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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy
Love your writing :-) please pm me when you continue, would love to read more

thanks a lot. Means a lot to me...will add you to the list😊

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Abhinaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Wow !! This is beyond awesome !! 👏👏 I love it !! Thank you so much for the PM dear! 🤗

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: -sweetgal19-
Wow !! This is beyond awesome !! 👏👏 I love it !! Thank you so much for the PM dear! 🤗

🤗thanks a lot! glad you loved it, means a lot to me😛

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zerro

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: hunnybunch

Thank you so much dear! 🤗
I was waiting for your comment :)
I was in a rush, seeing the pots in the precap made me to write this short scene...Next time, hopefully your wish will be fulfilled...I have a scene in my mind, but I want to write a long one this time...😊

ooohhh god,u are actually thinking to write in those lines😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛*faints*.i will wait till eternity,u take ur time *goes back to her dreamland of wishful thinking*

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

based on the precap on 26th March 2013...

Falling in love

Kumud ran towards Ila's house happily as she was permitted to help Saras by all the means. She knew she had no restriction, but she has to be careful with her uncontrollable heart. The pink and orange colored dress she wore made her more radiant beneath the hot sun. She stopped at a distance, to have a glance over the prince of her dreams. Why cannot she be with him? All she wanted to do was to hold him in her arms and protect him against all harms. She is ready to face what ever comes in their way.

"We don't need this!" raged Ila throwing away the two pots, breaking those into pieces. She closed the door right on the face of Saras. Feeling helpless, Saras moved to pick up the broken pieces. He deserved this, or even worse, he thought. He could tolerate everything but Kumud. He cannot bear to see her in front of his eyes, because he was afraid of his feelings for her. Every time he looks into her eyes, his heart starts to race. He cannot think straight. He had been keeping everything within him, but he wanted to tell her that she is special. She has become the reason for his life, giving his heart a reason to beat.

"Ouch!" Saras jumped up with a shudder, as a piece of ceramic injured his finger.

An aaah escaped from Kumud's mouth unexpectedly. Saras turned to find Kumud just behind him. He thought that she was an illusion, but as she took his hand into hers made him knew she was real. He knew her touch. He looked at her and questioned her in a harder tone, "what are you doing?" He was trying to hide his feeling with a calm fade.

"Let me help you"still holding his hand, Kumud responded firmly. She slowly lifted his hand and cleaned the small wound with her dupatta. Her touch was so light and comforting that Saras even forgot to blink his eyes. He was mesmerized by her beauty. The rhythm of her long eyelashes while she she blows softly on his wound. He hated the trails of her obstructing his view every now and then as the wind breezed.

"Why don't you tie your hair?" questioned Saras as her trails bothered him so much. "It would be more beautiful if you tie it" he lifted his free hand and kept her trails aside. She felt that a shock wave ran through her body as his gentle fingers brushed against her already blushed cheeks. She closed her eyes with all her might trying to control her feelings. Every time he gets closer to her, she forgets her promise of not falling for him. Seeing her closed eyes Saras traced a finger from her forehead to the base of her neck. Knowing that he could not control his feelings either, he whispered into her ears"see how beautiful you look now".

" This is my hair, I know what to do with it" knowing that he would never love her, and getting mad at herself for being weak in front of Saras, Kumud almost yelled! Little did she know that what ever he did and said came deep from his heart.

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: zerro

ooohhh god,u are actually thinking to write in those lines😛*faints*.i will wait till eternity,u take ur time *goes back to her dreamland of wishful thinking*

Can only write during the week end, I promise next one will be specially for you...for the time being a small scene is being up...no PM s yet this time

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

wow! Simply wow!

Keep on writing...reading your writing was like watching SaMud...so expressive...would love to read more!

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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

You really have a way with words hun! Wow ! I just loved it <3 Thank you so so much for the link dear !🤗

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Sam

@huntinchild

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Loved the update...Cant wait to read more...It is an amazing piece...😃

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hunnybunch

@hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: -Amrita2010
wow! Simply wow!
Keep on writing...reading your writing was like watching SaMud...so expressive...would love to read more!

🤗

thanks a lot! where have you been all these days?

will try to write more😛

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