MAANEET SS HEAVEN IN HELL THREAD-1 - Page 40

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nalinu... 🤗


finished d Story... gosh am loving it totally... do add me to ur pms!!

n what movie is this... i dnt watch tamil movies but still want to know!!!

btw i didnt like GSK dying 🤣 but what to do... maaneet should be one na... so chalega...


am wondering how geet will fall for maan though already shes like getting used to it... but d best comedy is when she calls him maanji maanji 🤣


update jaaaldiii 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ainaGURTI

Nalinu... 🤗



finished d Story... gosh am loving it totally... do add me to ur pms!!

n what movie is this... i dnt watch tamil movies but still want to know!!!

btw i didnt like GSK dying 🤣 but what to do... maaneet should be one na... so chalega...


am wondering how geet will fall for maan though already shes like getting used to it... but d best comedy is when she calls him maanji maanji 🤣


update jaaaldiii 😡


this is not film story..its her own.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome one..plzzz do pm meee
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ainaGURTI

Nalinu... 🤗



finished d Story... gosh am loving it totally... do add me to ur pms!!

n what movie is this... i dnt watch tamil movies but still want to know!!!

btw i didnt like GSK dying 🤣 but what to do... maaneet should be one na... so chalega...


am wondering how geet will fall for maan though already shes like getting used to it... but d best comedy is when she calls him maanji maanji 🤣


update jaaaldiii 😡





thanku dear for reading tis ss..love u
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Posted: 12 years ago
nalini di whr r u

update ???

update???
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Posted: 12 years ago
Where r u dear?? Eagrly waitng fr the update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting 4 nearly a month😉
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Posted: 12 years ago











H2 - 18





MORNING, IN BF TABLE


Maan came for breakfast, and saw Dadi and Geet sitting there



Maan : Dadi were is Anni

Dadi : she went early to college as some presentation is there

Maan : hmmm

Geet : ok Dadi im leaving

Maan : I will drop u

Dadi was shocked to hear tis from Maan, but happy tat to see Maan ,

Geet : no it is ok Maanji, I will go by myself

She is already confused with Maan ki behavior, and now travelling with him alone, no way

Maan : I didt ask u , I said im dropping u, in stern voice

Geet : no I have to go to temple, u will be late to ur office

Dadi : Geet u will go to temple

Geet : yes Dadi, Guru will take me and Anni to temple every Friday

Dadi was emotional : same like his maa, she too will go to temple on every Friday

Maan : ok then I will take u to temple and then drop u in ur school

Geet : no its ok but cut by Maan ki one glare

Dadi : Maan u r going to temple

Maan : Dadi I said I will take her , not I will go

Maan was waiting in te car, Geet came and sat next to him.

Maan drove te car with te bgs following them. they reach te temple



Maan : u go I will wait for u

Geet : Maanji if u want u can go to office, my school is nearby I will go

Maan : I will wait, if u cant understand I have to say in my language

Geet got scared with his tone and got down from te car, and went to a shop to buy pooja thali

Geet was standing for log time, asking for plate but te shopkeeper lady, didt respond her.

Maan who was watching Geet , came out of his car to see wat is taking Geet so long to buy te plate even though there is no customer in te shop

Geet to tat lady: Maaji im waiting for so long u not giving te plate

Lady: I thought uw ill understand , but no, now only I open te shop , I don't need my first income from a widow like u, so pls go to some other shop, im waiting for sagun lady to buy

Geet felt some one pierecing her heart and she started to cry



Maan who was listening to tis, came near to Geet and hold her


Maan started to shout like roaring lion: how dare u say abt My Geet , she IS MY WIFE, MAAN SINGH KHURANA KI BIWI, how dare u point ur finger at her , I will destroy u from tis world next sec





Lady was shivering to see Maan ki eyes which is spliiting fire

Lady: sory sir, but seeing her in white dress without sindoor, I thought she is wi, but she swallow te next word seeing Maan ki fuming eyes







Maan was fuming hearing her words, he took te sindoor from te shop and placed it on Geet ki manga and took flowers and kept it on her head, took te pooja plate and throwed 500 rs on her face and drag Geet inside temple


All were suddenly happen, tat Geet don't know how to react, she was shocked .



Seeing Maan , pandit took te plate and started te pooja, Maan was seeing Geet te way she stood numb, they finished te pooja, Pandit gave te Prasad , Maan kept te sindoor on her head and drag to go around te temple, then he took her to car and started te car


Both are lost in they thought, one in shock and one In anger, Maan was fuming how can some one point his Geet, but if she didt wear tis dress , no one have pointed her,why she is not accepting it damit


On other side, Geet is shocked to react anything, te way tat lady ki words and te way Maan claiming her in front of everyone, all these made her speechless. she don't know were her life is taking her, she cant allow Maan ki life to be spoiled with her , she have to go far away from him for his good.

Coz of her fate she lost Guru but Maan , his family needs him, so it is better I will go away from them.


Maan drove te car in high speed showing all his frustration, Geet holds her heart scared to see Maan, they reached KM, Maan drag Geet inside and , Dadi was shock to see them so early and seeing Maan dragging Geet, she went and pull Geet from Maan




Dadi : Maan wat is tis, why u dragging Geet

Maan : tat u have to ask to her Dadi

Geet tilt her head down

Dadi saw Geet , sindoor on her mang , and flower on her head

Dadi : wat happen Geet



Maan was angry : say Geet why u silent, say tat ur husband died so u became widow

Dadi shouted : Maan


Geet was shocked to hear tat and felt a pain In her heart, and her hand holds te chain tightly to her heart , which Maan tied as mangalsutra, on they wedding




Maan : im correct naa Geet

Dadi : stopped it Maan , say wat happen


Maan : ask her Dadi , wat had happen, she will say tat all are considering she is bad omen and hesitating to sell te pooja thali thinking she is widow wen her husband is standing next to her, hana Geet




Dadi was shocked and her hold on Geet was loosened

Dadi : Geet wat he is saying


Geet tilt her head down confirming Maan, Dadi felt hurt and went to her room, without saying anything, Geet saw Maan who glared at her and went to his room, Geet went to her room, Geet is crying lying on her bed suddenly some one came into her room opening te door forcibly.




Geet got up and saw Maan who came to her room and open her cupboard

Geet : Maanji wat u doing

Maan glared her which makes her to shut her mouth.




Maan took all te white dress from her wardrobe and went to her balcony . He put all te clothes on te floor and poured te petrol and burned it


Geet was shocked to see : Maanji wat is tis, she try to cool te fire but Maan holds her hand

Maan : dare u wear tis dress again and rub te sindoor, then u have to face MSK

Maan left her hand and went to his gym to cool his burning heart. After Maan went , Geet collapsed on te floor and started to cry




Dadi seeing all tis, one side she is happy tat Maan taking steps to move on with Geet, but sad seeing Geet drowning in pain. She prayed to god to bring happiness in they life


At night , Maan came to dinning hall, and saw Dadi and Anni sitting

Maan : were is Geet

Dadi : she said she is not hungry she will have afterwards

Maan stood and went to her room, saw Geet who was sitting and resting her head on te bedpost and lost in her thought

Maan : Geet t

Geet opens her eyes and saw Maan and straighten herself



Maan : cum have ur dinner

Geet turn her face : im not hungry

Maan :I didt ask u , im saying to cum for dinner


Geet didt say anything, Maan closed his eyes : don't test my patience Geet, cum


Geet didt respond, Maan glared at her , he holds her hand and , Geet snaps his hand

Maan : Geet i said cum

Maan drag her and pinned her to near by wall, Geet pushing him, with all her force but his hold on her was tightened




Maan : i said u have to face MSK , saying tis

Maan took Geet in his arms and carried her downstairs

Geet was so shocked and started to wriggle : leave me Maanji wat u doing leave me, I said leave me, she started to hit him with her fist which didt affect Maan,




Maan didt say anything , he just carried her and made her to sit in te chair

Maan : now have or else I will feed u

Anni giggles , Geet glared at her

Geet : dust dhanav



Maan : u can give me names afterwards now eat


Geet started to have her food, Dadi was Happy to see it but she didt react, Geet looked at Dadi, but she avoided her, Geet felt sad seeing Dadi


Dadi : Maan u r having tondon ki party on friday

Maan : hmm I know he is ur college friend, so he invited u too

Dadi : Maan we all should go, Anni , and but Dadi stop Geet ki name

Geet looked at her

Maan : ok Dadi we all will go , he said we in stern voice looking at Geet


Everyone, retired to they room, Dadi was preparing her bed, Geet knock te door

Dadi didt see her : cum in

Geet enter her room and stood in front of her : Dadi



Dadi didt say anything, and turns her face

Geet holds her hand : pls Dadi im sorry

Dadi didt respond, Geet sat beside her and kept her head on Dadi



Geet : pls Dadi im sorry I didt mean to hurt anyone, mainly Maanji, but I cant forget Guru. i cant accept him Dadi . Maanji have to get better life, he cant spoil his life with me who lost her life. Dadi u already lost ur one grandson coz of my fate, I don't want to happen anything to Maanji, im bad to all dadi, I cant give happiness to any one wen I don't te meaning of happiness. Dadi wen I was 5 years my parents left me, and then my chachu said he is taking me to vacation and left me in orphanage saying im a orphan. But I didt f eel a orphan there, Father , Guru , and Anni , and kids we all lived like one family, but my bad fate , wen my Guru got his family back , after so long but he u all lost him coz of my fate, if he have not decided to marry me, he have been lived with u. she started to cry




Dadi caress her head


Geet : Dadi u know wen Guru died in front of me wat I feel, I cant face like tis again, pls dadi I want to see Maanji happy, not with me, he will get a better person than, who give him all happiness , who will suit for his status and fulfill all his needs, not a orphan like me, so it is good tat I will go away from him Dadi


Dadi : Geet , don't say u are bad , ur our angel Geet

Dadi too felt bad for Geet and caress her head

Dadi (st) : Geet u want to see Maan ki happiness but u don't know were his happiness lies


Dadi : Geet now leave everything abt ur past and future, now live only ur present, now how ur life going. Don't think wat relation u have with Maan but take te relation wat u have with khurana . time will decide everything Geet. Now don't hurt urself by thinking abt ur past. i know Geet wat went through u wen Maan shouted at u and I saw how ur hand went to hold te chain we he said ur husband , whatever Geet , every girl thinks her soul mingle with her mangalsutra, which tied by her husband. If u accept ur relation or not, ur heart know wat tis chain hold in a girl's life. Now don't think abt anything u sleep Geet





Geet was shocked to hear tis, she stared at te chain which Maan tied her and te locket which have M letter, she holds te chain tightly I her palm, and closed her eyes,


Maan who was standing near te door, heard them

Maan : soon u will accept our relation Geet












PRECAP- PARTY

Next part- 19, PG 83


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update
Geet must understand maan nd Dadi feeling
Nd maan ka gussa ufff

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