ARIYA FF : Na Na Karte Pyar Kar Baithe pg 2.

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Surrogacy means replacement. A surrogat mother means another girl carries baby for another person or a couple to give them Parenthood.

will she be able to handel it the emotional rollcoaster will it be sucessful in it Or her life changes in opposite way? is able to accpet the outcome of all this ? or is This decision the wrong one for her happily married life.. ????

This FF is strictly for + 18.

Only Mature Ones'..

roshni rawte 27married to Arjun 5 yrs happliy married until that horrible night 2 yrs back whi forces her to decided to give te biggest scarfuce a wife can

Arjun rawte 30 he is happily married and trying to convince his lovely wife he is happy in their life but he is reluctant to not listen to his wife not her zidd

Riya mukherjee 20 young bubbly party girl of 21st centuryMicro minis clubbing n spoilt brat has a new bf every 2 months carry free bindass

fiza rathore 23 yrs old Arjun sister and sameer 'swife she is willing to help her bro try n convince her bhabi not to do what she think is right when it is wrong . she n sam r will being willing to help her at leaset she is in a other way then what she wants but she isn't listening and neither is her hubby dear

Sameer ratthore 30 loves his wife n is close to Arjun but still not able to get him self to agree with his wife on letting her give a huge sacrifice for them it isn't will to listen . this he will not let happen hell or high water after all its there pyaar ki ishaani he wont let agree no matter wht he does care for roshni but there is always another way and the way is called adoption

Part 1.

She open her eyes & look around & try to understand where sound come from. When she learns sound dirction , she slowly get up & immeadtly hold blanket around her. She sees one bedsheet is already hug her tightly . she hurridly goes to kitchen & founds out her husband making breakfast , she hug him back. He smiles when he sees her hands rested on his chest.

' Uth gyi meri Shona?'

'Hmm'

He turn around & look at her , she is still in bedsheet that he wrapped around her after thr loveable & passinote nite. Bedsheet hug her tightly till her knees. He clearly sees love- bites on her sholder . due to her bare shoulders & neck. He have urge to take her in his arms , but he control himself. her hair still messed up. He pick her up& take her to bedroom.

' I Love U , Sam..'

'Ya I know..'

' acha ji and woh kaise bole na my handsome hubby how'

' Fiza , jaan tum kal raat itni desperate jo thi'' he said naughtily & bend down to kiss her. After kissing she still hold him near to him..

' haye rabba badmash main ya tum ..Mat jaao na , Sam''

' Jaan ..'

' Ummm' jaao fine .' She pouted her face.

He smile at that, & frees himself from her hands.

' baby Fiza take rest & and take a bath & then break-fast kar lo , maine tumhara fav dish banaya hai..'

' breakfast aap ki bina kyun jaa re ho acha theek hai jaa ke aao jaldi ...and haan Sammy , call me '.

' Fiza sweethert din mai 10 baar call karta hue tumhe , vo Shree ab mere upper bhi joke banana laga hai' '

Fiza smile at him ,

He about to leave room , when he turn & come back to her,,

' Jaan , take care ok?' and yes take ur food properly & medicines also..'

' Hmm ' ..

' Sam I not child ' suddenely she gets angry.

' But u r going to deliver my baby na and i want a mota hatka cute chubby baby rajput jo hai na ''

' Sam I am only 4 months pregnant itne bade bimare nahi hai uff har latki goes on nromal during this time , for god sake go to office..'im fine

He wink at he and kisses her forehead and her tuumy & goes to ofc. She smile at that & keep her hand on her tummy.

' Dekha baby , Papa bhi na' '

After that she goes to bathroom & freshens herself , she wears yellow colour saree . Suddenely her cell buzzes.

' Ha mere Papa , Mummy abhi break fast hi karne jaa rahi thi..' she says childshishly.

' Thts good , acha ab Papa achi wali kissi do..'

' Just shut Sam tum bhi na har waqt romance ''

' why waise bhi baby sab sun sakta hai kay soche ga huh mama papa ko shut up bolke baat nahi maani ' huh...

' sab kya sochnge?'

' Are koi nahi sirf Arjun hai meri cabin mai , aur vo bhi phone se chipka hua hai'

' zarura Roshni bhabhi se baat kar rahe honge.'

' Ha , baat ko badalo mat , I want my kiss..'

' Ok , & she kiss her cell..'

' Ab mil gyi?'

' Chota sa tha , dn't wry raat ko badiwali le lunga..'

With thaat he off phone & Fiza blushed madly rembering their last night. When they both was mad for each other. kitne lucky hoon aap ki papa kitna pyaar ke humko haan na meri angel she says

At Evening

Arjun & Roshni

She hold one frock in her hands & silently sobbing..

She remembered Dr, words

' I am sry Mrs. Rawte but aap Maa nahi ban sakti..Is Accident aap ka utres per bahut gehere ghaav the , isiliye hame aapka utres remove karna pada. '

She looks at baby frock & hold it tight near her chest. Suddenely she feels someone hold her shoulder.

She turns her face & found him.

' Arjun'. ' she let out a whisper from her mouth & hug his waist tightly.

Arjun just helplessly look at her.

' Kyu kiya aisa mere saath Bhagwan ne , maine to saari pooji ki , vrat bhi kiya , atbhi bhi '' ' with that she again cries.

Arjun bend to face her & wipe her tears with his thumb.

' Roshni maine kaha na , mujhe nahi chaiye baccha , duniya mai kitne aise log hai vo kabhi Maa- Baap nhi ban sakte'

' Arjun , but I want my baby''

' Rosnhi its not possible. '

' But why??? Kitne saare log ye sab karte hai..'

' But I said no''

' Tum kabhi mujhe khush nahi dekhna chahte na,, Plz Arjun mujhe aapka baby chayie , Mera bhi Dil karta hai koi mujhe Maa bulaye , Mai kisi per apni Mamata luta du.. Arjun pata hai jab Fiza yaha aati hai na , aur bacche ke bare mai baat karti hai tab mai bahut jelous ho jaati hue , mai bhi chahti hue mai uski tarah baat shre karu sab ke saath..'

' kyun fiza bhi na main use baat kar na padga kyun aise baatein kar thi woh uff and Jaan , Fiza ka baby hamara hi ghar ka baby hoga , tum use pyar do..'

' uski galati nahi hai baby kick kya aaj usko tho jab i felt it muhje bhi dil kar yeh sab feel karne ko kuch nahi bolo usko ...and Nahi aap nhi samaz rahe hai , vo baby Sameer aur Fiza ka hoga , hame sirf uske Mama ' Mami honge, mujhe Maa banana hai. '

With that Roshni runs into their bedroom , and Arjun worriedly follow her , but both did not see a person who standing at their door & heard all.

Roshni roshni rako jaan baat tho suno door open karo jaan

Sam & Fiza home

he walks in with her favorite pastries

'mommy dear yeh aap dono ki liye your favorite' he sunndely he puts box dwon

He sees Fiza silently seat on bed thinking something ,

' Jaan are u fine na?' Sam ask her worridly.

Fiza hug him

' Kyu hua hai?' he ask baffeled.

' I just want to hug you' she says

' Aaj kal tumhara baby bahut kuch chahne laga hai..' 😉

' Ha bure phal ka bura beej' 😆

' OH , to mai bura phal ha'.😆

He parted from her & give quick kiss on her lips. & goes to freshens up.

After dinner in the hall

' Sam '

' ha'

' I want to tell u something..'

' ya , tel me..'

' Vo mai,,,, nahi vo maine socha ki' hamara baby hum vo'. Mai vo''

' Fiza dn't fear , tel me easily..'kya baat hai jaan bol na

She close her eyes & takes deep breath..

' Maine decided kiya hai ki mai hamara baby Arjun & Roshni ko dungi''

he was standing shell shcoked as her word sunlk in his ears

Just shut up Fiza'

' Par he is my brother..'

Sam pin her wall & angrily look at her, ' Ye hamara baby hai , aur mai ise kisi ko nahi dunga , u got it'

sam please hum na we are blessed yeh baby de do na maan jao phir iss ke baaad hum phir se try kar the and ek aur baby hoga but yeh

he had enough HE SLAPED HER ENOUGH DAMN IT PAGAL HOGE HO

HUH

she was shocked aap ne mere upper haath how dare you sam she ran in to the room

Damn it yeh kya kar diya maine😡

he goes in her room

jaan im sorry but why suddenly

no sam jaao yahaan se😭

he sat in front of her on his knees jaaan yeh baby is our pyaar ki ishaani

shaadi se pheli hum dono ... yeh humare pyaar hai jo bhi hua us raat and tum kis aur ko no i will not allow it jaan im sorry yeh nahi ho sak tha

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a hot girl in a short shorts and deep halter top and high heels walks into the the mall holding a cute um jiju ki saaath enjoy om take care of simran bye aysha di

arre arre rona nahi masi hai na di fikar nahi karo i love babies
aww meri simi bhooko hai huh yeh lo dodo pe lo she fee her with bottel

ri

ya liza god how do woman go through all the pain for these cuteis i cant

liza pagal ho i wopuld love to ek din but i want lots of kids but not of now im a model and my body is my job with fit body i have a job or else jobless

all this was being watched and heard by a woman from far

im sure yeh larki theek hoge she thought

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mr rathore she is fine congrats twins hne wale hai

ab tho maan jaao na do hoge wqe are blessed

pagal hoge ho kya bass enough how many times do i have say it no no no no its my final answer yeh mere bache hai i will not give it to your bhaiya nad bahai got that

ihe tne selfiish kaise ho sak the ho aap you kno what sam agar she stops suddenly...bhaiya babhi aap ? yahaan? sam turns


THIS FF WRITTEN BY Fiza28 AND M.V.Kohli007. Concept is fully ours. plz do not copy on other sites.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start girls.. go for it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Di
awesum wala start
lov it
all d best
love u
tc
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gud title
thanx fr d pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes bohat bold concept toh hai...
bohat emotional bhi hai...
being childless is the most miserable state! poor Roshni!
well written!
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Manu n fiza very good start..
feel bad for rosh..
ohh twins..
i understad feeza what she wanna to do...
but sam is also right..
update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi manali n fiza🤗...awesome concept...👏👏👏👏👏...loved it...
feeling reaaly bad for roshani😭😭😭😭...well she is right at her place ...
sam slapped her wife😲😲😲...dats not done😡...sarogacy is always a tpoic which is avoided ...nice iniatiative ...go ahead
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Hey..
Unusual concept..
Though bold but its reality of the modern day society..
Nice start..
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I am really sorry for late...

Mannu and Fiza that's great start...
Rathore being so adamant and he hit his wife...

Waiting for arjun and ria..

Roshni can't conceive...so how will Arjun hadle roshni...

update it soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great start!!!
Poor Roshni..
Well Fiza and Sam both are right in their own places. Giving your child to some one else is a HUGE HUGE sacrifice.
contd soon.
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CHAPTER 2

Written By : Fiza28 & M.V.Kohli007

She was shocked , " aap ne mere upper haath how dare you sam?" she ran in to the room

" Damn it yeh kya kar diya maine " 😡

he goes in her room

" jaan im sorry but..."

" no sam jaao yahaan se " 😭

he sat in front of her on his knees & says , " jaaan yeh baby is our pyaar ki ishaani"

" shaadi se pheli hum dono ... yeh humare pyaar hai jo bhi hua us raat and tum kis aur ko no i will not allow it jaan im sorry yeh nahi ho sak tha "


" jaan i love you too iss liye im telling jaan aisa mat karo yeh humara baby hai jaan " Rathod try to tel her..


" agar main bhabi ki jaaga hoti huh? " Fiza ask Sam...

suddenly she faints

" jaan jaan " Rathod try to wake up her...

he took her to the hospital

" mr rathore she is fine , congrats twins hne wale hai " Dr. inform him..

" yeh dehko yeh jo chota sa haath hai yeh ek hai aur yeh dosra pair of hands is the scond one " Dr. shows Rathod on monitor during Sonography session..

"ma aur babies theek hai "


" kya twins" 😊 fiz is thrilled rathore is too

" jaan im so happy "

" i know jaan me too " she says

they get in car

she calls her bro

" bhaiya aap aur bhabi jaldi ghar aao na i some news to tell "

" chutki kya hua?" says arjun

"bhaiya aao tho sahi "


"jaan tum unsab ko kyun..." Rathod irritetaly ask Fiza...

" arre sammy thy r family & im so happy . I want to share my happiness with them.. " Fiza excitedly says..

they reach home

" sammy im hungery no not me r babies r " she says cutely

" thank god jaan you are better my old sweet heart is back thank god ab yeh baby de na zidd chor diye tum "

" what are you saying sammy ab tho maan jaao na do hoge we are blessed ek anhi do ho re hai we are having Twins "

" pagal hoge ho kya bass enough how many times do i have say it no no no no its my final answer yeh mere bache hai i will not give it to your bhaiya and bhabhi got that " Rathod warns her.

" Sameer yeh sirf aap ka nahi hai meri bhi hai "


" damn it you will not i repeat will not give it to them "

" yes i will " Fiza says angrily... Rathod about to slap her.. Fiza sees Arjun & Roshni come to thr doorstep & sees all drama.. But Rathod back face to door so he dn't know about them..

" ..bhaiya babhi aap ? come na " Fiza happily says..

But Arjun angrily yells on Rathod " Rathore how dare you pagak hoge ho huh "

" no main nahi teir bhen oagal hoge hai yeh mera bache ko tumhe aur roshni ko de na cha ri hai " says sam

" kya ???" says arjun


" actually bahiya main aur sam are having twins " Fiza happily says & hug Arjun tightly. 😳

" tho main ek baby babhi ko doongi " With that she broke hug..

" kya?"

" ji haan babhi mera baby aap ka aur bhaiya ko ma aur papa bhuliga "

sam looks at herAngry

and goes in the room

" fiz dont ... tum pagal hoge ho " says roshni


" haan fiz sameer ko yeh sab nahi pasand itna gussa hai koi bhi baap aisa nahi karega " Arjun try to tel her.


" ill make sam understand, fikar nahi karo ab bhai say hi to your baby " With that she hold Arjun's hand & put it on her stomach..

" Fiza no yeh galat hai. Sam ko agar yeh pasand nahi tho hum yeh baby kaise meri fikar mat karo ye mat karo" says roshni


" aap dono itne parshaan mat ho , i ll convince him. "

" chalo lets eat na " she says

" no fiz hum chale the tu jaake sam se baat karo uskii saath dinner karo " says roshni


" par bhabi " says fiz

" no fiz jaao sam ki pass hum chalte hai " says arjun n hugs her

" bhai please dont go"

" nahi fiz tum baat karlo then kal ill talk to him ok ab jao " n they leave


she goes in room

sam is super angery

she brings him dinner in a plate and goes to him " gussa chodo na phele kuch khalo phir aur bhi strnegth hoga muhje pe gussa hone ko " she says cutely and takes his hand and sits him on the bed

he looks away , he is very upset

" arre yeh kya baby tho hoga thode months main but sab se bada baby tum ho " and pinched his cheeks

" sameer rathore openur mouth na" She request him . He look at her puppy face & smile krept on his lips he open his mouth bt immeadtly she feeds him

he finally smiles he takes the roti and paneer and feeds her she feeds him after dinner he holds her hand

" jaan dehko i know tera intension acha hai par yeh galat hai kal ka din jab bache bade honge and pooche gaye kyun hum de diye usko phir ? "

" Par Sam aise kaise vo..."


" just think calmly jaan "


" ok woh sab choro , you know how i love you and always have na "


she nods .

" yeh dehko "

he takes out album

and shows her there pics " kitna pyaar tha and hai na ...

yeh dehko yaad hai main chup ki se outside your house i came and roshni saw us like this that day she knw we were dating " he says

i love thsi picture jaan

yeh duniya ki sabse peacful place hai mreliye she says


he kisses her hand

" aur yeh dehko " he shows her.

kitne gusse thi tum late jo ayya main but ek hug aur tum muje maaf ki kyun

and this pic

" yaad hai your birthday party that night i told you i loved you just look kitna khush ho tum "


" and yeh pics dehko jaan yeh din yaad hai " ...he smiles

she blushes

" haan kaise bhool sak thi hum shree and liza ki enegment se wapsa aa re the car broke down u got out to fix it i also came out of car phir rain hua i was dancing in rain n my sari... aap ayye mere pass n up ur jacket to cover us phir put of blue aap muhje propse kiye i said yes " " phir it started raining harder ek old cottage main hum chaiye gaye" she says and blushes

" phir " he says naughtily

" phir jo bhi hua aap tho deke re hai " she says

" kya hau tha jaan " Rathod ask her.

she takes his hand places on her tummy " jo bhi hua woh raat outcome yeh hai " she says shyly

" ji haan jaan woh hi tho hum kaise apne pyaar kis aur ko de huh "

" dont forget jaan jab tumne muhej bole ki main baap... yaad hai kya kare hum? "

"usi din hum dono chup ke shaadi kar liye "


" yaad hai phir arjun ko pta ach chala " Sam says.

but jab he found out why he flipped but then i told him ki no i love u iss liye

" jaan please dont give r babies please " Sam request her.

" Par Sam?"

" ab soo jaao you need rest " they go to bed

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next day

roshni is mall she sees riya taking care of a baby she hear her talk

" yup chamkili i love babies they r too cute honestly kash mere bhi ek ho cute sa wala ...i wish muhje baby asap ho par shaadi kis ko karni hai abhi i want my freedom . waise bhi i ma model and dancer "

they leave from mall roshni call her besti aysha

roshni hears them and gets all of riyas info taken out aysha her friend

" aysha please yeh sab details muhje hi do yhe hai larli ki pic i had taken it at mall "

" par roshni kyun yaar ?" Ayesha asks her..

" plz jo bole karo na and arjun ko mat bol "

" acha baba nahi bolthi khush "


she thinks " yeh larki is perfect jo main karna jaldi karna warna fiz ki shaadi main promblems hoge cause of me and arjun ka problem... aur kitna bada dil hai uska "


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that night riya is at blue lagoon club se had gone there to dance a music video fora comercial she didnt now it wasnta respectable club

she was dancing to this song like that n wearing same clothes to watch

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPmAJPUVY8I[/YOUTUBE] ye wala gana ( and sme dress) just check it..


suddnly arjun rathore get all call there ki kuch theek nahi hai

they come there they seea girl dancing but due to lights cant see who

rathore shoots his gun everyone runs so does teh girl

rathore n sree and aysha get lots of men n there ganjha arjun sees a girl run from there but her face was hidden by her hair but he saw her eyes

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next day

rathores nani comes from Rajashtan .

" sam please mann jaao ek bacha main tho de re hoon bhai aur rosnhi ko i already told you twins ho re hai tho ek humara ek unka bas " Fiza pleaded.

" jo bhi karna hai karo damn it but iss ki wahje agar hum dono ki beeech dorriyan aaye galti aap ki hai " he yells

" aap itne slefish kyun ho re ho aap and haan karoonge jo main chathe ..."

suddenly his nani eneters

" nani aap " Rathod sees her.

" acha hua main aaye bahu aisa baat kar the pati se woh theek bol ra hai

but tu jaise larki acha jaanti thi hoon mera sameer ko trap kare ke tum jaise cheap larki se umeed hi kya kar na shaadise phele hi chi aur ab do ho re ho tho burden hai tum pe tho issliye de re hai bacho ko kaise ma ho tum kaise aurat ho " taunts nani

fiz looks at her and sam and runs in room crying Cry

" nani bas karo aap yeh sab nahi bol na tha yeh mere uski beech ki baat hai iss haalt main aap usko... galt ho aap... "

she was abt to call her bro but sam came in she thought she off cell she didnt dialed ( But actually phone was connected to Arjun , Arjun picks up call & hears.. )

Sam goes to her goes to fiz

" baat kar ne hai "

" sam aap mere side kyun nahi liye nani ine baatein bole ki main ekachi lari nahi hoon achii ma nahi hoonki main apne bache ko burden feel kar thi iss liye main bahi ko de re hoon

you know jhoot hai woh sab "

" no fiz i dont know maybe she is right shahyd yeh ek burden hai yeh bache mere pyaar "

" and jo bhi nani bole re its ur fault tu hi zidd kare ho "

" sam aap bhi????" CryCryCry

" nahi fizz app kare ho yeh sab "

~~~~~~~~~

arjun hears this n tells roshni

" roshni jo bhi ho we cant take their baby already problems hai usko if we do aur bhi hoga " he tells roshni

" i know you are right jaan , dehka aab tho sam bhi fiz ki side nahi de ra aha " Arjun informs Roshni..

" ek ratsha hai sab theek hone ka " she says

" kya jaan?"

" jo main bole thi mann jao na " says roshni

" pagal hoge huh nahiii i said know bas "

and leaves

" no arjun jo bhi ho main nahi hi fiz ko thakleef main dehke sak thi aur main bhi aur thakleef nahi hota sahane wali u have to do this"

roshni calls riya

" hi ms riya muherjee i have a offer for you ? "

" can we met?"

" hi.. aap ?what comapny se???? and offer?????

" milke baat karen?" Roshni says

" Ok" Riya says They decided time & place.

" ab sab theek hoga" thinks roshni

~~~~~~~~~~~

precap

what baby excuse me aap im nota down maket cheap girl got that chi howdare you yells riya

baat tho suno please says roshni

dehko 1 core doongi main

~~~~~~~~~

no roshni noo yeh larki theek nahi lalg re hai i haveseen her sum where

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few months leap

sam please aisamat karo na i want my old sam back

no fiz not till i get my old fiz backsameer beta chor usko ache nahi hai yeh muhje humasha aysha pasand thi yeh larki aap ki pyaar ki kahdra nahi hai


fiz hears this " kyaa??? " she fell from stairs

~~~~~~'

yeh sab tere whaje hua hai rathore tere nani ki whajse

no rawte tere biwi ki whajse fiz zid kar rahi thi

fine rathore ill fix this bu t mere bhen ki saath acha raho we wont take ur baby

we have to oeprate now mr rathore

and ma ya bachhe?

nani says " bachhe "

rathore says " biwi"

~~~~~~~'

roshni theek hai aap ki baat mann liya maine

kyaaa yes thank u she hugs him


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