jeannie aur juju os:-a cindrella story (last pt updated/pg 10)

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zabo123

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wow nice update no don't end it can't wait for the last part

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Posted: 12 years ago

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V good keep it up n I can't wait 4 the last part frnd

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Posted: 12 years ago

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N 1 small favour if u don't feel bad whenever u post any jaj os can pm me u do it if n only u don't mind it . Plz

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Posted: 12 years ago

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when ur going 2 post the last part 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hey, update the last pt soon,
nice story

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

even the real cindrella story which i read in my childhood was not so magical and so lovely concepted as this one 😛 😳

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Achulovesrain

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hai guys, this is the last part of this cindrella story. i hope that u guys like my story. so here is the last pt. and pls comment all ur opinion & hit like button.

PART 7 / LAST PART
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Party
vicky : ladies & jentlemen , hope everybody enjoyed it very well. Now its dinner time. But before that i want to tell u something. I am going to start a new life with this new year.
Everyone listned him very carefully. Giaa is vety excited to hear him. Jeannies eyes is filled with tears. bcoz her go back time is very close.
vicky slowly walk towards giaa.
vicky : i didnt realize that iam in love. but iam-in-love. I love a girl. I love her very much. First i thought she is my friend & the feelings is friendship. But i was wrong.
Giaa looked him very surprizngly. Bcoz he came more closer to her. He take her hands into his.
vicky : I LOVE U GIAA. I LOVE U VERY MUCH. I REALIZE IT VERY LATELY. PLS, WILL U MARRY ME?
Giaa cant belive this.
Giaa(herself) : oh, god is it dream or real?
Vicky : Giaa, what happend? r u lost? u didnt hear my question? WILL U MARRY ME?
she cant speak a single word. Bcoz she thought that she is dreaming.
Vicky : what happend giaa? U didnt LOVE me? Then iam really sorry for asking this question to u.
Jeannie understand giaas situation.
jeannie (to giaa) : Giaa, u r not dreaming. Its real. pls gave the answer of his question.
Giaa came back to her sense . she saw that vicky is turn back to go. suddenly giaa catch him by hold his wrist. Vicky turn to face her.Giaa : pls, dont say sorry vicky. when u ask me that question , i thought that iam dreaming. so i cant speak a single word. Iam really sorry for that. AND YES VICKY, I LOVE U , I LOVE U VERY MUCH, AND OFCOURSE , I WILL MARRY U.
Vicky is super happy. He hugged her very tightly.
All people clapped for them. Every body congratulate them for take a good decision. Everyone is very happy except priya.
Jeannie is very happy. Finally she fulfilled her giaas wish.
Thats time came front of them . Suddenly she take the gun & point towards it to giaa. everyone is scread.
Vicky : priya, what r u doing? put it down
Priya : no, i will kill her
Vicky : r u mad? put it down priya...
Priya : no vicky no, i will kill her...
Jeannie(in her thought) : oh, god giaa is in danger. I will never let anything happend to her. I must help her. JEEM BHOOM BHAA...
This time priya is going to pull the trigar of the gun. Vicky is very scread. Giaa closed her eyes. bcoz she thought that she got shoot.
But nothing happen, Priya shocked to see that the triger of the gun is stuck.
Giaa opend her eyes.
Giaa : oh, god...i didnt got shoot...
vicky take a deep breath of relief.
Vicky : secuerity, secuerity...
All the secuerities came there.
vicky : catch her & call the police
secuerities catch priya & goes from there. Giaa understand that she is escaped from death bcoz of jeannie.
Vicky : giaa, r u ok?
Giaa : (crying)
vicky understand that she is afraid so much. vicky hugged her.
Sometimes later, everyone came back to their jolly mood.
Vicky : giaa, u wait here. i will go and take our food here.
Giaa : ok vicky
vicky goes from there.
Giaa looked all of there for jeannie. buy she cant find her. Then she saw that jeannie is standing alone in the terrace. Giaa run towards jeannie &hugged her.
Giaa : thank u jeannie for save me from death.
jeannie : its my duety to protect u . Giaa, i want to say u something.
Jeannies eyes filled with tears.
Gia : jeannie, r u crying? what happend? pls, tell me?
Jeannie : gia, i want to go back my jeannie world.
Gia : What? no chance.
Jeannie : i want to go giaa, i fullfilled ur wish to win the love of vicky. now, i want to go back. its a order from my god. i want to go back.
Giaa : when?
Jeannie : now. this moment
Giaa : no jeannie, u cant leave me. i want u with me. pls, dont go.
Giaa started to cry.
Jeannie : pls giaa, dont cry. i cant see that. u got everything in ur life. so now i want to go. but i will never forget u giaa. i cant forget u. Jeannie controlled her tears. she know that if she cry, giaas heart must broken. So she controlled her tears for giaa. Giaa hugged her very tightly. Jeannie too hugged her back.Some times later they broked the hug.
Jeannie : good bye giaa. We will never meet again. Wish all happy in ur life.pls give me a cute giaa special smile.
Giaa wipes her tears & smiled.
Giaa : good bye jeannie, i will never 4get u.
Slowly, very slowly jeannie vanished from there.
Giaas eyes again filled with tears. Thats time vicky came there.
Vicky : Giaa, what r u doing here alone?
Giaa looked vicky.
vicky : giaa, y r u crying?
Giaa : nothing
vicky thought that she is disturbed about priyas matter.
vicky : just 4get about it giaa.
He hugged her. She too hugged him back.
vicky : our dinner is ready. come
Giaa :vicky, i will come after 2 mints.
vicky : ok
vicky goes from there.
Giaa looked into the sky & said
Giaa : Thank u jeannie for came to my life. And fullfilled my wish. I will never 4get u.
She wipes her tears and goes to the inside of the house.

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how is it guys? u guys like my cindrella story? or is i waste ur time? comment on my story guys.

Edited by silpasivan - 12 years ago