#2 FF:Ten things I hate about you (Chapters13-19) - Page 77

Originally posted by: musicfan5

Awesome Update...Loved it...Thanks for the PM...

This update is all about feelings and emotions...realised and unrealised...

Am so glad Khushi told Shrey off...Why did he come to shimla in the first place?😡

Inner turmoil of Khushi beautifully penned...She is confused of her feelings for Arnav...She respects him a lot and is grateful to him...When will she realise her love?

Arnav being egoistical as usual...at least let her talk to you and clear up things... Glad things are cleared up between them that shrey did not stay with khushi...

Looking forward to reading more and for Arnav to keep his promise...😊..plz update soon...

Originally posted by: Swati_

Swats... 😡
This was my reaction when i read that Shrey had entered the story again to trouble Arnav ...but as i read further my expression changed and now it is...🤗...
Missed you Swats...🤗
Sorry for not commenting...busy with my studies..assignments...

Coming to the story...
Awww...my Arnav...🤗
Feeling so bad for him...his reluctance to accept his feelings for her, his fears ,his jealousy, his anguish...everything is making him so vulnerable and confused..i love his character very much...
His sweet gestures for Khushi is making me fall for him more...
I loved the way he behaved coldly with Shrey...

I feel bad for Khushi...her life is so messed up because of her past and present...
I hope she understands her feelings for Arnav soon and gets rid of Shrey...
She needs to move on and i am more than sure that Arnav is going to help her...

You brought my cutie pie NK...awww...how i adore him and his playfulness...
I am so so glad you have focussed on Arnav and his relationship...
In the show too Barun and Karan were adorable as cousins...love them to bits..
His entry has brought many many good memories of him for me...

Have i told you how much i adore Sneha...Khushi is very lucky to have a friend like her..

Coming to Shrey...he is not a bad guy but i cant like him...he troubles Arnav and so his enemy is my enemy too...:P

Swats you write two stories and both of them are so different...thats a very nice quality of a writer...

I miss IPK so so much...:( :( i love Sarun and miss them terribly..
These FF's have a calming effect on me...
So please dont stop writing ever...

Love you..
Take care..

Originally posted by: ranogill

i have read this ff second time...what i feel for khushi i can not describe...i just feel how lucky we are who got loved by their parents and family. ...back to story arnav is lucky even he has lost his parents,he got some kind of family back up...its khushi who is at the cross road what path will she choose ,we are for waiting next update ..waiting for it i feel butterflies in my stomach.

Originally posted by: crazy4ArnavSR

hey...i just finished reading this story..and i like the concept.

the title of the story suggested me otherwise...but ur concept is different in many ways. I like the idea of an orphanage being home to her demons tht u have so intricately instilled into this story.

then...offcourse the unrecognised pull tht both have towards each other, the buliding complex of emotions, the confusion, hurt, care possessiveness...all hv been written well from both ends.

Like...the concept of a boyfriend of Khushi...a quite unusual idea.

sneha is a good friend.

Shrey...well..he is a good chracater too...but tht i can say only from outline. there's a little confusion regarding judgement of his character...

I find it difficult to percieve him as a bad boy..because no incidents have been written so far tht hampers his image...with a slight exception to "sleeping in Khushi's room" epi.

And then...if u wish to keep Shrey in a positive light then...please consider involving a few of his good deeds he did/does for Khushi. In short, right now i find shrey's character as a pendulum...which is dangling between good and bad...but cannot be clearly kept at one side...So please consider bringing out little excerpts on Shrey tht defines his character well to the eye of ur readers.

hey, i know tht is alot i hv been blabbering here about...especially when it's for the first time. I don't mean to inflict any sort of hurt on u in any way through my comments. all tht i intend do is give u some constructive critics for the ff. thnx.

I would really love to follow this tale closely and hence have requested u buddy for same. Thnx agn! :)

long chapter? mujhe hamesha aisa kyu lagta hai ki khatm hogaya kya?? by d end he he..😛

This chapter doesnt have Arnav n Khushi together physically... but wo dono alag thodi na hai!

Loved d way u have portrayed Arnav s struggle with himself...

Firstly Arnav -Sneha convo n their hesitation initially...but when its abt Khushi...There r no conditions to it... there is oly one thing in both their minds.. to see her happy n peace...n they can do anything for it!

u know when sneha asked y is he doin this wid so concern for her n also to judge d situation rightly... i was sayin she is completely Me man!! he he 😆😆...d way she askd was perfect...but d way he answered was more perfect..."I can't rest until and unless she is at peace, which she clearly isn't." Man he loves her! how! n he doesnt even know!

see wat his girl has done to him... d mechanistic distant Arnav Singh Raizada!!... first time ever is worried abt someone hating him..

Its such a hard decision to make for him.. d choice between his own happiness ( to have her wid him) n her happiness ( to have her wid herself).. but until she is at peace...letting go of al her pain... n until she finds herself she cant belong to anyone truely n whole heartedly...So this is absolutely essential!This is perfect way to take this story ahead..

my fav line cud ve been " I can take her hate. I can. " coz it has his resolve to help her hurting himself...his constant struggle...persuation..

but it comes a close second to Nk s line.."What is more important for you Nannav- her hate for you or her being happy?"

very wel put guggu...this line gives out everything wat Arnav is feelin currently...n justifies it.

khushi 's past is related to raizadas?? scared...😕😕

i am excited abt next chap... its pretty challengin n i wanna know how effectively u do it😃😃 i know u wil... just curious how😊

Thank u for d dedication cheapo... u know na wat u mean to me...looots of love🤗❤️