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cyrine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: eshasrk
No matter how they try to justify Ayaan-Zoya marriage, I am dead against it...period
I cannot see 2 brothers marrying the same girl without any reason, just out of the blue, becoz one wants to get out of a forced marriage which btw he brought upon himself and the other one for visa reasons or whatever reason
Also I want Tanveer's true colors to be revealed as soon as possible and want her out too as fast as possible. There is enough scope in this story without these 2 tracks...
And this time around I want Asad to be the one who discovers the true face of his so called Tameez and Tehzeeb Salwaar Kameez wali
There is so much in the Ghafoor-Zoe-Asad angle to explore that is IF the CV's handle it well without the triangle crap...

Asad and Zoya have reached a certain point in their equation and it will get completely spoiled when Zoe marries Ayaan. I fail to see how a marriage btwn 2 brothers can unite the family...
Uniting both families can also happen without one girl marrying both the brothers

WORD, I agree with eacha nd every word. Actually in my eyes I see no justification in one girl marrying two brothers, it sickens me and frankly speaking I will most probably leave the show as the story will be ruined. There so many other ways that cvs can go and avoid the typical serial way of getting verybody invovlved with everybody.

And besides 4lions have already tried this earlier in Geet serial (Dev married Geet first and then Maan, now it does not make any difference that the marrige between Dev and Geet was declared null and void) but that was a different story, here Ayaan is a good guy and he cares about peoples emotions.

And if 4 lions do decide to repeat Geet (brothers and geet marrige) then while they are at it why not repeat IPKKND and introduce a track between Zoya and Imraan miyan that will make QH go straight down and tehy dont even need to strecth the Ayaan and Zoya track then.

They will just make everythink a lot more complicated as Humaira and Zoya are step sisters. basically CVS are digging their own graves if they do decide to go on with the Ayaan and Zoya track.

And you are right I am actually looking forward to Asad-Zoya and Siddique angle more. I think theer is a lot more potential there. Asads hatred towards the Gaffur Siddique and Zoyas cravings to be accepted by her abbu.

And I really like Humaira and Ayaan as a couple. They are cute and Humaira balances their scenens well.

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Livingfree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Nice post.

Even I feel that if they do want to separate Asad and Zoe, they can do so without resorting to the complicated marriage track. I think separation in their case will work out in their favour because till the time they are together, they won't fully realise the importance of the other in their life. Distance makes the heart grow fonder. But for this, Ayaan Zoe's marriage is not the solution. She can still live with her father for sometime. If they want to show two brothers falling for the same girl, they can show Ayaan falling for her. Of course, Zoe won't feel anything for him. I can only envisage Ayaan and Zoe as good buddies, nothing more. And then Ayaan realising it was just his infatuation and backs out when he realises that Asad and Zoe have feelings for each other. He can act as a catalyst for their relationship. There are other important matters too to be taken care of like Zoe Gafoor's relation, Asad Gafoor, Zoe Razia, Rashid Asad, Ayaan Humeira, Zoe Razia and Dilshad Rashid Shireen. So even without the dreaded marriage track, there are so many other things that are interesting to watch out for

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: cyrine

Agree... I also think that they have chnaged the storyline as you said this is a show and it depends on the TRP and besides that the show ill lose its appeal, freshness and charm completley if both of the brothers marry Zoya. Thnak you dear :))

Indeed, it will lose, already it when Tanveer track was being a bit serious. Am soo sure in the TRP Race no one wants to lose the 1st place 😆

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muskaan23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

ahahaha... no dont worry ur analysis was not bad at all... 😉

I think its all a bit complicated, but due to the 'plan' of the CV's ...

See i personally have to admit that i still am not able to get the whole story, as for mw its all very forced. There is no logic behind anything. Don't get me wrong I am definitely watching and also find some scenes quite amusing and all, but i simply have stopped searching for reasons and common sense in it.

But still let me try to share my views with you 😉

See I personally think, that if Zoya has been looking out for her father that long and is totally desperate to find him and b near to him. Then there could b created a situation, where she believes that marrying Ayaan is the only way to get near to her father. So i think with that CV's are actually not stepping out of character, as beside being courageous and strong Zoya has also proven that she would go out of her way to get what she wants. And a lot of times takes irrational decisions. So that i kind of can handle, if it is JUST to b near to her father.

Ayaan: oh i totally think he would go for this plan. As much as he is kind hearted he also has proven that he is immature and mostly dos not think about right or wrong or consequences. He simply does what he things is best (mostly for him). Also has he shown that once he is angry or upset he crosses his lines for e.g. calling Asad 'sautela'. So again if a situation is created where Razia is pressurizing him and he actually doesn't want to give Humeira wrong hopes (thts y he would probably try to back off from her and either break her heart than talk things out) ...and on the other hand Zoya wants to enter that house to come closer to Sidduiqi, Ayaan would probably help her (if he knows the truth) to get himself out of Humerias head, to take 'revenge' from Razia and to break the perfect hypocrite life of Sidduiqui who always gives Ayaan lectures.

Asad: I get his pov actually... i mean its pretty reasonable to agree marrying Tanu (remember what he said when he was intoxicated by bhaang?) ...and also once he will find out the truth about her he will back off from the thought of marriage even more. But well i guess then the trac will start where he has to accept his feelings for Zoya, which we all are waiting for 😉

So basically i can actually handle all of that, for the sake of it being a DRAMA-Serial.!

But my issue starts with the Halala and Khula track. Again I think CV's are forcing things in her, I think thats the reason they actually started a Muslim show, to have a new topic. Which is fine for me if they show it properly, cuz if its done tasteful and intensely a triangle like this CAN b really interesting.

In QH there is just no option to make it tasteful at all.

Now before ppl start bashing me 😲 , please let me explain guys.

Opt1: See the thing is that if CV's are planing to show that Ayaan and Zoya are just getting married to fulfill their plans and actually dont have an intimate relationship (no sex) ... after that they get divorced and Ayaan now wants her back, as he has fallen for her. Then there is no need of Halala or Khula at all due to islamic law. Then they can simply re-marry each other and live a happy life.

Opt2: If CV's actually want to show that Ayaan and Zoya fell in love during their marriage and did sleep with each other and then got divorced. Then for sure there has to b a Halala. But also do consider that in that case the second marriage also has to b complete (means they have to have sex) ... and after that tehy can get divorced and Zoya can re-marry her first Husband again (just in case).

= so see if CV's are doing option 1 then all this Halala/Khula stuff is being forced into story just to make it a muslim show, although there is no need of it. With that they loose their complete storyline actually!

if CV's are doing option 2. Then the very first mistake was to make both guys brothers, as this simply can never become tasteful in anyway. It is just beyond acceptance (for me) that one girl actually does get properly get married to two brothers. I mean what is she gets pregnant during all that, will they then have to make an DNA test to find out, which BROTHER is actually the father?????? 🤢

For me this whole Halala track is not working like this. As far as i am aware of islamic law i have pointed out my views, hope none feels offended. But well I am a muslim my self, so i am pretty sure i got the laws right 😳

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cyrine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: muskaan23
ahahaha... no dont worry ur analysis was not bad at all...😉

I think its all a bit complicated, but due to the 'plan' of the CV's ...

See i personally have to admit that i still am not able to get the whole story, as for mw its all very forced. There is no logic behind anything. Don't get me wrong I am definitely watching and also find some scenes quite amusing and all, but i simply have stopped searching for reasons and common sense in it.

But still let me try to share my views with you😉

See I personally think, that if Zoya has been looking out for her father that long and is totally desperate to find him and b near to him. Then there could b created a situation, where she believes that marrying Ayaan is the only way to get near to her father. So i think with that CV's are actually not stepping out of character, as beside being courageous and strong Zoya has also proven that she would go out of her way to get what she wants. And a lot of times takes irrational decisions. So that i kind of can handle, if it is JUST to b near to her father.

Ayaan: oh i totally think he would go for this plan. As much as he is kind hearted he also has proven that he is immature and mostly dos not think about right or wrong or consequences. He simply does what he things is best (mostly for him). Also has he shown that once he is angry or upset he crosses his lines for e.g. calling Asad 'sautela'. So again if a situation is created where Razia is pressurizing him and he actually doesn't want to give Humeira wrong hopes (thts y he would probably try to back off from her and either break her heart than talk things out) ...and on the other hand Zoya wants to enter that house to come closer to Sidduiqi, Ayaan would probably help her (if he knows the truth) to get himself out of Humerias head, to take 'revenge' from Razia and to break the perfect hypocrite life of Sidduiqui who always gives Ayaan lectures.

Asad: I get his pov actually... i mean its pretty reasonable to agree marrying Tanu (remember what he said when he was intoxicated by bhaang?) ...and also once he will find out the truth about her he will back off from the thought of marriage even more. But well i guess then the trac will start where he has to accept his feelings for Zoya, which we all are waiting for 😉

So basically i can actually handle all of that, for the sake of it being a DRAMA-Serial.!

But my issue starts with the Halala and Khula track. Again I think CV's are forcing things in her, I think thats the reason they actually started a Muslim show, to have a new topic. Which is fine for me if they show it properly, cuz if its done tasteful and intensely a triangle like this CAN b really interesting.

In QH there is just no option to make it tasteful at all. 
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Now before ppl start bashing me 😲, please let me explain guys.

Opt1: See the thing is that if CV's are planing to show that Ayaan and Zoya are just getting married to fulfill their plans and actually dont have an intimate relationship (no sex) ... after that they get divorced and Ayaan now wants her back, as he has fallen for her. Then there is no need of Halala or Khula at all due to islamic law. Then they can simply re-marry each other and live a happy life.

Opt2: If CV's actually want to show that Ayaan and Zoya fell in love during their marriage and did sleep with each other and then got divorced. Then for sure there has to b a Halala. But also do consider that in that case the second marriage also has to b complete (means they have to have sex) ... and after that tehy can get divorced and Zoya can re-marry her first Husband again (just in case).

= so see if CV's are doing option 1 then all this Halala/Khula stuff is being forced into story just to make it a muslim show, although there is no need of it. With that they loose their complete storyline actually!

if CV's are doing option 2. Then the very first mistake was to make both guys brothers, as this simply can never become tasteful in anyway. It is just beyond acceptance (for me) that one girl actually does get properly get married to two brothers. I mean what is she gets pregnant during all that, will they then have to make an DNA test to find out, which BROTHER is actually the father?????? 🤢

For me this whole Halala track is not working like this. As far as i am aware of islamic law i have pointed out my views, hope none feels offended. But well I am a muslim my self, so i am pretty sure i got the laws right😳

Awesome reply Muskaan :))
And amen to the last part... I have no problems with a triangle but I find the whole idea of two brothers getting married to zoya utterly disgusting and it does not matter in what order the marriages take place or whether the marriages were consummated or not. Cvs can introduce Halala or khula track for what I care as I know that in the end it will only be Asya. But my problem is the relation of the two husbands of zoya... asad and Ayaan share a very pure relation, yes Ayaan is quite impulsive at times but then again there is no girl involved so they can catch up again. Also zoya can be impulsive but I doubt that she would agree to a marriage with Ayaan only for the sake of being in their house... especially when she have feelings for Asad.
Ayaan is a fool if he agrees to marry zoya only to push Humaira. .. then I will seriously wonder if he even cared for Humaira even as a friend.
If cvs really want a Halala or khula track then they better find someone else becuase asads brother is just not going to work. Ut is amoral, distasteful snd what not and as you say what if she gets pregnant... seriously cvs should let Humaira be with ayaan and find a new entry if they are planning a triangle.

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muskaan23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: cyrine

Awesome reply Muskaan :))
And amen to the last part... I have no problems with a triangle but I find the whole idea of two brothers getting married to zoya utterly disgusting and it does not matter in what order the marriages take place or whether the marriages were consummated or not. Cvs can introduce Halala or khula track for what I care as I know that in the end it will only be Asya. But my problem is the relation of the two husbands of zoya... asad and Ayaan share a very pure relation, yes Ayaan is quite impulsive at times but then again there is no girl involved so they can catch up again. Also zoya can be impulsive but I doubt that she would agree to a marriage with Ayaan only for the sake of being in their house... especially when she have feelings for Asad.
Ayaan is a fool if he agrees to marry zoya only to push Humaira. .. then I will seriously wonder if he even cared for Humaira even as a friend.
If cvs really want a Halala or khula track then they better find someone else becuase asads brother is just not going to work. Ut is amoral, distasteful snd what not and as you say what if she gets pregnant... seriously cvs should let Humaira be with ayaan and find a new entry if they are planning a triangle.

😃😃 thank you 😃

exactly like u say, a triangle is fine and can b done really good. But not in this scenario. Two brothers is simply not working for me, especially those brothers. beside on everything that bothers me with the Halala in the first place i also dont wanna see a later on 'i sacrifice my love for my brother'-track with both brothers actually!!

And you know its not just the pure relationship in between the brothers which makes that difficul. Its also the respect and status of both families. I mean dont get me wrong, i am the last person who cares about what society things and says. But those both families dont look like that, If Asad would b cool about his "izzat" in front of the 'samaaj' he would NEVER EVER marry zoya after tht Ayaan track!!! ... I mean what would 'ppl' say???

"Pehle baap ne maa ko iss family ki wajha se chorra aur Shirin se shaadi karr li, aur abb Asad ne Ayaan ki WIFE se shaadi karr ke badla le liya!!"

"This Khan khandaan is already famous for being badnaam, Baap Beton ne shaadi ko tamasha bana ke rakha hai!!"

How can the guy who does not allow his sister to b friends with girls who wear jeans actually have a 180 change and marry the x-wife of his brother????

The reasons behind the marriage... well as i said i can see Zoya and Ayaan doing such a stupidity, as i seriously dont think any of them is mature enough to think about consequences in the first place.

Of course Zoya would not want to marry Ayaan as long as she has feelings for Asad, but what happens if Asad agrees to marry Tanu first??? ... i mean if Asad openly declares him getting marries with Tanu, i could see Zoya doing something stupid.

And Ayaan being a fool by hurting Humeira??? Sorry to say tht, but see if Ayaan actually does care about Humeira that much he would have thought about her whilst he was creating a big fuss with Razia the last time. I mean all of them were eager to leave the house and blaming Razia (of course for a reason but still), even Nighat was nodding and ready to leave and none for a second thought about Humeria. And of course when the convo in between them when Humeria slapped him. Again we see that once he is angry and becomes stubborn he doesnt care about anyone.

oh n just in case CV's are reading this!!! ... i was wondering what if Razia forces Ayaan to marry Humeira and then he also "marries" ... I dont think they would go so far, but just in case its important to know, that the islamic law does not allow one man being married to two SISTERS at one time!!!! Anyways...

I completely agree with you that they can show some Halala track with anyone else in this whole story but not with those two brothers!! ... tbh i actually think that the story it self could b very interesting even without this Halala track. i mean Siddiqui himself is a 'dushman' of Asad...if u look at it there is scope for so many misunderstanding there. I mean first Asad could help her find out who her father is, dave her from Tanu and Razia, during that they could come much closer and then once they know its Siddiqui he could actually b against him and Zoya could choose to live with Siddiqqui and leave Asad. I mean what awesome track would it be if both of them are on opposite fronts but actually love each other...