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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res. I have my exam. Will be right back and comment!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: megz10

THIS WAS BLOODYYY AWESOME...I GT BUTTERFLIES IN MY STOMACH!!!!...LOVELY!!!!!๐Ÿ‘

Thank you so much! Means a lot to me๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW IT WAS AWESOME IT WAS SO BEAUTIFULLY EXPLAINED๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘PLZ DO CONTINUE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG!!! they hugged !! <3 beautiful!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have adapted some scenes from the previous episode to write this'Its more like a continuation, but in my own way as this is not what actually is happening in the serial, but my wishful thinking.

Only for you

"Stop it! Leave him!" Kumud bellowed as the mob attacked Saras. Kumud cursed herself for sending Saras out of the house. Hasn't she send him out, this wouldn't have happened. She knew it is now or never. She has to do something for him. She has to do it for him, not just because she cares for him but also to prove him wrong about her. She has always supported truth, and this time also she will stand firm with her decision.

"He didn't do it!" She screeched as she could not get him out of the trouble.

"Do you have any proof?" The village leader questioned her, asking his men to move aside.

"I don't have any proof, but I'm sure he is innocent. He cannot do it" She knelt in front of Saras who was lying on the ground. He lifted his face and looked at her. He could not believe what his eyes saw. How can she trust him? Was she trying to play another prank on him? No, she cannot. He felt the pain within her as their gaze met. He understood the urge in her eyes. He nodded his head assuring her that everything will be alright.

"He has to help the lady to buy a cow. He also has to look after her family" the verdict of the village head brought both Kumud and Saras back to their senses.

Kumud stood still, feeling helpless as the villagers dragged Saras out of the side. She felt her eyes moistened and her vision got blurred as the tears started flowing from her eyes.

"Kumud, let's go inside" her father insisted, lovingly wiping off her tears.

"No papa! I can't leave him suffer alone, it is all because of me" she got hold to her father's arm, refusing to get inside. She has done a mistake by sending Saras out of the house and she is going to correct the mistake by bringing him back. With this determination she turned back and ran out of the house, ignoring the family members asking her to stop.

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Saras was unaware of the heat of the sun while shaping the pottery he tried to make. His white shirt was attached to his body showing his strong abs. It had been more than an hour since he was trying to shape the pottery. He wiped off the sweat on his forehead as he failed to shape the pottery again, leaving a mark of clay on his forehead.

"Oh, no! Again!" he complained to himself and took some more clay and turn on the wheel. Before he could complete a turn he felt that someone has covered him with a shade. He stopped for a while and looked up to see Kumud holding one end of her dhupatta as a shade over him.

"Kumud!" Unable to believe what his eyes saw, he let go off the pottery wheel. She looks like a blooming rose in pink. The blithesome smile that burned him has vanished from her lips. The pain in her eyes made him wanted to pick up and walk away, where no one besides them existed.

"You don't know to make pottery" she asked him, while sitting opposite to him, bringing him back to his senses from his dreamy world. She then took hold of the pottery wheel, gathering the clay and shaping it to make a pot. She moved her hands skillfully, as she finishes making a pot in just few minutes.

"Done!" she exclaimed and smiled at Saras who was mesmerized by her beauty.

"Wow! Beautiful!" He complimented her, expressing what was in his heart. He slowly moved his hand and placed on top of hers, as she started making the second pot. She felt a shock wave ran through her spine with his touch. He entwined his fingers with hers, fixing his gaze at her blushed cheeks. He could not resist as the trails of hair brushing over her cheeks blocked his view like a dark cloud that covered the brightness of the moon. He freed his right hand slowly, and touched her cheek unintentionally, clearing up the way for his hungry eyes.

Edited by -Azuu- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow so cute plz continue 4 2morrows epi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesommme as usual...๐Ÿ˜ƒ continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful!!!! <3 love ur writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธalthough u mentioned,that ur scene doesn't form any continuation with the ongoing scenes in the serial,i found ur scene to be as subtle,thoughtful n poetically prosaic as i find the scenes in the serial itself.the timid little sensations of samud,their hesitations,their longings,inner introspections -u portray them ALL.AND SO WELL.
the way u etched out the last scene,deserves a special mention. i can almost foresee the gentle beginning of a sublime romance. very well done.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
BUT i have a little complain this time i know u DIDN'T leave it as a cliffhanger,but i JUST CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!! ITS TOO GOOD.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
and one thing i wud like,is u must have noticed that there is a kind of passion in saras when it comes to kumud.he HAS to c her face,he HAS make her talk to him.i wud like if u can put in a little more of that side of saras.the possessive ownership husbandly type attitude he has for kumud.i know its xtremely difficult to maintain that combination of soft yet firm,but with an artist of UR caliber,i know it isn't impossible ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pamalo

wow so cute plz continue 4 2morrows epi


Thank you so much, I am planning to write a long scene, but cannot to do for the next epi


Originally posted by: huntinchild

Awesommme as usual...๐Ÿ˜ƒ continue soon

Thank you so much, will try to write soon




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