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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Thesaurus
wow awesome loved it...superb...

Thanks, glad you loved it😛

Originally posted by: seven_stars
wonderful!!!! <3 love ur writing!

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: mandygill
Awesome! please continue..

Thanks, am trying

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hunnybunch

@hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: zerro
⭐️although u mentioned,that ur scene doesn't form any continuation with the ongoing scenes in the serial,i found ur scene to be as subtle,thoughtful n poetically prosaic as i find the scenes in the serial itself.the timid little sensations of samud,their hesitations,their longings,inner introspections -u portray them ALL.AND SO WELL.
the way u etched out the last scene,deserves a special mention. i can almost foresee the gentle beginning of a sublime romance. very well done.👏
BUT i have a little complain this time i know u DIDN'T leave it as a cliffhanger,but i JUST CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!! ITS TOO GOOD.⭐️
and one thing i wud like,is u must have noticed that there is a kind of passion in saras when it comes to kumud.he HAS to c her face,he HAS make her talk to him.i wud like if u can put in a little more of that side of saras.the possessive ownership husbandly type attitude he has for kumud.i know its xtremely difficult to maintain that combination of soft yet firm,but with an artist of UR caliber,i know it isn't impossible 😳

Thank you so much dear! 🤗

I was waiting for your comment :)

I was in a rush, seeing the pots in the precap made me to write this short scene...Next time, hopefully your wish will be fulfilled...I have a scene in my mind, but I want to write a long one this time...😊

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megz10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

OMG...hw on earth can u wirte so well!!!!...FAB IS THE WRD!!!!👏

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sarada

@Saru...

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Felt as if i was reading a fairy tale dear...wow.🤗

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mysterygurl1427

@mysterygurl1427

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Nice!!! I actually read this Sunday morning, but due to work and errands I finally got the time to type up a comment. First off thank you for a weekend update. It really gives most of us a reason to look forward to the next episode. As I said before the part was awesome. Can't wait for some more :).

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: megz10
OMG...hw on earth can u wirte so well!!!!...FAB IS THE WRD!!!!👏

Thank you so much! means a lot to me

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: saru143
Felt as if i was reading a fairy tale dear...wow.🤗

Thanks 🤗

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hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427
Nice!!! I actually read this Sunday morning, but due to work and errands I finally got the time to type up a comment. First off thank you for a weekend update. It really gives most of us a reason to look forward to the next episode. As I said before the part was awesome. Can't wait for some more :).

Thanks a lot! I'm not very happy about the scene, was in a rush and it was a bit short. Looked forward to see your symbol isms, you express beautifully. Hope you will do once you get a free time, I loved your posts in Geet forum too, but I was a silent member then😆