please read this!! ( sumthin of my own) - Page 6

hey jaanu i love ur story till now its coming out better than some showz on the television i sware

but im a bit confused weren't muskaan and saahil bro and sis?

-luv u hamesha anisha

Hi Everyone!
Glad 2 here ur all enjoing Jaanu's story as much as I am!
Come back Jaanu! U gota carry on with ur story!
Take care in the mean time!!!

hey guys im bak after sucha long time.. i no i no im soo sorry 4 the delay neways story continues....

{scene 24 Tamana's house)

( everyone ( sia, payal, rocky,and naina) ring the doorbell)

T' mom- " Tum sab yaha?"

Payal- " kyun auntie? hum sab yaha nahin asakte? Kya yeh hamara ghar nahin?"

T's mom- ( laughs) " nahin nahin andar aayo! ( stops sia) " sia? Tamana kaha hai? Woh to tumhare saath thi na?"

Sia- ( kinda stunned) " ha woh, phir use kuch kaam tha, woh abhi aati hi hogi" ( jus then the bell rings and its Tamana) " lo woh aagaye" ( sighs with relif)

T' mom- " tamana great tum agayee to phir mujhe kuch kaam hai.. ghar ka kayal rakna mein chalti hoon"

Tamana- " bye mama" ( Tamana enters her living room and sees everyone watching t.v and talking all at once)

Sia- ( grabs tamana's hand) " hey Tamana, mere saath under chalogi, mujhe tumse kuch baat karne hai" (leaves for the kitchen)

Tamana- ( follows Sia, and throws a pillow at payal)

Payal- " eyy loser!!"

Tamana- ( laughs and enters the kitchen) " Sia mujhe pata hai ke tumhe kya baat karni hai. tumhe yahi jaan na hai ke mere aur Rhaul ke beech kya hua? rite?"

Sia- " of course mein tumhari best friend hoon mujhe huck hai jaan na"

Tamana- " to suno" ( recaps whole episode wit rhaul images in mute)

Sia- " accha kiya he deserves this"

Payal- " deserves what?" ( entering)

Sia- ( grabs tamana's hand) " kuch nahin, tumhe har baat jaan ne ki zaroorat nahin"

Payal- " teek hai maat batao lekin kamse kam itni baate to maat suno. Sia tum hamesha aisa karti ho" ( gets upset and leaves)

Tamana- " agar use nahin batna tha to nahin sahi. Lekin sach Sia use itna bura bartav maat karo"

Sia- " use ke liye yahi teek hai" ( leaves)

Tamana- ( sighs and goes back onto the living room to join the others)

Naina- " hey guys kaal humhari Mauritus ki trip hai! Kya tum sab ne packing kar li?"

Tamana- " nahin" ( laughs)

Rocky- " yaar tamana tum hamesha last minute par sub kuch karti ho"

Tamana- " karlongi yaar relax"

Payal- "Im so excited!" ( squeals)

Sia- " ha ( laughs) Pata nahin waha jakar kya mile?"

Tamana- " matlab?"

Sia- " kuch nahin aise hi, ek aajeeb se feeling hai. Anyways guys suno professor saab ne kaha hai ke hame ek accha impression banana hai so idd ke liye saab ladkiyon ko salwaar kameez phena hai." ( eveyone groans)

Tamana- " yaar its not that bad. Sirf bus ride ke liye hi"

Rocky- " ew yaar nahin mein to maar hi jaungi"

Sia- " yaar rocky ek din ki hi baat hai.. its okay"

naina- " accha guys ab hame chalna chaiye bahut packing baki hai"

( everyone leaves)

{ scene 25 the date}

( car horn and muskaan enters the car)

Saahil- " right on time"

Muskaan- ( laughs) " hey yeh to sia ki gadi hai na?"

Saahil - " ha lekin aaj ke din meri hai" ( laughs )

Muskaan- ( laughs) " kaise ho?"

Saahil- " mein teek hoon by the way tum aaj bahut achi lag rahi ho"

Muskaan- " Thanks waise tum bhi bure nahin ho"

( car drives away.. driving sequence...sweet silence and music loving stares)

Saahil- "Yeh lo him art gallery ah gaye." ( gets out and opens muskaan's car door holds his hand out and they both walk up the stairs hand in hand)

( they enter the gallery)

muskaan- ( likes everything alot n is shocked)" Wow Saahil yeh dekho! aur woh!"

Saahil- " ha sab bahut achi hai"

guys i no im leavin in an awkward positon but i hav sumthin 2 do ill finish later jus enjoy this 4 now!! sorry

*~Janu~*

Jaanu you are seriously too good at writing...please keep updating!!!

Take Care,

Simi

That was great (but TOO SHORT).
Hope 2 hear from u very soon. Keep writing!

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