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This is my first ever work on kriyaansh..im new to dis forum! I gave a try on writing sumting on kr cuz im a big fan of theirs...!!!!!plz read nd comment:



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now rey and kria r married ...! today is the most awaited day for kria coz its her b'day...!
it was early morning.., kria got up ,stretching her arms wide ...
she got down from her bed and she opened the curtains to allow the sunshine to come in..
.she went and freshened up and she wore her b'day dress which her mom had given to her...
{guyzz i cant show u the dress coz IF doesn't allow me to...sorry!

then she saw rey who was still sleeping,...n she went near him and gave a peck on his cheecks.she was abt to go wen rey pulled her towards him😊 he pinned some hair of kria to the back of her ear.then:

r:gud mrng baatcutter!aaj toh bohut khush ho? kya baat hai?

k- gud mrng...par aap toh so rahe the na? accha bacchu toh woh natak tha?!!!!

r-haan...sorry !!!! toh batao itna khush kyun ho?

k- woh .. aaj mera birthd... she stopped...coz she wanted rey to wish her without she telling! so she said" woh, woh, jab bhi mein aapke saath hothi toh i'll be happy n u know dat na?

r- accha! ya, i know it..{ note: rey knew dat its kria b'day today... bt he pretends as if he dont know!😉}

r- aaj tum bohut khoobsurat lag rahi ho...{rey said seeing her dress(b'day dress)}

k- accha? thanx!

r- ok kria mein chalta hoon...office jaana hai na. aur aaj mein ghar late aaunga... kyunki aaj meeting hai...

saying dis he went to freshen up...meanwhile kria was thinking:''rey ne toh mujhe wish hi nai kia! shayad baad mein wish karenge. bt, baad mein kun, abhi kyun nai???? ''

kria was a bit angry and she was even waiting rey to wish her...bt our rey didnt wish her...coz he wanted her to see fuming for him...😆 rey got ready and he waved a bye to kria and he went to his office ...!

here kria was really fuming...!!!!!! she thought dat rey might have forgotten her b'day!


precap: kria calls rey thinking dat he'll wish her atleast now...bt bt bt ...will he wish her or make her even more angry????to know plz keep commenting and i know dat dis was not sooo good guyz, bt dis is my first thread so,...! plz guyz keep commenting, ur comments really mean a lot to me! and i'm sure next update will b little bigger and nice:-)


-Reshma!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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and one more thing guys...i'm new to IF so plz do pm me n i've got no friends at all...! i'm really very sad ...read the update given above named KRIYAANSH FOREVER! and comment and pm me ...plz,plz,plz,plz,plz!!!!!!!!! i'm askin to pm me from past 3-4 days bt there's no response, ...
and i know dat the update was not good and very very very short ...bt as i promised u dat next update will be better than dis one ...it's gonna be better...bt guys plz do reply to me n PM me...!
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there was a stupid post posted by me here...just erased it off

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Posted: 12 years ago
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heya nyc update...m so sorry i would have loved 2 pm bt mera comp kharab hain nd its impossible 2 send thru phone so sorry..btw gr8 story do continue soon...wts ur name?..m ishana
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i just read your story it good and pm me when u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ishana, did u read my second part????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cnt find it...posted on a new link?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmm...
nyc one reshma...
loved it ...
rey doing natak 😆😆
good one haa...
bechari kriya😆
surprise b'dae party haa ??

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Posted: 12 years ago
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aur kya kar rhi hai??..
mujhse chat krne k alawa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mmm. well , main meri school frnd ke saath chaat kar rahi hoon...actually in phone... aur tum? shud i call u TUM or AAP coz ur elder dan me

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