars...
Meanwhile in Asad's room
Asad was restless.. He sighed. He knew it was no use pretending anymore..
That girl always managed to make him mad. He knew that this marriage was true.. it wa not a nakli nikah.. he couldn't deny his feelings for her anymore..he couldn't lie..to his family, to her, to his self.. but he couldn't admit it too. He would end up hurting her just like his father hurt his mother... He could never forgive himself if anything happened to her.. like today.. when he heard a shriek.. he felt immensly relieved when he came to know that it was not zoya.. and he shouted at her.. for being so careless..he didn't mean too..but it could easily had been her instead of tannu..zoya..zindagi ..he couldn't live without her..he spoke softly.." kya karun zoya.. tumhe dur janne nai de sakta.. tumhe apne kareeb aane bhi nai de sakta..aakhir hun tog main jaanab Rashid Ahmed Khan ka beta.."
Dilshad was passing by and heard his predicament..her heart went out her son..
"Asad??" She knocked on his door..
"Ji ammi??" He got up and wiped the tears that were threatning to spill any moment.. he opened the door..
"Aap thik toh hain na??" He asked her??
Dilshaad rolled her eyes..typical asad..always hiding his feelings..
She said "Nai asad.. tumhe itne dard mein dekh kar main thik kaise reh sakti hun?? Maine dekha hai Asad.. tumhare ankhon mein zoya ke liye pyaar.. mujhe pata hai tum kyon darr rahe hon.. par asad tumhe pata hona chahiye.. tum tumhare abbu nai ho.. nai Asad" She cut him when he was about to protest.. " Tum tumhare abbu nai ho.." she said more forcefully.." Tum zoya ko chot pahuchaoge jab tum usse durr rahoge.. tum usse beintehaan mohabbat karte ho aur vo tumse.. Haan asad.. vo tumse pyaar karti hai aur yeh tumhe pata hai. Tumhare abbu apne zimmedari se bhagte the.. tum ne humara khayal rakha,Asad tumne..tum kisse ko bhi jaan bhoojkar choot nai pahuchaoge.. aur, zoya..voh bechari ka.." Asad quelled under the look that his mom gave him when he opened his mouth to rebuke her..
"Voh bechaari hai Asad.. uske bhi zindagi mein utni hi mushkille aayi hai jitni tumhari.. uske ammi nai hai.. usse laga tha ki uske abbu usse chodkar chale gaye hai.. par still ussne haar nai maana na? Vo haaste haste apne sare ghumo ko bhula kar apni zindagi mein aagi badthi gayi.. she is a person who will do anything for the person she loves..she love unconditionally Asad and never expects anything in return. That's the reason she forgives you so fast. Vo ghar par mehmaan ban aayi thi.. vo ab apni hai..humari Zoya. You both are a perfect fit! Now what are you doing staring at my face?? Go and confess Asad.. for a hotshot architect.. you are a bit bhuddu.."
"Ammi!!" Asad exclaimed
Dilshaad laughed
"Now go.."
Ofcourse there is going to be a second part.. title inspired by the song just a kiss by lady antebellum..
I know the title is not apt but.. u just have to wait for the second part..;)
My first os guys.. please like and comment..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was nice
cant believe that its your first OS
loved Asad- Dilshaad Momma convo
but why is it so short!!
will be waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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God your first os was fabulous!
i really loved it.
i was actually completely in it and tanveer ko shock laga > love you for that.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well Nice One... Waiting For next Part.. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww! Loved it! It was so cute! Especially Asad and Dilahad's convo!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWWW that was cute . waiting for next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome..update soon..i want to see asad confession..pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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title inspired by the song just a kiss by lady antebellum...like that nice plz cont
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully written n interesting <3<3<3<3<3<3<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice yaar.. do continue it...

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