the plight of being a fan

I wrote this awhile back...though it's long, I would love to hear what you all think (criticism more than welcome)...hope someone ends up reading it😊 Take Care!

Mili to nahin thi kabhi tumse

Phir bhi chaahne lagi tere chavi se.

Raahein to hardum alag hi thay

Phir bhi pehchaan si hogayi tere jazbe se.

Rishte ka naaya chehra ho tum

Ab tak ke har ehsaas se gehra ho tum.

Tumhara hi naam leke hoon soti

Baatein sunoon jab, vo tumhari hi hoti.

Har awaaz se alag ho tum

Aane se jiske tanhai ho gum.

Ake raaz si hai yeh kashish tumhari

Har saaz mein hai koi bekaraari.

Milo gar tum saansein na ruk jaaye

Aana tumhara saza na ban jaaye.

Baat chah kar bhi jo na kar paaye

Meri haya mujhe na ja tardpaaye.

Gaanein se tumhare sukoon hai chaayi

Sitaara ho shayad jo aasman se na la paayi.

Haqeekat nahin hai tumhare bina

Magar haqeekat mein ho kya, yeh jaanon na.

Asliyat se hai tumhari judaii,

Karo chahai kuch, tere awaaz mein khudaii,

Ho magar insaan khud ko yaad dilaaye,

Meri deewangi tumhe farishta na banaye.

really nice 👏 👏...such a touching words

awesomeu have penned my heart too 👏 👏

So true.
Awsome 1. 👏

Oh, thatz so nice , and penned so well... 😊
Really liked it!!! Very nice... 😊

👏 👏

Looking forward to more posts from ya...