jeannie aur juju os:-a cindrella story (last pt updated/pg 10)

Hai guys, iam new in this jaj forum. Iam a big big big fan of giaa. And i really like her in her jeannie look. But u know guys in our place SAB channel is not available. I really miss this serial. But i dont forget to read written episodes.
Ok guys. This is my first attempt to write a os about jaj. And guys this is completly different from this show. And in my story the main characters is a girl named giaa, a young man named vicky, his gf priya (but vicky dont have any feelings for her) & jeannie. And foregive me 4 my grammer mistakes.

Chapter 1

A small house in a beautiful village. A lovely , bubley , innocent girl lived in this house named giaa. All members of her family like her very much & all the people of village too. She has a pure heart. And she is very happy to help others. She is fall in love on her neighbour named vicky. Bur he dont know about her feelings.

One day, morning
Giaa is going to her morning walk.
Vicky:-good morning giaa
Giaa(she is very happy to seeing vicky) 😛:-good morning vicky. How r u?
Vicky:-iam fine. Can i join with u in morning walk?
Giaa(she is super happy):-ofcourse
They continued their walking. Suddenly a stone hit giaas leg. She is going to fall. But vicky hold her on her waist & save her from falling.
Giaa:- 😳
Vicky:- r u ok?
Giaa:-yes, thank u
Vicky:-i think v want to go back
Giaa:-yes
She trying to walk. But she cant. Vicky carry her in his arms. Giaa looked him surprizingly.

Ok guys here it is . U guys like it? Please tell me. Can i continue? Please comment. If u guys dont like tell me that, i dont continue this.
Bye...bye...guys

How dare you not write further after such a nice start & keeping us glued to it...😡

a hearty welcome to the forum dear and coming to your os it is a beautiful start . fantastcic job please do continue.

very nice
pls do continue

Amazing start cant wait for the next part :)

Very nice start 😊
plz continue soon

Heyyy plz plz continue shilpa ji

Welcome dear...its vry nice plz continue it.

Hai guys,
Iam here to say sorry guys.
bcoz i cant update part2 now. 😭
Bcoz my university exam is on going. So i cant .
Guys but i must continue after two weeks. Now i want to concentrate on my stodies.
Forgive me guys.

all the best silpa . will wait for your next part