New Arjun SS-They Say Its Destiny...-Part 5- Pg18

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HI!!!!! i'm new here and a great fan of Arjun...and I've read some of the stories and somehow have gathered enough courage to start one of my own...i am not very good at it..i hope u people will not feel disappointed...
i haven't thought of a title yet...i hope you all will give me some suggestions...

i am posting a prologue right now...and if u all like it..i'll continue..
hope u like it..😊

PROLOGUE
"Everybody wants happiness,
Nobody wants pain,
But there's no rainbow,
Without a little rain."

These words still echoed somewhere deep down in his heart and sent ripples of familiarity in the seemingly frozen ocean of strangeness...And yet there was no familiarity. Those midnight black orbs seemed devoid of the moonlight which previously caused them to sparkle. They were chilly.
There was no light. "If there is something darker than darkness itself ", he thought with a heavy and sarcastic sigh, " it has to be my life". He was walking on the deserted road, lost in thoughts, trying to squint through the darkness to see where he was going..trying to see through the ambiguity which clouded his future...

In reality he was trying to peer into the past, trying to make out, when it was that all the laughter had ended...

And suddenly the moon came out from behind the clouds and dispelled the darkness, dazzling him...he glanced at his watch, the night had just begun...




How was it? should i continue? i know i haven't been clear enough about the story line...but still please give me your views ... WAITING..😊


P.S. I may not be very regular in updates due to my school and coaching but will really try my best...😊


INDEX

Prologue Pg 1
Character Sketch Pg 1
Part 1 Pg 3
Part 2A Pg 5
Part 2B Pg 7
Title Options Pg 8
Part 3A Pg 9
Part 3B Pg 13
Part 4 Pg 15
Part 5 Pg 18
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Payal_156 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcum to our arjun family dear
very mysterious n interesting prologue
pls give cs..
nice start
do cont ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyy welcome to the forum😊
great start yr...!!!
very interesting...!!!
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
nice prologue 👍🏼
please continue 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice prologue...continue soon...and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great prologue :) loved it
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hellooo!!!! Thank you so much for the encouragement...it really means a lot.

Here's the character sketch.. i'm waiting for your takes on it..hope you all like it..😊

CHARACTER SKETCH

Arjun Suryakant Raute: 30 years old. Brilliant cop. Great analytical skills. Mysterious and recluse. He has lost everything which mattered to him…his family, his dear wife Roshni, and his friends. He blames himself for all the wrongs that have happened. Wants to avenge his wife's death by killing Sikandar, a high- profile criminal who murdered his wife before his own eyes. His biggest fear is of being helpless and so he keeps himself away from people.

Sameer Rathore: 30 yr old, ETF Chief. Was Arjun and Roshni's best friend. He knew Roshni since childhood and she was like a sister to him, a sister he never had. He holds Arjun responsible for her death.

Shree, Chotu and Aisha are same as the show

Akansha Singh: Arjun's cousin. His uncle's daughter. They used to be closer than real bro-sis and were best friends but this relationship died a slow death due to some reasons. She's a 31 yr old successful criminal lawyer.

Abhishek Singh: Akansha's husband. He too is a criminal lawyer. He's 33years of age.

Muskaan Singh: Akansha and Abhishek's 5 year old daughter. She has a great bonding with Arjun and considers him her best friend. She misses him a lot.

Roshni Raute: Arjun's wife. She was murdered by Sikandar 2 years ago. She regarded Sameer as her brother and had loved Akansha like her own sister.

Poornima Sehgal: A 29 year old girl. Her parents are no more. She no longer believes in love due to a heartbreak from which she has still not moved on. She poses to be cheerful and happy though the reality is completely opposite. She works as a research specialist in ETF (Delhi).

(She has a relationship with Roshni which will be revealed later)


Other details and characters will be revealed as the story progresses...
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cs is very interesting...
poornima aur roshni ka connection wow...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing CS :) loved it
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mujhe update chaiye pls
grt cs dear
itna interesting
wow
very different
wat a coincidence me tumhe buddy request send krne wali thi lol
waiting waiting
mujhe update chaiye
aww muskan n arjun
waiting to knw d bond
dis kinda story me feel special pls..!

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