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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -PinkShadows-

🤔 I want upar date...NOW!



Will upar date after ekjhams :$
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hwwcome i didnt knew abt ths
gotta read
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Simply Love.


The sun went down the hill making the place go dark. There were hardly any stars shining on the night sky. The moon shone in solitary bliss. He looked out of the window and noticed the empty street. Taking his coat and house keys he closed the main door and started walking towards the open playground in the front. He settled on the grass beneath the oak tree. The events from the previous night came flooding back in front of his eyes. He closed his eyes tightly and moved his hand through his hair in frustration. He opened his eyes as he felt a hand on his shoulder. Looking up he noticed his mother standing in front of him.

"You love her." Seeing her son in pain she hugged him tightly.

"I don't know what to do Ammi. She-she hates me."

"Asad why are you jumping into conclusions."

"Ammi I- I've hurt her so much. I told her to get out of my life Ammi."

"Asad you were drunk yesterday. You didn't know what you were doing. It wasn't your fault beta. Just go find her. Talk to her. Tell her you love her."

"But Ammi-"

"Asad enough of this. You've spent you whole life trying to hide your emotions. But trust me if you do it this time you're going to regret this moment till the day you die."

He looked in her eyes and somehow got the courage to get up. He hugged her one last time and sprinted out of the place like crazy.


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He sighed reaching the place. He was confident she would be there. Gathering up all the courage he had he started walking towards the garden where they had first met. There she was. Standing about two feet ahead of him. Her back facing him and eyes gazing at the moon.

"Ms.Farooqi." He called out.

His heart started beating erratically. He started walking towards her.

"I don't want to talk to you Mr.Khan."

"You will have to Zoya." She closed her eyes as she heard him call her by her name for the first time. She wanted to go away from there but the sincerity in his voice was stopping her. He came and stood in front of her.

"You're leaving ..?"

"Yes. I have a flight in 4 hours. This is what you wanted right.?"

"You can't go." Her heart stopped beating as she heard him.

"Your earring. The one you lost. You can't leave without this." He handed her the earring taking it out from his coat's pocket. She looked at him in disbelief. Maybe he really didn't love her. She took the earring from his hand and started walking out of the place.

"Zoya.?" He called her once again.

"What Mr.Khan.?" She asked in an irritated tone not caring to face him.

"I-.."

Her eyes widened in shock. She turned around to face him and saw him looking at her with love. Slowly she started walking towards him as he continued to talk.

"I love you." Her heart fluttered as he said that. Asad Ahmed Khan was standing in front of her and telling her that he loved her. She thought she could die peacefully now. But then again she wanted to live this life with him. As a response to his proposal she hugged him tightly. He was taken aback for a moment but slowly encircled his arms around her waist. They separated from the hug and Asad had a huge grin plastered on his face. Zoya looked at him confused. Her eyes widened in shock as she realized him kneel down in front of her. His hand forwarded towards her.

"Ms.Zoya Farooqi.. Marry me.?"

Tears started flowing out of her eyes. In the past few days she had gone through so much that it was hard for her to believe she was going through the best moment of her life. She slowly lifted her hand. Asad's grin grew wider. He raised his hand a bit more but she instead took her hand in the other direction and pinched herself.

"This is not a dream.?" She asked in daze. He moved his head in a no. Her teary face started sparkling and her beautiful smile was back on her face. She gladly gave him her hand. He got up and kissed her and everything else didn't seem to matter anymore. The world for them felt full of love.


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^^ Nothing really great. Just something simple that came into my mind. I'm writing on AsYa for the first time and I hope it turns out good cause I really don't think it's nice.

Thank you everyone for commenting and liking my work. It means a lot to me. 😳
Do read or comment or criticize .

Take care
Loads and loads of love
Aditi. xoxo
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Reserve:)

Though I don't read Asya but you'll be an exception
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AsYa 😲
OMG OMG They are my new lovey-dovey couple.😆 It was simple, lovely and pure. I could imagine KSG as Asad all the time. The emotions were apt. The feelings were mutual. Asad in his usual jerk manner insulting Zoya was true . In simple the first try on AsYa was worth it.
Loved it^^
Edited by Salwa_Mehrin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

it was really nice...simple nd true to their characters!!!!

good job!!!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay I don't watch this show so I don't really know what's going on. But I know from reading the intro part that whatever you wrote is amazing as always. Keep writing! oh and I love this line===>There were hardly any stars shining on the night sky. The moon shone in solitary bliss.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
reserve ;D
OMGieee i cant believe i just forgot to edit this :|
u need to kick me for this... :| even u didnot remind me 😭


firstly this was a sweet OS...:D i m sooo proud of u kiddo
IT was simple yet elegant, short yet was enough to bring out the emotions...i really hope something like thatwould have happened in the show...

and ASAD SMILED??? OMG it seems ages i havent seen him smile the ARMAAN STYLE :D
i want to comment big but i dont know what more to write :(
it was short
It was simply brilliant :D

I LOVEEE UUU
Edited by rockstar_kajen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Salwa_Mehrin

AsYa 😲

OMG OMG They are my new lovey-dovey couple.😆 It was simple, lovely and pure. I could imagine KSG as Asad all the time. The emotions were apt. The feelings were mutual. Asad in his usual jerk manner insulting Zoya was true . In simple the first try on AsYa was worth it.
Loved it^^



Thank you Salwi <33 I was kinda not sure if people would like it cause I've never written on anyone except for KaJen and AR .. Thanks a lott 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..vidhi..

it was really nice...simple nd true to their characters!!!!

good job!!!😊



Thank you soo much vidhi :)

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